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But Hyoue did not seem to care.
 
But Hyoue did not seem to care.
   
“I will meet up with Ryuuya, so why don't you stay and play with these guys!”
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“I will meet up with Ryuuya, so why don't you stay and play with these guys!”<!----------------------Mark-------------------------->
   
With that, Hyoue mingled into the large group of youma and disappeared.
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Upon saying that, Hyoue mixed into the large group of youma and disappeared.
   
The remaining two people were surrounded by the youma. It seemed like there was no way out of this. Ren became tense from fear.
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The remaining two people were surrounded by the youma. It seemed like there was no way out of this. In fact, Ren’s expression became tense due to fear.
   
“Nii...... Nii-sama...... I shall take care of the ones in the back......”
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“Nii……Nii-sama……I shall take care of those at the back……”
   
“Don't move, I'll take care of them all at once.”
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“Don’t move, I am going to take care of this in one go.”
   
As Kazuma had said, it was something that happened in the blink of an eye. A rapid wind from the skies became a metal hammer and came straight down, smashing into the surface. All of the youma were ripped and crushed by the tremendous force.
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As Kazuma had said, it was something that happened in the blink of an eye. A sped-up wind became a metal hammer and came straight down from the skies high above, smashing onto the surface. Under such tremendous force, all of the youma were ripped and crushed.
   
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(How……How powerful……)
(How...... How powerful......)
 
   
Ren held his breath as he watched it happen. What a scary power. If it was power like that, it was not hard to understand how it had defeated Genma.
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Ren held his breathe as he watched all these happen. What a scary power; if it was this power, it is not hard to understand how Genma was defeated.
   
“What are you waiting for? Quickly, run after that old man!”
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“What are you waiting for? Go after that old man quickly!”
   
Kazuma grabbed Ren, who was still standing shocked, to fly off, but,
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Just as Kazuma grabbed Ren, who was just standing there, in order to fly off,
   
......Ahhh?”
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------Ahhh?”
   
At this, Ren turned back and asked,
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Ren suddenly turned back, and asked.
   
 
“What's wrong?”
 
“What's wrong?”
   
Kazuma hesitated slightly before asking back,
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After Hearing Ren’s question, Kazuma hesitated before asking him back.
   
......Ayano came here too. Can you feel her?”
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------Ayano came here too, can you feel it?”
   
“Huh......? No, nothing.”
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“Huh------ No, nothing.”
   
Ren continued to try to detect a presence...... But he could feel nothing.
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Ren continued to try to detect a presence------ But he could feel nothing.
   
“But, Enjutsushi are not good at detecting presence in the first place......”
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“But, we En-Jutsushis are not good at detecting presence in the first place……”
   
“Not to the extent that you are unable to detect an Enraiha in battle...... Looks like she lost.”
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“But not poor enough that you are unable to detect an Enraiha in battle------ It appears she lost.”
   
 
“How can that be?! Impossible!”
 
“How can that be?! Impossible!”
   
Ren declared instantly. He was absolutely certain.
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Ren declared very directly, his expression shows no doubt.
   
This was a sign of absolute trust. It was impossible for the wielder of Enraiha to lose, just like it was impossible of heaven and earth turning around.
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This was a sign of absolute trust. For the wielder of Enraiha to lose, that is the same as turning heaven and earth around, both are impossible.
   
“If Nee-sama's ki became quiet, then that means Nee-sama has already won. There can be no other possibility!”
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“If nee-sama’s “ki” became quiet that means nee-sama has already won. There can be no other possibility!”
   
“Let's hope so. That would save a lot of effort.”
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“It would be good if that was so. That would save a lot of effort.”
   
Kazuma played along with the confident Ren, and once again picked him up as if he was an item.
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Kazuma played along with the confident Ren, and once again picked him up like an object.
   
“Let's meet up with Ayano first! It'll be troublesome if she dies.”
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“Let’s meet up with Ayano first! It would be troublesome if she died.”
   
 
“Is it okay to not chase after Hyoue?”
 
“Is it okay to not chase after Hyoue?”
   
“We have plenty of chances to kill that old man...... Let's go!”
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“We have plenty of chances to kill that old man------ Let's go!”
   
Kazuma leaped up with that shout.
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Kazuma leaped out with that shout.
   
 
=== Part 3 ===
 
=== Part 3 ===

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