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"If you have questions, then let us find a different venue for you to ask. However... Those lowly creatures over there need not follow."
 
"If you have questions, then let us find a different venue for you to ask. However... Those lowly creatures over there need not follow."
   
Fergus was surrounded by a simmering aura on the verge of eruption.
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Fergus was surrounded by an simmering aura on the verge of eruption.
   
 
Perhaps due to the power of the mystic eyes, even the surrounding birds began to clamor.
 
Perhaps due to the power of the mystic eyes, even the surrounding birds began to clamor.
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Red eyes and sharp fangs flashed in the dark night like starlight as the newly born or transforming vampires slowly gathered around.
 
Red eyes and sharp fangs flashed in the dark night like starlight as the newly born or transforming vampires slowly gathered around.
   
"To me, this doesn't even count as warm-up exercise... Senpai, would you like to leave first? I'd like to claim all the credit in front of Hi-kun."
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"To me, this doesn't even count as warmup exercise... Senpai, would you like to leave first? I'd like to claim all the credit in front of Hi-kun."
   
 
"Who do you think you're talking to? Do you really think I would fear this kind of fodder?"
 
"Who do you think you're talking to? Do you really think I would fear this kind of fodder?"

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