Editing User talk:PCMN1331

= Rakudai Kishi v3c3 =

Hello PCMN1331, you've made many changes to Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan volume 3 chapter 3, which I have reverted. This should not be taken as a blanket disapproval of your edits; many of them are good and worthy of inclusion. However, there are also many of them that are not good, and the ones that are good are typically stylistic which do not have much impact on the meaning of the text, while the bad changes often alter the substance of the text. One example of a bad change is your edit of the sentence "Whether you all have good or bad beliefs, it's fine with me either way." to "impressions" instead of "beliefs", which is incorrect because impressions are not synonymous with beliefs, and in the context of Ikki's interrogation the point being made is that his interrogators have already long made up their minds from ulterior motives, not making new impressions about him based on their perceptions of him. Also, I see in your edits a pattern of overuse of commas that leads into unnecessary choppiness and even run-on sentences. Because you've entered many edits at once, untangling the changes to preserve the good stylistic changes is not currently feasible. Not that the style of the chapter cannot be improved, but I am hesitant to allow alterations of a chapter's style that do not add substantial improvement to the text, since consistency in style has its own weight. I recommend discussing changes before making them, so as to not potentially waste your efforts.