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It was something created from her environment.
 
It was something created from her environment.
   
Being born into the martial arts family of the Tachibana style, Tomoe had devoted most of her childhood days training to succeed in the family’s name. Fortunately she was blessed with the talent for martial arts, and the tough training certainly bore fruit even though it was little by little.
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Being born in the martial family of the Tachibana style, Tomoe had devoted most of her childhood days training to succeed in the family’s name. Fortunately she was blessed with the talent for martial arts, and the tough training certainly bore fruit even though it was little by little.
   
 
However, that became Tomoe’s misfortune. The training of the Tachibana style was to give girls strength.... strength that would make males the same age as them run away barefooted.
 
However, that became Tomoe’s misfortune. The training of the Tachibana style was to give girls strength.... strength that would make males the same age as them run away barefooted.
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Strength was simply something standard to males-----especially teenagers.
 
Strength was simply something standard to males-----especially teenagers.
   
The fact of having a girl stronger than them made the teenage males around Tomoe have stubborn hearts. It was so severe that not even one boy could tell their feelings to her even though they had favorable intentions towards her.
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The fact of having a girl stronger than them made the teenage males around Tomoe have stubborn hearts. It was so severe that not even one person could tell their feelings to her even though they had favorable intentions towards the girl.
   
If any one of them had been honest, then Tomoe might have been able to discover love.
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If any one of them was honest, then Tomoe might have been able to discover love.
   
………………Judging from the point of others telling their feelings, there were several times she got letters and chocolates from other girls, but that only made her confused.
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………………Judging from the point of telling their feelings, there were several times she got letters and chocolates from other girls and that made her confused.
   
 
Anyways-------as a result of being born into the environment she was raised in, and with that talent, Tomoe grew up without knowing about love. Different from Miyabi, one of the reasons was that she had no chance to touch any works that made her yearn for love.
 
Anyways-------as a result of being born into the environment she was raised in, and with that talent, Tomoe grew up without knowing about love. Different from Miyabi, one of the reasons was that she had no chance to touch any works that made her yearn for love.
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Even though it was not like she fell in love, it was just strong enough to show concern over the boy unconsciously.
 
Even though it was not like she fell in love, it was just strong enough to show concern over the boy unconsciously.
   
It was still a small feeling. Her chest rustled the moment she saw him getting kissed, and she crushed the chance to notice this feeling by shouting about how shameless it was------which was done from beyond her senses.
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That was still a small feeling. Her chest rustled the moment she saw him getting kissed, and she crushed the chance to notice this feeling by shouting about how shameless it was------which was done from outside her senses.
   
 
Even so her story did not stop and still continues on.
 
Even so her story did not stop and still continues on.
   
Gradually but certainly, she was starting to be attracted to the boy without noticing it.
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Gradually but certainly, she was starting to get attracted to the boy without noticing it.
   
   
   
   
After a few days passed, the boy------Kokonoe Tooru got discharged from the hospital and was returned back to the girls.
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After a few days passed, the boy------Kokonoe Tooru got discharged and was returned back to the girls.
   
   
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“Eh……Ah, you are going with Tomoe-chan tomorrow morning………..?”
 
“Eh……Ah, you are going with Tomoe-chan tomorrow morning………..?”
   
What Tooru had said was, that he would most likely not join her in morning runs for a while because he was going to learn martial arts from Tomoe starting tomorrow morning.
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What Tooru was saying was, that he would most likely not show his face for the morning runs for a while because he was going to learn martial arts from Tomoe starting tomorrow morning.
   
 
“Sorry. We promised to have her teach me once the <<Survive>> ended.”
 
“Sorry. We promised to have her teach me once the <<Survive>> ended.”
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Even though he did not make any promise with Miyabi, Tooru felt a little apologetic to her since he ran with her almost every day.
 
Even though he did not make any promise with Miyabi, Tooru felt a little apologetic to her since he ran with her almost every day.
   
This sudden talk gave Miyabi a shock as she was unconsciously looking forward to running together again starting from tomorrow morning.
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This sudden talk gave Miyabi a shock when she was unconsciously looking forward to running together again starting from tomorrow morning.
   
---But she swung her head to the side in panic when she saw Tooru’s apologetic expression.
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---But, she swung her head to the side in panic when she saw Tooru’s apologetic expression.
   
 
“Th-there is no reason for Tooru-kun to apologize. See, it’s not like we promised to run together………a-and, you would show your face since it’s been a while right? Then, I will run as much as I can and become fast so I can surprise Tooru-kun, fufu.”
 
“Th-there is no reason for Tooru-kun to apologize. See, it’s not like we promised to run together………a-and, you would show your face since it’s been a while right? Then, I will run as much as I can and become fast so I can surprise Tooru-kun, fufu.”
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Miyabi tried her best to smile and Tooru felt saved when he saw that expression.
 
Miyabi tried her best to smile and Tooru felt saved when he saw that expression.
   
“I get it. Alright, I look forward to that day……….. the day Miyabi's lap times are faster than mine.”
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“I get it. Alright, I look forward to that day……….. the day Miyabi's lap times are shorter than mine.”
   
 
“-----E-eeeeeeeeeeeeh!? To-Tooru-kun, don’t make such an unreasonable demand<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>”
 
“-----E-eeeeeeeeeeeeh!? To-Tooru-kun, don’t make such an unreasonable demand<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>”
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The atmosphere flowing between them returned back to the usual lively one.
 
The atmosphere flowing between them returned back to the usual lively one.
   
A while after that Miyabi would send looks towards Tooru, who was having fun talking to his friends, several times during dinner and would make small sighs unconsciously each time.
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After a while from that, Miyabi would send her looks towards Tooru who was having fun talking to his friends several times during dinner and would make small sighs unconsciously each time.
   
 
(I see………..With Tomoe-chan, huh………..)
 
(I see………..With Tomoe-chan, huh………..)
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“St-stop it. It’s true that I am going to be the one guiding, but I am still a novice so I can’t help but feel itchy if I am being called that.”
 
“St-stop it. It’s true that I am going to be the one guiding, but I am still a novice so I can’t help but feel itchy if I am being called that.”
   
Tomoe scratched her cheek while looking embarrassed and troubled because of my joke made toward the Tachibana style.
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Tomoe scratched her cheek while looking embarrassed and troubled, because of my joke made toward the Tachibana style.
   
 
“I’ll say this before we start; the contents I am going to teach you are the basics, so plain and simple training will continue. I am sorry, but please prepare yourself for that. If you want a good sword then forge it from the ore, that is the guiding thought in the Tachibana-----”
 
“I’ll say this before we start; the contents I am going to teach you are the basics, so plain and simple training will continue. I am sorry, but please prepare yourself for that. If you want a good sword then forge it from the ore, that is the guiding thought in the Tachibana-----”
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The guidance for the body movements started. Even though he was confused at first, Tooru immediately made an understanding nod.
 
The guidance for the body movements started. Even though he was confused at first, Tooru immediately made an understanding nod.
   
“------Uuun, I am able to understand the shape but, I have to make my body get familiarized to it in order to use it.”
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“------Uuun, I am able to understand the shape but, I have to make my body get familiarized to it to use it.”
   
 
After he said that, Tomoe made a small smile while looking at Tooru who was repeating the moves he learned seriously while somewhat having fun.
 
After he said that, Tomoe made a small smile while looking at Tooru who was repeating the moves he learned seriously while somewhat having fun.
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(Fufu, Looks like he will progress fast at this pace.)
 
(Fufu, Looks like he will progress fast at this pace.)
   
No matter what skills it may be, it took time for the body to really get it. However that time changes greatly by the enthusiasm of the heart wanting to learn.
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No matter what skills it may be, it took time for the body to really get it. However that time changes greatly by the enthusiasm of the heart of wanting to learn.
   
 
After a while, the guidance for the next technique-----the way of the eight style’s basics started.
 
After a while, the guidance for the next technique-----the way of the eight style’s basics started.
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“And well, this is it. I am saying that I will make a throw here. It’s probably good to add an elbow strike here depending on the situation.”
 
“And well, this is it. I am saying that I will make a throw here. It’s probably good to add an elbow strike here depending on the situation.”
   
“………….This is the move I lost to during the <<Fist practice>> a while ago, but I see now. The connection between attacking and blocking is amazing.”
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“………….This is the move I lost to during the <<Fist practice>> from a while ago. But I see now. The connection between attacking and blocking is amazing.”
   
 
“It’s Ryuusui<ref group ="3a">Flowing water</ref>. Whether it’s the movements, way of performing, or attack, all of it will flow within as one. Okay, let’s try it out. I will bring my fist forward now, so you try doing the same.”
 
“It’s Ryuusui<ref group ="3a">Flowing water</ref>. Whether it’s the movements, way of performing, or attack, all of it will flow within as one. Okay, let’s try it out. I will bring my fist forward now, so you try doing the same.”
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Tooru’s face stiffened.
 
Tooru’s face stiffened.
   
The breasts behind him would touch harder the stronger he pulled and would make him more conscious about it.
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The breast behind him would touch harder the stronger he pulled and would make him more conscious about it.
   
 
(Hu-hurry up and endddddddddd!!)
 
(Hu-hurry up and endddddddddd!!)
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Tooru’s heart got chaotic from the feeling touching his back.
 
Tooru’s heart got chaotic from the feeling touching his back.
   
Tomoe thought something different when she saw Tooru like that.
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Tomoe thought this when she saw Tooru like that.
   
 
(Umu, it’s a good face. The spirit of wanting to acquire this move as fast as possible is being told.)
 
(Umu, it’s a good face. The spirit of wanting to acquire this move as fast as possible is being told.)
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It was Miyabi.
 
It was Miyabi.
   
She would normally be running outside the school in this time slot by now but, she got curious about Tooru and Tomoe today and took up the unfunny action of peeking like this.
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She would normally be running outside the school in this time slot by now but, she got curious about Tooru and Tomoe today and took up an unfunny action of peeking like this.
   
 
(What am I doing…………)
 
(What am I doing…………)
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“-----!!”
 
“-----!!”
   
Suddenly, Tooru hugged Tomoe from the back.
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Suddenly, Tomoe hugged Tooru from the back.
   
---Of course, it was just a demonstration of the combination of the move and the way of performing it and is completely unrelated to the male and female relationship, but Miyabi misunderstood that and took a big breath.
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---Of course, it was just a lecture of the combination of the move and the way of performing it and is completely unrelated to the male and female relationship, but Miyabi misunderstood that and took a big breath.
   
It was only when she saw Tooru and Tomoe’s positions switch and perform the same------the action of repeatedly bringing their body closer and letting go, that she let go of the breath she had sucked in.
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It was only when she saw Tooru and Tomoe’s position switched and performing the same------the action of repeatedly bringing their body closer and letting go, that she let go of the breath she sucked in.
   
 
(O-oh I see………That was training…………)
 
(O-oh I see………That was training…………)
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“How nice…………”
 
“How nice…………”
   
Those were her true thoughts that she had said unconsciously.
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Those were her true thoughts she said unconsciously.
   
It was something pointed to the scene of Tomoe------and Tooru bringing their bodies closer.
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It was something pointed to the scenery of Tomoe------and Tooru bringing their body closer.
   
 
(Eh………?)
 
(Eh………?)
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(Why did I think 'how nice' just now……….?)
 
(Why did I think 'how nice' just now……….?)
   
Miyabi got bewildered at her true thoughts that had come out unconsciously.
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Miyabi got bewildered at her true thoughts that came out unconsciously.
   
 
It was impossible for her senses until now to think that hugging a male was enviable.
 
It was impossible for her senses until now to think that hugging a male was enviable.
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Rather, it was something that was enough to make her get embarrassed and look away when she saw males and females-----couples bringing their bodies closer in the city.
 
Rather, it was something that was enough to make her get embarrassed and look away when she saw males and females-----couples bringing their bodies closer in the city.
   
But even so, Miyabi continuing to wonder why and------the answer came out.
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But even so, Miyabi continuing to think why and------the answer came out.
   
 
The answer was shown from the words she said unconsciously.
 
The answer was shown from the words she said unconsciously.
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She wanted to see his face more.
 
She wanted to see his face more.
   
The embarrassment was enough to make her want to die but, she wanted to run to him and hug him.
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The embarrassment was enough to make her die but, she wanted to run to him and hug him.
   
No matter if Tooru was the first male friend she had gotten close with, there was no way she would hold that kind of emotion towards a friend.
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No matter if Tooru was the first male friend she had got close with, there was no way she would hold that kind of emotion towards a friend.
   
 
Miyabi mumbled this.
 
Miyabi mumbled this.

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