Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 10 Chapter 1

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I noticed my face heating up because of her words. However, there was something I had to consider carefully before fighting alongside her.
 
I noticed my face heating up because of her words. However, there was something I had to consider carefully before fighting alongside her.
   
"—By the way, Iris, can you still use Catastrophe?"
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"—By the way, can you still use Catastrophe, Iris?"
   
 
Due to getting marked by me and turned into my kind, it was highly likely that her abilities were affected in addition to her body. During the battle against Kraken Zwei, Iris' staff had turned into a part of her body during the dragonification process, even allowing her to produce the "Third Eye."
 
Due to getting marked by me and turned into my kind, it was highly likely that her abilities were affected in addition to her body. During the battle against Kraken Zwei, Iris' staff had turned into a part of her body during the dragonification process, even allowing her to produce the "Third Eye."
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Iris nodded deeply and extended her little finger towards me.
 
Iris nodded deeply and extended her little finger towards me.
   
"...I promise."
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"...Promise."
   
After a moment of hesitation, I entwined my little finger with Iris'.
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After an instant of hesitation, I entwined my little finger with Iris'.
   
 
Optimistic thinking was beyond me. I generally had a tendency to imagine the worst-case scenario. If a situation arose where I had to take a life in order to protect Iris and the others, I did not have the confidence to keep this promise.
 
Optimistic thinking was beyond me. I generally had a tendency to imagine the worst-case scenario. If a situation arose where I had to take a life in order to protect Iris and the others, I did not have the confidence to keep this promise.
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On the other hand, people surely exchanged promises with one another precisely because they lacked confidence.
 
On the other hand, people surely exchanged promises with one another precisely because they lacked confidence.
   
Thinking that, I promised Iris while interlocking our little fingers together.
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Thinking that, I promised Iris while interlocking little fingers with her.
   
"Mononobe, let's give it our best together!"
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"Mononobe, let's do our best together!"
   
 
Iris smiled cheerfully and released her little finger.
 
Iris smiled cheerfully and released her little finger.

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