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Katsuragi Keima led the way, and the girl was fidgeting somewhat, and she said with a stiff voice to hide it,
 
Katsuragi Keima led the way, and the girl was fidgeting somewhat, and she said with a stiff voice to hide it,
   
“He, hey, Katsuragi! Where are you bringing me? I, I’ll say these bold words first. I’ll refuse if you want to do anything bold to me! I’ll really refuse you! We have to go in order.
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“He, hey, Katsuragi! Where are you bringing me to? I, I’ll say these bold words first. I’ll refuse if you want to do anything bold to me! I’ll really refuse you! We have to go in order.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Katsuragi Keima sighed loudly.
 
Katsuragi Keima sighed loudly.
   
“I see. Thinking through it carefully… maybe I should have realized it. I thought it through and thought that the girl with a wandering spirit would have some problems. And because of that, I was searching a girl without problems for problems. After clearing the smokescreen, it wasn’t even a dual character.”
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“I see. Thinking through it carefully… maybe I should have realized it. I had a direct thought-through and thought that the girl with a wandering spirit would have some problems. And because of that, I was searching a girl without problems for problems. After clearing the smokescreen, it wasn’t even a dual character.”
   
 
He shrugged his shoulders.
 
He shrugged his shoulders.
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He grimaced.
 
He grimaced.
   
“Elsie, there wouldn't have been this problem if you had followed me after school. I wouldn’t have been bothered by such a low-level trick…well, the reason why I put you in charge of Amami Tooru was because you were the only one who could detect runaway spirits.”
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“Elsie, there wouldn’t be this problem if you had followed me after school. I wouldn’t have been bothered by such a low-level trick…well, the reason why I put you in charge of Amami Tooru was because you’re the only one who could detect runaway spirits.”
   
 
He sighed.
 
He sighed.
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Keima glanced at the girl.
 
Keima glanced at the girl.
   
“Fuu…‘what do you want?’. Actually, that's my line. Well, it doesn’t matter. I can roughly guess why you wanted to do this. So just confess, you’re not Yoshino Asami.”
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“Fuu…‘what do you want?’. Actually, that was my line. Well, it doesn’t matter. I can roughly guess why you wanted to do this. So just confess, you’re not Yoshino Asami.”
   
 
“!”
 
“!”
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“Eh?”
 
“Eh?”
   
“I asked her ‘do you have a twin sister?’. And, the request was ‘don’t tell your sister what I asked you today when you get home, but you can follow whatever else she says’.”
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“I asked her if ‘you had a twin sister?’. Then, it was ‘don’t tell your sister what I asked you today when you got home, but you can follow whatever else she says’.”
   
 
Yoshino Ikumi widened her eyes. Keima then said.
 
Yoshino Ikumi widened her eyes. Keima then said.
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About her sister’s situation.
 
About her sister’s situation.
   
“Onee-chan, she really hates people.”
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“Onee-chan, she really hates humans.”
   
 
She said such a shocking thing so easily, took a deep breath, exhaled greatly, and looked at Keima.
 
She said such a shocking thing so easily, took a deep breath, exhaled greatly, and looked at Keima.
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“I know.”
 
“I know.”
   
“Aren’t you surprised? This onee-chan of mine looks so ‘ordinary’, so approachable, doesn’t have any special characteristics and looks so well-behaved hates others, you know?”
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“Aren’t you surprised? This onee-chan of mine looks so ‘ordinary’, so approachable, doesn’t have any special characteristics and looks so well-behaved hates humans, you know?”
   
 
“Why?”
 
“Why?”
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Keima similarly asked back.
 
Keima similarly asked back.
   
“Is there something to be shocked if she merely hates people? And,”
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“Is there something to be shocked if she merely hates humans? And,”
   
 
He showed a knowledgeable expression as he added,
 
He showed a knowledgeable expression as he added,
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Yoshino Ikumi hurriedly turned to look at Keima.
 
Yoshino Ikumi hurriedly turned to look at Keima.
   
“I guess you can tell from the time you were with me, but I like people! I like being with others! I have lots of friends, I like school, and I’m really happy to talk with Katsuragi-kun now. But,”
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“I guess you can tell from the time you were with me, but I like humans! I like being with humans! I have lots of friends, I like school, and I’m really happy to talk with Katsuragi-kun now. But,”
   
 
She sighed,
 
She sighed,
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Keima remained silent. Yoshino Ikumi continued on,
 
Keima remained silent. Yoshino Ikumi continued on,
   
“But onee-chan, she’s the complete opposite of me. She hates others, hates gatherings, hates being with people, and a school with lots of people is something that depressed her. Interacting with people and being with them would cause her to feel like she’s suffering.
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“But onee-chan, she’s the complete opposite of me. She hates humans, hates gatherings, hates being with people, and a school with lots of people is something that depressed her. Interacting with people and being with them would cause her to feel like she’s suffering.
   
 
Keima thought.
 
Keima thought.
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Yoshino Ikumi laughed stiffly.
 
Yoshino Ikumi laughed stiffly.
   
“That’s right, that’s completely right. Onee-chan joined the tea ceremony club because of this reason. Onee-chan had been worried about her personality and wanted to correct it, correct how she hated others. Thus, she would try to join gatherings, and would even work hard to participate in club activities.
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“That’s right, that’s completely right. Onee-chan joined the tea ceremony club because of this reason. Onee-chan had been worried about her personality and wanted to correct it, correct how she hated humans. Thus, she would try to join gatherings, and would even work hard to participate in club activities.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Yoshino Asami was invited by her younger sister Ikumi, who just returned home.
 
Yoshino Asami was invited by her younger sister Ikumi, who just returned home.
   
“My friends and I will be going to Dean Land tomorrow. You want to come along, onee-chan?”
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“My friends and I will be going to Dean Land tomorrow. You you want to come along, onee-chan?”
   
 
Of course, Yoshino Asami wasn’t really interested. However, the younger sister said,
 
Of course, Yoshino Asami wasn’t really interested. However, the younger sister said,
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“Well, I feel that it’s a good training for you as you try to get along with others well, onee-chan.”
 
“Well, I feel that it’s a good training for you as you try to get along with others well, onee-chan.”
   
Then, she added an ‘and also’ which shook Yoshino Asami’s heart.
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Also, she added a ‘and also’, which shook Yoshino Asami’s heart.
   
 
“Katsuragi-kun’s coming along too, that Katsuragi Keima-kun onee-chan often mentioned.”
 
“Katsuragi-kun’s coming along too, that Katsuragi Keima-kun onee-chan often mentioned.”

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