Editing Talk:Date A Live:Volume 2 Prologue


Putting it simply —— inside the classroom, the other boys were watching him with glares of resentment.

But that wasn't something that was impossible. <!-- Hmm? What is impossible?-->

The fact that he was even able to enjoy the girl's homemade cookies made him the target of jealousy by the other guys.

What's more, right after transferring, (following the rumor) that Yatogami Tohka exploded upwards in the "Girl You Want Most as a Girlfriend" rankings.

Following by the nearest, just beside him his friend Tonomachi Hiroto was giving a hollow expression, [fuck, fuck,FUCCCCCK……….only that dead Itsuka that Itsuka ] was grumbling something under his breath.

The last 2 lines are really hard to understand (specially the last one). May have ago at it again once volume 1 is completed and we know what this rumor is? 

I'm assuming that it should read something like

Walking past nearby, his friend  Tonomachi Hiroto was giving off a grim expression [[fuck, fuck,FUCCCCCK……….die Itsuka die ] and grumbling something under his breath. 

Also

later on you have "Maa, maa" can't that be translated as <now, now> or <dear, dear>?

--[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 16:42, 2 November 2012 (CDT)

I peeked a little into the raws and edited this sentences. About the last one, It should be something like what I edited it into, but if you have better idea feel free to edit it.--[[User:KaprJarda|KaprJarda]] ([[User talk:KaprJarda|talk]]) 17:25, 2 November 2012 (CDT)