Editing Talk:Clannad:SEEN4502

I'm from China,and as far as I could see<br>

the 10th line<br>
[<0010> \{Sunohara} "\m{A}, weren't you in bad situation too?"]<br>
could be better translated as <br>
[<0010> \{Sunohara} "\m{A}, weren't you already in bad situation?"]<br>

and the 11th line<br>
[<0011> \{\m{B}} "That's not the case here."]<br>
could be better translated as <br>
[<0011> \{\m{B}} "I have not gone that far yet."]<br>
or something else with the meaning that <br>
"Tomoya think his situation is not so bad as what sunohana's words indicates."<br>

These are opinions from user hkuczc,named Ligueston<br>
who's working on translating seen.txt for Kotomi route.

== for line 36 ==

"Panya-san",cannot understand?<br>
As far as I know, that is just a way that girls' language in Japanese<br>

Maybe just to be cute,they sometimes add "san" to something that is not human<br>
And if you have seen the Animation "Kanon",in which Mai did the game Shiritori (しりとり)<br>
she there always add an "san" to those animals she likes<br>

So it could just be simple translate as "bread window" or something matchs "Panya"

== for line 49 ==

"nii-chan" did mean elder brother<br>
but here that aunt just simply judges that Tomoya is older than Kotomi<br>
and at that time she didn't know Tomoya's name <br>
so in order to be kind, she calls him "nii-chan" from the angle of Kotomi<br>
that is also a way which I sometimes use here in China.<br>

I'm not so good at English,and have not yet reached a good translation,sorry<br>
just try to understand my word and translate yourself.

== for line 52 ==

In my sense,why Tomoya said so is just because he said same word with Kotomi<br>
but the response he got is different,he might just be complaining so<br>

So a translation "Why the reply changed?" may work here.

== for line 94 ==

I suggest watching a little animation of Kanon,which there will be things like this<br>

and I think they are sitting on a carpet,like what they did the first time

== for line 106 ==

their classrooms means the classroomsfor grade 3<br>

because grade 3 is facing a great pressure from the test to go to university,<br>
no one can be too relax in the classroom,as he may disturb others<br>
and grade 2 just get used to the school life and is most active