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Mitsuki replied with some embarrassment. She must be recalling how she had entered conflicts with Lisa many times due to her own obstinate views on the Shinomiya Miyako incident.
 
Mitsuki replied with some embarrassment. She must be recalling how she had entered conflicts with Lisa many times due to her own obstinate views on the Shinomiya Miyako incident.
   
Next, Mitsuki held her hand against her chest with a somewhat weary expression. She was panting heavily, probably exhausted from climbing all these stairs in one go. Upon closer examination, I noticed that the redness of her face was not purely due to embarrassment.
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Next, Mitsuki pressed her hand against her chest with a somewhat weary expression. She was panting heavily, probably exhausted from climbing all these stairs in one go. Upon closer examination, I noticed that the redness of her face was not purely due to embarrassment.
   
 
"Mitsuki, are you okay? Just take a break if you're tired, or..."
 
"Mitsuki, are you okay? Just take a break if you're tired, or..."
   
I stopped mid-sentence and looked at Jeanne Hortensia. Although she was dressed in Midgard's male school uniform like me, Jeanne was genuinely female. Back in NIFL, she belonged to the same unit as me, serving as the sniper due to her rare "eyes" of outstanding talent.
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I stopped mid-sentence and looked at Jeanne Hortensia. Although she was dressed in Midgard's male school uniform like me, she was genuinely female. Back in NIFL, she belonged to the same unit as me, serving as the sniper due to her rare "eyes" of outstanding talent.
   
 
And right now, Jeanne was carrying a purple-haired girl on her back. The girl was named Shion Zwei Shinomiya. As the daughter of the Krakenified Shinomiya Miyako, she currently adored Jeanne as family.
 
And right now, Jeanne was carrying a purple-haired girl on her back. The girl was named Shion Zwei Shinomiya. As the daughter of the Krakenified Shinomiya Miyako, she currently adored Jeanne as family.
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"...Papa?"
 
"...Papa?"
   
Making eye contact with me, Jeanne and Shion tilted their heads in puzzlement. Worried that Shion would experience feelings as my mate, Jeanne had taught Shion that she and I were her family—Still, I had yet to get used to being called "Papa."
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Making eye contact with me, Jeanne and Shion tilted their heads in puzzlement. Worried that Shion would experience feelings as my mate, Jeanne had taught Shion that she and I were her family—However, I still had not gotten used to being called "Papa."
   
 
However, Shion would feel insecure if I were to look troubled, so I tried to smile back at the two of them as naturally as possible.
 
However, Shion would feel insecure if I were to look troubled, so I tried to smile back at the two of them as naturally as possible.
   
"C-C-C-Captain, if you stare at me like this... It would feel a bit..."
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"C-C-C-Captain, if you stare at me like this... It would be a bit..."
   
 
I ended up causing Shion to smile with delight while Jeanne lowered her head, slightly flustered.
 
I ended up causing Shion to smile with delight while Jeanne lowered her head, slightly flustered.

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