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A scene of two people in a sharp fall. However, Kazuki didn’t regret it at all.
 
A scene of two people in a sharp fall. However, Kazuki didn’t regret it at all.
   
…If he didn’t do this, Koyuki, who currently couldn’t use magic would simply die for sure.
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…If he didn’t do this, Koyuki, who currently couldn’t use magic power would simply die for sure.
   
But as long as the defensive magic power worked, a pure physical impact wouldn’t be a problem. The impact of the landing would be eradicated in its entirety due to the defensive magic’s reality distortion.
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But as long as the defensive magic power worked, a pure physical impact wouldn’t even be a problem. The impact of the landing would be eradicated in its entirety due to the magic power’s reality distortion.
   
 
That was why setting aside his own safety, he embraced Koyuki strongly.
 
That was why setting aside his own safety, he embraced Koyuki strongly.
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He had to turn himself to be the one that was pinned on the bottom side of this free fall without fail.
 
He had to turn himself to be the one that was pinned on the bottom side of this free fall without fail.
   
And then after they continued to fall for several seconds―Kazuki and Koyuki crashed into the bottom of the hole.
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And then after they continued to fall for several seconds―Kazuki and Koyuki crashed at the bottom of the hole.
   
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Large blue magic power shined, but the lack of pain that he felt was a normal matter.
 
   
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A large blue magic power shined. But the lack of pain that he felt was a normal matter.
The defensive magic power was unperturbed against a mere physical impact that didn’t itself contain magical power. Without a doubt, this was the reason conventional weapons of this era were powerless.
 
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The defensive magic power was unperturbed against a mere physical impact that didn’t contain magic power. Without a doubt, this was the reason scientific weapons of this era were powerless.
   
 
“Hiakari-san, are you okay?”
 
“Hiakari-san, are you okay?”
   
Kazuki had embraced Koyuki so tightly that he couldn’t feel his own arms.
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Kazuki had embraced Koyuki so tightly he couldn’t feel his own arms.
   
 
“H, here is…?”
 
“H, here is…?”
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“…Was Kazuki the one who saved me…?”
 
“…Was Kazuki the one who saved me…?”
   
While confirming nervously with an upward glance, a heart mark flew from her chest.
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While confirming nervously with upward glance, a heart mark flew from her chest.
   
 
Kazuki continued to embrace Koyuki tightly just like that. They fell into silence together with their bodies laying against each other.
 
Kazuki continued to embrace Koyuki tightly just like that. They fell into silence together with their bodies laying against each other.
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“U, uhmm, I’m fine already so can you release me?”
 
“U, uhmm, I’m fine already so can you release me?”
   
“I also want to do that, but…because I hugged you too tightly before, my arms are numb and can't be moved.”
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“I also want to do so, but…because I hugged you too tightly before, my arms are numb and cannot be moved.”
   
 
Though of course he didn’t use Enchant Aura, so he didn’t embrace her so strongly that her delicate body would be crushed. But because he felt a strong nervousness in their fall, his muscles had stiffened too much.
 
Though of course he didn’t use Enchant Aura, so he didn’t embrace her so strongly that her delicate body would be crushed. But because he felt a strong nervousness in their fall, his muscles had stiffened too much.
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“It’s not a lie. Hiakari-san is cute, so no matter what kind of man it is, when embracing Hiakari-san because of an act of god like this, of course he would get excited without fail.”
 
“It’s not a lie. Hiakari-san is cute, so no matter what kind of man it is, when embracing Hiakari-san because of an act of god like this, of course he would get excited without fail.”
   
“What kind of stupid things are you saying with a serious face like that!? Anyway, can you just loosen your arm already!?”
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“What kind of stupid things are you saying with a serious face like that!? Anyway, can you just slacken your arm loose!?”
   
 
Koyuki said with a troubled face, so Kazuki felt a little mischievous.
 
Koyuki said with a troubled face, so Kazuki felt a little mischievous.
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While Koyuki raised her body slowly, she watched Kazuki resentfully with some heat still left behind on her cheeks.
 
While Koyuki raised her body slowly, she watched Kazuki resentfully with some heat still left behind on her cheeks.
   
“…Recently, you have had no hesitation about toying around with me, haven’t you? For that reason you are telling lies without even batting an eye. Are you misunderstanding me as a certain fumbling character?”
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“…Recently, you have had no hesitation about toying around with me, haven’t you? For that reason you are telling lies without even batting an eyelid. Are you misunderstanding me as a certain fumbling character?”
   
 
“I want to see Hiakari-san’s various faces even against my better judgment.”
 
“I want to see Hiakari-san’s various faces even against my better judgment.”
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Koyuki’s expression clouded gloomily.
 
Koyuki’s expression clouded gloomily.
   
“…Yes. Somehow I cannot knead strong magic power very well right now. I can barely perform Access, but standard magic and chanting Summoning Magic are…”
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“…Yes. Somehow I cannot knead strong magic power very well right now. I can barely perform the Access, but standard magic and chanting Summoning Magic are…”
   
 
When he watched her carefully, her Magic Dress was also different than the usual.
 
When he watched her carefully, her Magic Dress was also different than the usual.
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“I think it was from when I woke up from the magic intoxication.”
 
“I think it was from when I woke up from the magic intoxication.”
   
When he thought about it, as expected, perhaps the origin was from that time. Magic intoxication induced a change in the state of the heart. After collapsing for two days from magic intoxication, it wasn't strange that there was some kind of after-effect that was still left behind.
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When he thought about it, as expected, perhaps the origin was from that time. Magic intoxication induced a change in the state of the heart. After collapsing for two days from magic intoxication, it was not strange that there was some kind of after-effect that was still left behind.
   
 
Everything would be fine if this was only temporary like someone who was just half awake, but….
 
Everything would be fine if this was only temporary like someone who was just half awake, but….
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“Even when I cleaned my body, I couldn’t use magic skillfully, at that time I noticed the abnormality, but….”
 
“Even when I cleaned my body, I couldn’t use magic skillfully, at that time I noticed the abnormality, but….”
   
“If you noticed it, why were you accompanying us until now then?”
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“If you noticed it, why were you accompanying us until here then?”
   
Kazuki didn’t intend to criticize her, but Koyuki’s shoulders jolted in shock, her gaze turned away like she was trying to find an escape.
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Kazuki didn’t intend to criticize her, but Koyuki’s shoulders jolted in shock, her gaze turned astray like she was trying to find an escape.
   
 
―There was no way to escape.
 
―There was no way to escape.
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She recognized her own careless action, and that she couldn’t avoid facing Kazuki.
 
She recognized her own careless action, and that she couldn’t avoid facing Kazuki.
   
“…I cannot, I, who is an elf couldn’t, couldn’t come to believe that I could not use magic. I, whose only worth was just my magic…to not be able to use magic and become useless in battle, that….”
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“…I cannot, I who is an elf couldn’t, couldn’t come to believe that I could not use magic. I whose only worth was just my magic…to not be able to use magic and become useless in battle, that….”
   
Koyuki who talked while straining her voice continued with “I’m sorry.”
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Koyuki who talked by straining her voice continued with “I’m sorry.”
   
Kazuki thought that he could understand that feeling as well. He also relied on his pride of his kenjutsu. If he lost it out of nowhere, there was no doubt that he would want to run from reality with [I don’t want to believe it]. Then if such an escape became a source of trouble for someone else, for certain he would receive a shock that he could never recover from.
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Kazuki thought that he could understand that feeling as well. He also relied on his pride of his own kenjutsu. If he lost it out of nowhere, there was no doubt that he would want to run from reality with [I don’t want to believe it]. Then if such an escape became a source of trouble for someone else, for certain he would receive a shock that he could never recover from.
   
That was why he mustn’t condemn Koyuki.
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That was why he mustn’t condemn Koyuki. I must protect her till the end!
(I must protect her till the end!)
 
   
“It’s okay Hiakari-san. If this is because of magic intoxication’s influence, then surely this is just temporary. A person’s heart is formless after all, it’s not like the physical body that cannot be healed once it got hurt and wrecked. It only depends on one’s frame of mind, after a little bit of some kind of impetus, it should return back to normal for sure.”
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“It’s okay Hiakari-san. If this is because of magic intoxication’s influence, then surely this is just temporary. A person’s heart is formless after all, it’s not like the flesh body that cannot be healed once it got hurt and wrecked. It only depends on one’s frame of mind, after a little bit of some kind of impetus, it should return back to normal for sure.”
   
 
“…You are not angry?”
 
“…You are not angry?”
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“No such thing, I’m not angry. Just thinking that Hiakari-san wanted to help me, just that feeling of yours is enough to make me extremely happy.”
 
“No such thing, I’m not angry. Just thinking that Hiakari-san wanted to help me, just that feeling of yours is enough to make me extremely happy.”
   
Her sad appearance because of being in the way of others was the proof that she cared about Kazuki. Even more than something like the number of her positivity level, such a nonchalant act and appearance made him far happier.
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Her sad appearance because of being in the way of others was the proof that she cared about Kazuki. Even more than something like the number of her positivity level, such nonchalant act and appearance made him far happier.
   
 
“…Although, we must find some way to escape from here safely somehow.”
 
“…Although, we must find some way to escape from here safely somehow.”
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Koyuki whispered in a subdued tone.
 
Koyuki whispered in a subdued tone.
   
“If I summon a tsunami here and manipulate it…no, the amount of water might not be enough for this depth…”
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“If I summon a tsunami here and manipulate it…no, the amount of the water might not be enough for this depth…”
   
 
Filling this space with ocean water and swimming inside it to rise to the surface, was that what she meant?
 
Filling this space with ocean water and swimming inside it to rise to the surface, was that what she meant?
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“What if I use the same magic and the amount of the water is doubled?”
 
“What if I use the same magic and the amount of the water is doubled?”
   
“Now that you mention it, the ability of Kazuki’s Diva is to copy magic right? However it looks like you are unable to copy my magic. Is there a condition to that ability?”
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“Now that you mention it, the ability of Kazuki’s Diva is copy magic right? However it looks like you are unable to copy my magic. Is there a condition to that ability?”
   
 
It was not exactly copying actually, but he explained it to Koyuki like that before this.
 
It was not exactly copying actually, but he explained it to Koyuki like that before this.
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“Is, is that really true? That kind of stupid ability…”
 
“Is, is that really true? That kind of stupid ability…”
   
“It’s the truth. What do you mean by stupid, it’s not stupid.”
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“It’s the truth for real. What do you mean by stupid, it’s not stupid.”
   
 
At Kazuki’s side, the one who bestowed the aforementioned stupid ability, Leme appeared and talked.
 
At Kazuki’s side, the one who bestowed the aforementioned stupid ability, Leme appeared and talked.
   
“You have heard the story between Leme and Futsunushi no Kami, didn’t you? The story that you haven’t been told is something quite hard to swallow but, Leme is the King of Solomon's 72 Pillars. In the same way Leme is accompanied by 72 Pillars, if Kazuki also makes the contractor of the 72 Pillars accompany him then he would be able to use that ability skillfully.”
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“You have heard the story between Leme and Futsunushi no Kami, didn’t you? The story that you haven’t been told is something quite hard to swallow but, Leme is the King of Solomon 72 Pillar. In the same way Leme is accompanied by 72 Pillar, if Kazuki also makes the contractor of the 72 Pillar accompany him then he would be able to use that ability skillfully.”
   
 
“Accompanied…by that you mean positivity level?”
 
“Accompanied…by that you mean positivity level?”
   
“That’s right, if the King couldn’t get a hold of humans' hearts in his hand, then he wouldn’t be able to use that authority.”
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“That’s right, if the King couldn’t get the hold of human’s hearts in his hand, then he wouldn’t be able to use that authority.”
   
 
Koyuki comprehended the explanation with a complicated expression. Kazuki asked Koyuki once again.
 
Koyuki comprehended the explanation with a complicated expression. Kazuki asked Koyuki once again.
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However Mio and Lotte’s magic were not suited for physical destruction.
 
However Mio and Lotte’s magic were not suited for physical destruction.
   
If they tried to melt the ceiling with magic flame, the large amount of melted concrete from the heat of the magical power wouldn’t have any place to escape and it would pour down on them, washing them away again to the bottom of the hole.
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If they tried to melt the ceiling with magic flame, the large amount of the melted concrete from the heat of the magic power wouldn’t have any place to escape and it would pour down on themselves, washing them away again until the bottom of the hole.
   
 
“If we could climb the hole, we could pulverize something like concrete with Ice Buster.”
 
“If we could climb the hole, we could pulverize something like concrete with Ice Buster.”
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“Using ice to destroy concrete, could it be done? It feels somehow absurd trying to imagine it though.”
 
“Using ice to destroy concrete, could it be done? It feels somehow absurd trying to imagine it though.”
   
“Concrete’s hardness diverged depending on the material used, but it’s around 4 until 5. This unit to measure hardness is called the Mohs’ hardness scale. The hardness of ice at 0 °C is around 1.5, but the more the temperature is lowered, the hardness will increase along with its transparency, at minus 100 °C, the hardness will become more than six times.”
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“Concrete’s hardness diverged depending on the material used, but it’s around 4 until 5. This unit to measure hardness is called Mohs’ hardness. The hardness of ice at 0 °C is around 1.5, but the more the temperature is lowered, the hardness will increase along with its transparency, at minus 100 °C, the hardness will become more than six times.”
   
 
“...Ice is really awesome.”
 
“...Ice is really awesome.”
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Three lights were blinking on top of that three dimensional coordinates. One is himself. Then on the fairly above direction was two lights that were in moving. There was no doubt that these were Mio and Lotte.
 
Three lights were blinking on top of that three dimensional coordinates. One is himself. Then on the fairly above direction was two lights that were in moving. There was no doubt that these were Mio and Lotte.
   
It was not a map of the path of these underground passages. Rather than a map, there were three lights floating inside a cube where he could make a distinction of their position and distance, something like a three dimensional radar.
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It was not a map of the path of these underground passages. Rather than a map, there were three lights floating inside a cube where he could make a distinction of their position and distance, something like a radar.
   
{By the way, this light will only appear when the other party are latently wishing for Kazuki. For example if Amasaki Mio enter a toilet, her state of mind will latently work that she doesn’t want Kazuki to perceive her whereabouts, the link of magic power will be cut off and you will become unable to know where she is. Solomon's 72 Pillars had even taken into consideration the privacy of our contractor, aren’t we really friendly Divas?}
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{By the way, this light will only appear when the other party are latently wishing for Kazuki. For example if Amasaki Mio enter a toilet, her state of mind will latently work that she doesn’t want Kazuki to perceive her whereabouts, the link of magic power will be cut off and you will become unable to know where she is. Solomon 72 Pillar had even taken into consideration the privacy of our contractor, aren’t we a really friendly Diva?}
   
After informing him up to that point, Leme cut off the telepathy.
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After informing him until that point, Leme cut off the telepathy.
   
“…Kazuki, why did you suddenly become quiet?”
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“…Kazuki, why did you suddenly became quiet?”
   
Koyuki asked dishearteningly towards Kazuki who had gone quiet for awhile.
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Koyuki asked dishearteningly towards Kazuki who had gone quiet for fairly long.
   
 
“No, it’s nothing. Leme was telling me various things inside my head. We will go back above for sure, so let’s advance to uncover the secrets of this place!”
 
“No, it’s nothing. Leme was telling me various things inside my head. We will go back above for sure, so let’s advance to uncover the secrets of this place!”
   
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Kazuki stood in front of Koyuki, he advanced ahead while looking around with deep caution.
 
Kazuki stood in front of Koyuki, he advanced ahead while looking around with deep caution.
   
The current Koyuki who couldn’t use magic power was an extremely brittle existence. With only one attack reaching her, she wouldn’t even fall into magic intoxication and might lose her life instantly instead.
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The current Koyuki who couldn’t use magic power was an extremely brittle existence. With only one hit of attack reaching her, she wouldn’t even fall into magic intoxication and might lose her life instantly.
   
The passages of this level were also long and narrow, it was the most suitable place to protect Koyuki while fighting.
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The passage of this level were also long and narrow, it was the most suitable place to protect Koyuki while fighting.
   
 
“…Somehow it feels suffocating here.”
 
“…Somehow it feels suffocating here.”
   
Damp moisture and moldy smells mixed in the air, the air conditioning was not working at all making the air hot and humid. Kazuki glanced back for a second.
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Damp moisture and moldy smell mixed in the air, the air conditioning was not working at all making the air hot and humid. Kazuki glanced back for a second.
   
 
“What is it?”
 
“What is it?”
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“What kind of request?”
 
“What kind of request?”
   
“When we are in a real emergency, please abandon me here. The me right now is just baggage. Someone who cannot be useful in battle has no value whatsoever in being protected.”
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“When we are in a time that is really emergency, please abandon me here. The me right now is just baggage. Someone who cannot be useful in the battle has no value whatsoever in being protected.”
   
 
…Why is she proposing such a self-torturing thing like that for? (self-destructive?)
 
…Why is she proposing such a self-torturing thing like that for? (self-destructive?)
   
“What kind of stupid thing are you saying? I’m not deciding a person’s worth only by how useful they are. Even though Hiakari-san cannot fight, you are still very valuable. I will protect Hiakari-san’s life!”
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“What kind of stupid thing are you saying? I’m not deciding a person’s worth only by how useful they are. Even though Hiakari-san cannot fight, but you are still very valuable. I will protect Hiakari-san’s life!”
   
 
Koyuki made a wondering face from Kazuki’s words.
 
Koyuki made a wondering face from Kazuki’s words.
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“Regarding that, it’s also not good to put yourself on guard too much, let’s just do it naturally. Rather than that, what’s important is to protect Hiakari-san first.”
 
“Regarding that, it’s also not good to put yourself on guard too much, let’s just do it naturally. Rather than that, what’s important is to protect Hiakari-san first.”
   
After we kept walking for a while, the passage divided in two.
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After we kept walking for a while, the passage was divided into two.
   
 
Kazuki peeked out his face from the turning point and examined the situation in the left and right. At that moment, a black shadow leaped out from the corner of passage in an ambush.
 
Kazuki peeked out his face from the turning point and examined the situation in the left and right. At that moment, a black shadow leaped out from the corner of passage in an ambush.
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It resembled an octopus, but it looks slimy in pink color, its size was around the size of one person. It was a disgusting organism that made him feel like he would lose his sanity just by looking at it.
 
It resembled an octopus, but it looks slimy in pink color, its size was around the size of one person. It was a disgusting organism that made him feel like he would lose his sanity just by looking at it.
   
The sliced organism was wriggling about for a while, and then it disappeared by turning into the blue light of magical power.
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The sliced organism was wriggling about for a while, and then it disappeared by turning into blue light of magic power.
   
 
It was a Demon Beast.
 
It was a Demon Beast.
   
“…What kind of Mythology had that kind of Demon Beast, what bad taste. Come out here, the Diva that’s in charge.”
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“…What kind of Mythology had that kind of Demon Beast, what a bad taste. Come out here the Diva that’s in charge.”
   
The things called Demon Beasts came in a large variety, they could discover the source of the Demon Beasts among the numerous Mythologies out there.
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The things called Demon Beast's came in a large variety, they could discover the source of the Demon Beast's among the numerous Mythology out there.
   
But he didn’t know about the existence of such an eerie organism like this in the scope of the Mythologies he had learned.
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But he didn’t know about the existence of such eerie organism like this in the scope of the Mythology he had learned.
   
 
“Cthulhu Mythos…?”
 
“Cthulhu Mythos…?”
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“But I never heard about that kind of Mythology.”
 
“But I never heard about that kind of Mythology.”
   
“As far as my investigation go, there shouldn’t be any confirmation of the sighting of Demon Beasts and Divas that are derived from the Cthulhu Mythos until now.”
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“As far as my investigation go, there shouldn’t be any confirmation of the sighting of Demon Beast's and Divas that are derived from the Cthulhu Mythos until now.”
   
 
“…In short, this place is an extremely rare Haunted Ground?”
 
“…In short, this place is an extremely rare Haunted Ground?”
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Kazuki didn’t understand how to measure the line between a story and Mythology.
 
Kazuki didn’t understand how to measure the line between a story and Mythology.
   
In the first place, the concept of Mythology was still not well-understood. The relation of Demon Beasts and Divas with Mythologies still hadn’t come out of the realm of human’s own convenient hypothesis despite all the research that had been done.
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In the first place, the concept of Mythology was still not well-understood. The relation of Demon Beast's and Diva with Mythology still hadn’t came out of the realm of human’s own convenient hypothesis despite all the research that had been done.
   
 
In this world that had transformed into a place that overturned science, mankind was living while groping around in the dark, being led around by the nose by grand beings of unknown nature.
 
In this world that had transformed into a place that overturned science, mankind was living while groping around in the dark, being led around by the nose by grand beings of unknown nature.
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While they were talking, ‘zururi’, ‘zururi’, they could hear disgusting sounds from both passages that were diverging to the left and right.
 
While they were talking, ‘zururi’, ‘zururi’, they could hear disgusting sounds from both passages that were diverging to the left and right.
   
When they turned their heads to the sounds, the eerie tentacle Demon Beasts were forming a group and crawling their way.
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When they turned their heads to the sounds, the eerie tentacle Demon Beasts were forming a group and crawling towards their way.
   
It was excessively disgusting how the Demon Beasts crawled nearing them in strangely fast movements despite their size.
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It was excessively disgusting how the Demon Beasts crawled nearing them in strangely fast movement despite their size.
   
 
“Hiakari-san, fall back!”
 
“Hiakari-san, fall back!”

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