Editing Talk:Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 06 Chapter 2


I cant read the raws, so this is merely conjencture

''"You bastard, we asked you to show us the way around, what are you thinking when you are running away?"
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"Because those people asked me to guide them to the ship, and I tried to take them out of the port." ''

This makes no sense in my head for the story, why would Olga show 3 adult man around?

But what if we swap the subject and object?

''You bastard, you asked us to show us the way around, what are you thinking when you are running away?"
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''You bastard, you asked us to show us the way around '''port''', what are you thinking when you are running away?"

It's important part of the orginal sentence. - [[User:Tasear|Tasear]] ([[User talk:Tasear|talk]])


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"Because I asked those people to guide me to the ship, and they tried to take me out of the port.''

This would make more sense to me. Can the translator check again? [[User:Xenocross|Xenocross]] ([[User talk:Xenocross|talk]]) 14:35, 7 May 2013 (CDT)

I think it implies that that the girl was going to be robbed. I am lead to believe so because of the following sentences. The sentence is correct based on this assumption. 

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No offense, but this needs a TLC badly along with an editor proficient in English. Its quality is understandable though, considering Setsuna isn't a native English speaker.

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Need a retranslation for this sentence: "Still, appointing you a foreigner, it is risky and is over with boldness for careful His Majesty to appoint you who are a foreigner." Doesn't make a bunch of sense atm. Then again, a lot of this still doesn't make sense. [[User:Rizo536|Rizo536 - Possibly Editing]] ([[User talk:Rizo536|talk]]) 18:20, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

 "His careful majesty" [[User:Tasear|Tasear]] The adjective should be second.

Did some pretty heavy TLC, please go through what I have done as I may have missed out something while doing TLC since this is the first time I am doing it. Thanks. [[User:Royaloyalz|Royaloyalz]] ([[User talk:Royaloyalz|talk]]) 05:35, 2 December 2013 (CST)