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[I have the Staff of Destruction. – Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.]
 
[I have the Staff of Destruction. – Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.]
   
At this point in time, all the teachers at the academy could do was gripe and whine.
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At this point in time, all the teachers at the academy could do was gripe and whine
   
 
"It's that thief who had looted the nobles clean, Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt! How daring of him to target the academy!"
 
"It's that thief who had looted the nobles clean, Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt! How daring of him to target the academy!"
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Mrs. Chevreuse felt anxious. She was supposed to be on duty last night. "But who would steal from the academy?" she thought while sleeping soundly in her own room instead of being next to the vault door like all nobles on watch duty must do.
 
Mrs. Chevreuse felt anxious. She was supposed to be on duty last night. "But who would steal from the academy?" she thought while sleeping soundly in her own room instead of being next to the vault door like all nobles on watch duty must do.
   
<!-- <Shadow Walker13> This line above doesn't make a lot of sense, especially the latter half.
 
 
It seems to imply that she was with the other teachers, thinking while sleeping and is currently asleep, on guard duty, and in her room at the same time. Obviously, her sleeping and being on guard duty was the previous night, but it still leaves the questions:
 
- Did she think the words in quotations, or did she say them aloud?
 
- Was she thinking the part after that instead, and is it supposed to say something like she thought it would be fine if she skipped her duties?
 
 
anyway, I have no idea what it's supposed to be saying, so I'll leave it alone for now. -->
 
 
One of the teachers immediately pointed out and said, "Mrs. Chevreuse! You were supposed to be on duty last night! Am I right?"
 
One of the teachers immediately pointed out and said, "Mrs. Chevreuse! You were supposed to be on duty last night! Am I right?"
   
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"Well then, who were the ones who witnessed the theft?" Osman asked.
 
"Well then, who were the ones who witnessed the theft?" Osman asked.
   
"It was these three," said Mr. Colbert while pointing to the three people behind him.
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"It was these three." said Mr. Colbert while pointing to the three people behind him.
   
 
It was Louise, Kirche and Tabitha. Saito was also present but due to the fact that he was a familiar, he wasn't counted as a "person".
 
It was Louise, Kirche and Tabitha. Saito was also present but due to the fact that he was a familiar, he wasn't counted as a "person".
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"What!?" Mr. Colbert spoke with amazement. "Where did you get this information from Miss Longueville?"
 
"What!?" Mr. Colbert spoke with amazement. "Where did you get this information from Miss Longueville?"
   
"According to the commoners around the area, they saw what seemed to be like a person wearing a black-hooded cloak entering an abandoned house in the nearby forest. I think that the person is most probably Fouquet and that abandoned house is most probably his hideout."
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"According to the commoners around the area, they saw what seemed to be like a person wearing a black hooded cloak entering an abandoned house in the nearby forest. I think that the person is most probably Fouquet and that abandoned house is most probably his hideout."
   
 
Louise upon hearing that exclaimed, "A black hooded cloak? Unmistakable, that must be Fouquet!"
 
Louise upon hearing that exclaimed, "A black hooded cloak? Unmistakable, that must be Fouquet!"
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"We must report this to the Imperial Court right away! We must seek reinforcements from the imperial army!" Mr. Colbert shouted yet again.
 
"We must report this to the Imperial Court right away! We must seek reinforcements from the imperial army!" Mr. Colbert shouted yet again.
   
Old Osman shook his head and stared at Colbert, and with a vigor unfitting for an old man shouted, "You fool! By the time we report this to the imperial court, Fouquet would have gotten away scot-free! Besides, if we can't even handle such a small problem on our own, we're not fit to be called nobles! Since the staff was stolen from the academy, then it's the academy's responsibility to get back the staff ourselves!"
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Old Osman shook his head and stared at Colbert and with a vigor unfitting for an old man shouted, "You fool! By the time we report this to the imperial court, Fouquet would have gotten away scot-free! Besides, if we can't even handle such a small problem on our own, we're not fit to be called nobles! Since the staff was stolen from the academy, then it's the academy's responsibility to get back the staff ourselves!"
   
 
Miss Longueville smiled, as though she was waiting for this answer all along.
 
Miss Longueville smiled, as though she was waiting for this answer all along.
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Old Osman coughed for a while, and then started recruiting volunteers. "Now, we're going to organize a search team to find Fouquet. Those willing to join, please raise up your wands."
 
Old Osman coughed for a while, and then started recruiting volunteers. "Now, we're going to organize a search team to find Fouquet. Those willing to join, please raise up your wands."
   
All of the nobles looked at each other awkwardly, not one raising a wand.
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All of the nobles looked at each other awkwardly, not one raised a wand.
   
 
"No one? That's peculiar. No one wants to be known as the hero who caught Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt?"
 
"No one? That's peculiar. No one wants to be known as the hero who caught Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt?"
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Seeing that Louise had raised her wand, Kirche too raised her wand, with a little reluctance though.
 
Seeing that Louise had raised her wand, Kirche too raised her wand, with a little reluctance though.
   
Mr. Colbert even more surprised, exclaimed, "Miss Zerbst! Aren't you a student too?"
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Mr. Colbert even more surprised, exclaimed; "Miss Zerbst! Aren't you a student too?"
   
 
Kirche replied nonchalantly, "Well, I simply cannot lose to the Vallière family."
 
Kirche replied nonchalantly, "Well, I simply cannot lose to the Vallière family."
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"Ahem!" Clearing his throat, Osman veered his sight clear of Louise and said; "That… Miss Vallière comes from the prestigious Vallière Family, a family renowned for their mages. And… She'll be a promising one in the future… and as for her familiar…"
 
"Ahem!" Clearing his throat, Osman veered his sight clear of Louise and said; "That… Miss Vallière comes from the prestigious Vallière Family, a family renowned for their mages. And… She'll be a promising one in the future… and as for her familiar…"
   
Placing his gaze on Saito, Osman continued saying; "Even though he's a commoner, he has defeated General Gramont's son, Guiche de Gramont in battle." Old Osman thought to himself, ''And if he really is the legendary Gandálfr…'' "Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt should not be a match for him."
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Placing his gaze on Saito, Osman continued saying; "Even though he's a commoner, he has defeated General Gramont's son, Guiche de Gramont in battle." Old Osman thought to himself: and if he really is the legendary Gandálfr… "Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt should not be a match for him."
   
 
Mr. Colbert also enthusiastically added; "Yes! Yes! Because he is the legendary Gand…"
 
Mr. Colbert also enthusiastically added; "Yes! Yes! Because he is the legendary Gand…"
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Kirche asked the silent Longueville who was concentrating on the reins, "Miss Longueville, this type of job could be done by a commoner. Why do you have to do it yourself?"
 
Kirche asked the silent Longueville who was concentrating on the reins, "Miss Longueville, this type of job could be done by a commoner. Why do you have to do it yourself?"
   
Miss Longueville smiled and answered, "It's all right. I'm not a noble anyway."
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Miss Longueville smiled and answered; "It's all right. I'm not a noble anyway."
   
 
Kirche paused for a while, and asked again, "But aren't you Headmaster Osman's secretary?"
 
Kirche paused for a while, and asked again, "But aren't you Headmaster Osman's secretary?"
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But Miss Longueville just smiled at Kirche. It seemed like she did not want to speak anymore.
 
But Miss Longueville just smiled at Kirche. It seemed like she did not want to speak anymore.
   
"Just tell me please, even if it's just a little," Kirche pestered as she began leaning closer to Miss Longueville. Just then she felt someone grabbing her shoulder. It was Louise. Kirche then turned around and said, "What is it that you want, Vallière?"
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"Just tell me please, even if it's just a little." Kirche pestered as she began leaning closer to Miss Longueville. Just then she felt someone grabbing her shoulder. It was Louise. Kirche then turned around and said, "What is it that you want, Vallière?"
   
 
"Forget it. Stop raking up someone's past."
 
"Forget it. Stop raking up someone's past."
   
"Humph, I'm bored, that's why I needed some one to talk to," Kirche replied while placing her hands behind her head and laying against the side of the carriage.
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"Humph, I'm bored, that's why I needed some one to talk to". Kirche replied while placing her hands behind her head and laying against the side of the carriage.
   
 
"I do not know if this applies to your country, but in Tristain, it's a shameful act to force someone to reveal something that he or she does not want to say."
 
"I do not know if this applies to your country, but in Tristain, it's a shameful act to force someone to reveal something that he or she does not want to say."
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Suddenly, it turned dark. The carriage had entered the forest. The darkness and the weird smell present in the forest sent shivers down their spines.
 
Suddenly, it turned dark. The carriage had entered the forest. The darkness and the weird smell present in the forest sent shivers down their spines.
   
"We'll have to walk from here onward," Miss Longueville said. The group then disembarked from the carriage, and proceeded to the small path into the forest.
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"We'll have to walk from here onwards." Miss Longueville said. The group then disembarked from the carriage, and proceeded to the small path into the forest.
   
 
"I'm afraid of the dark and don't like the feeling around here…" Kirche said while wrapping her arms around Saito's.
 
"I'm afraid of the dark and don't like the feeling around here…" Kirche said while wrapping her arms around Saito's.
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Saito, worried about Louise, glanced at her.
 
Saito, worried about Louise, glanced at her.
   
Louise turned her head away. "Humph."
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Louise turned her head away. "Humph"
   
The group reached a clearing in the forest. It was roughly the size of the Vestri Court and in the middle was an abandoned house. The house was built from wood with a corroded stove. Next to it was a completely run-down warehouse.
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The group reached a clearing in the forest. It was roughly the size of the Vestri Court and in the middle was an abandoned house. The house was built from wood with a corroded stove. Next to it was a completely rundown warehouse.
   
 
The group hid behind the bushes and observed the house.
 
The group hid behind the bushes and observed the house.
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The group started discussing, using sticks to draw their battle plan on the ground. They all agreed that ambushing him was the best way. All the better if he was sleeping.
 
The group started discussing, using sticks to draw their battle plan on the ground. They all agreed that ambushing him was the best way. All the better if he was sleeping.
   
Firstly, they would need to scout around the house and find out what is going on inside. After that, if Fouquet was inside, the scout would draw him out, because there was not enough earth inside the house for him to create an earth golem. Once outside, the rest would all cast their magic against him, without letting him have a chance to summon his golem.
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Firstly, they would need to scout around the house and find out what is going on inside. After that, if Fouquet is inside, the scout would draw him out, because there is not enough earth inside the house for him to create an earth golem. Once outside, the rest would all cast their magic against him, without letting him have a chance to summon his golem.
   
 
"So who is going to lure him out?" Saito asked.
 
"So who is going to lure him out?" Saito asked.
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Had he already left this place?
 
Had he already left this place?
   
But their opponent was Fouquet, a Triangle mage. So he could still be hiding inside even though there did not seem to be a hiding place.
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But their opponent was Fouquet, a triangle mage. So he could still be hiding inside even though there did not seem to be a hiding place.
   
 
So Saito decided to call everyone over.
 
So Saito decided to call everyone over.
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Saito's group went into the house and started to look for any clues to Fouquet's whereabouts.
 
Saito's group went into the house and started to look for any clues to Fouquet's whereabouts.
   
Then, Tabitha found inside a box… the Staff of Destruction.
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Then, Tabitha found inside a box… The Staff of Destruction.
   
"The Staff of Destruction," Tabitha said while waving it around.
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"The Staff of Destruction." Tabitha said while waving it around.
   
 
"Isn't this too easy?" Kirche exclaimed.
 
"Isn't this too easy?" Kirche exclaimed.
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Saito looked at the Staff of Destruction and said with astonishment, "Kirche, is this really the Staff of Destruction?"
 
Saito looked at the Staff of Destruction and said with astonishment, "Kirche, is this really the Staff of Destruction?"
   
Kirche nodded and said, "Unmistakably, I saw it once during my tour of the treasure vault."
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Kirche nodded and said, "Unmistakably, I saw it once during my tour of the treasure vault.
   
 
Saito brought the staff closer and examined it closely. "If I'm not wrong this is a …"
 
Saito brought the staff closer and examined it closely. "If I'm not wrong this is a …"
   
Just then, Louise who was standing guard outside gave a chilling shriek. "Ahhhh!"'
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Just then, Louise who was standing guard outside gave a chilling shriek. "Ahhhh!!!"'
   
 
"What happened, Louise?!"
 
"What happened, Louise?!"
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"It's too tough for the few of us!" Kirche shouted.
 
"It's too tough for the few of us!" Kirche shouted.
   
"Retreat," Tabitha said softly.
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"Retreat" Tabitha said softly.
   
 
Kirche and Tabitha went different ways and ran out of the house.
 
Kirche and Tabitha went different ways and ran out of the house.
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"What?"
 
"What?"
   
"When you were badly beaten by Guiche's Valkyries, when you kept standing up and said, ''you did not want to lower your head, and you never will.''"<!-- <Shadow Walker13> Italicized part is a little weird. Is she quoting Saito, or paraphrasing? Either way, it doesn't sound right. -->
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"When you were badly beaten by Guiche's Valkyries, when you kept standing up and said, <u>you did not want to lower your head, and you never will.</u>"
   
 
"Yes… I did say that… but…"
 
"Yes… I did say that… but…"
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Louise saw the golem's foot getting nearer and nearer. She closed her eyes and prepared for the worst.
 
Louise saw the golem's foot getting nearer and nearer. She closed her eyes and prepared for the worst.
   
At that instant, Saito approached her at the speed of a whirlwind, grabbed her and rolled away from the golem's stomp.
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At this instant, Saito approached her at the speed of a whirlwind, grabbed her and rolled away from the golem's stomp.
   
 
Saito gave a slap on Louise's face. Pak!
 
Saito gave a slap on Louise's face. Pak!
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Being constantly called "Zero", being treated like an idiot, no one could take that lying down. He recalled his fight with Guiche. Louise cried that time, too. Even though Louise is stubborn and haughty, in reality she actually hates fighting and she's not good at it either.
 
Being constantly called "Zero", being treated like an idiot, no one could take that lying down. He recalled his fight with Guiche. Louise cried that time, too. Even though Louise is stubborn and haughty, in reality she actually hates fighting and she's not good at it either.
   
She's only a girl…<!-- <Shadow Walker13> Is "She's only a girl" supposed to be Saito's thoughts? --> Louise's beautiful face was now covered in tears, just like a crying child.
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She's only a girl… Louise's beautiful face was now covered in tears, just like a crying child.
   
 
But this was not the time to console her. Saito turned his head over and saw the golem raising its fists, ready to pound them.
 
But this was not the time to console her. Saito turned his head over and saw the golem raising its fists, ready to pound them.
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Tabitha's Wind Dragon landed in front of Saito to help in their escape.
 
Tabitha's Wind Dragon landed in front of Saito to help in their escape.
   
"Get on," Tabitha said.
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"Get on." Tabitha said.
   
 
Saito placed Louise on the dragon's back.
 
Saito placed Louise on the dragon's back.
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Pang! The sword broke from the hilt upon impact.
 
Pang! The sword broke from the hilt upon impact.
   
Saito was stunned. ''Was this sword really made by the famous Germanian Alchemist Lord Shupei? It's totally useless!''
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Saito was stunned. Was this sword really made by the famous Germanian Alchemist Lord Shupei? It's totally useless!
   
 
Without a weapon, all Saito could do was evade the golem's attack.
 
Without a weapon, all Saito could do was evade the golem's attack.
   
Seeing Saito in a pinch, Louise was desperate. Wasn't there anyway to help him? Just then, Louise noticed the Staff of Destruction held by Tabitha.
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Seeing Saito in a pinch, Louise was desperate. Wasn't there anyway to help him? Just then, Louise noticed the "Staff of Destruction" held by Tabitha.
   
 
"Tabitha! Pass that to me!"
 
"Tabitha! Pass that to me!"
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At the same time, Saito saw the Staff of Destruction that Louise was holding.
 
At the same time, Saito saw the Staff of Destruction that Louise was holding.
   
''Looks like Louise doesn't know how to use the staff and is just waving it around…''
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''Looks like Louise did not know how to use the staff and she was just waving it around…''
   
 
Saito rushed towards Louise.
 
Saito rushed towards Louise.
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Saito grabbed hold of the Staff of Destruction, took out the arming handle, opened the rear cover and pulled out and extended the inner tube.
 
Saito grabbed hold of the Staff of Destruction, took out the arming handle, opened the rear cover and pulled out and extended the inner tube.
   
''…Why do I know how to do this?''
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''… Why do I know how to do this?''
   
 
But that was not the time to think.
 
But that was not the time to think.
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Due to the short distance between him and the golem, Saito decided to aim directly at the golem.
 
Due to the short distance between him and the golem, Saito decided to aim directly at the golem.
   
''As the distance is very close, the arming range might not be attained and therefore even if hit directly, it might not explode.''
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''As the distance was very close, the arming range might not be attained and therefore even if hit directly, it might not explode.''
   
''Forget about that, just try it!'' Saito thought while shouting at Louise, "Don't stand behind the staff, there will be a backblast!"
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''Forget about that, just try it!'' Saito thought while shouting at Louise, "Don't stand behind the staff, there will be a back blast!"
   
 
Louise hurriedly moved out of the way.
 
Louise hurriedly moved out of the way.
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What was left, took one last step forward before it finally stopped moving, and knelt down.
 
What was left, took one last step forward before it finally stopped moving, and knelt down.
   
Then slowly from the waist, it crumbled… and returned into what it originally was dirt.
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Then slowly from the waist, it crumbled… and returned into what it originally was dirt.
   
 
Just like last time, the golem was reduced into a mound of earth.
 
Just like last time, the golem was reduced into a mound of earth.
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She shook her head.
 
She shook her head.
   
The four of them started searching the mound of earth for clues. Saito looked at them, and then looked at the Staff of Destruction, thinking to himself, ''Why did this thing appear in this world?''
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The four of them started searching the mound of earth for clues. Saito looked at them, and then looked at the Staff of Destruction, thinking to himself: ''Why did this thing appear in this world?''
   
 
Just as he was thinking, Miss Longueville took the Staff of Destruction away from Saito.
 
Just as he was thinking, Miss Longueville took the Staff of Destruction away from Saito.
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"Yes, I am Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt. The Staff of Destruction is really powerful; it actually can defeat my golem in just one hit!"
 
"Yes, I am Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt. The Staff of Destruction is really powerful; it actually can defeat my golem in just one hit!"
   
Fouquet held the Staff of Destruction on her shoulders like Saito had done just now.
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Fouquet held the Staff of Destruction on her shoulders like Saito did just now.
   
 
Tabitha waved her staff and began chanting.
 
Tabitha waved her staff and began chanting.
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"Why?" Louise asked angrily.
 
"Why?" Louise asked angrily.
   
"Hmm… I'd better explain to you all so you can rest in peace," Fouquet said with a coquettish smile on her face.
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"Hmm… I'd better explain to you all so you can rest in peace." Fouquet said with a coquettish smile on her face.
   
 
"I had gotten hold of the Staff of Destruction, but I did not know how to use it."
 
"I had gotten hold of the Staff of Destruction, but I did not know how to use it."
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"Hmm… So Miss Longueville is Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt… Because she's such a beauty I did not think twice about hiring her as my secretary."
 
"Hmm… So Miss Longueville is Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt… Because she's such a beauty I did not think twice about hiring her as my secretary."
   
"How did you go about hiring her?" Mr. Colbert, who was also present, asked.
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"How did you go about hiring her?" Mr. Colbert who was also present asked.
   
 
"In a tavern. I was a customer while she was a waitress there. Where I slowly caressed her from her hands down to her buttocks…"
 
"In a tavern. I was a customer while she was a waitress there. Where I slowly caressed her from her hands down to her buttocks…"
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Headmaster Osman embarrassingly confessed, "Because she wasn't angry at all after what I did, I asked her whether she wanted to become my secretary or not."
 
Headmaster Osman embarrassingly confessed, "Because she wasn't angry at all after what I did, I asked her whether she wanted to become my secretary or not."
   
"Why?" the bewildered Mr. Colbert continued asking.
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"Why?" The bewildered Mr. Colbert continued asking.
   
 
"Anyways!" Headmaster Osman cried out using vigor unfitting for an old man.
 
"Anyways!" Headmaster Osman cried out using vigor unfitting for an old man.
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Osman started coughing. And said sedately, "And she could use magic, too."
 
Osman started coughing. And said sedately, "And she could use magic, too."
   
"Yeah, magic that could kill," Mr. Colbert mumbled to himself.
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"Yeah, magic that could kill." Mr. Colbert mumbled to himself.
   
 
Headmaster Osman coughed again then told Mr. Colbert in a prudent manner, "Come to think of it, the reason that Fouquet allowed me to touch her all over the place, served me wine happily, and praised that I was handsome man, while I was in the tavern, was just to infiltrate the academy. All those praises were most probably just lies…"
 
Headmaster Osman coughed again then told Mr. Colbert in a prudent manner, "Come to think of it, the reason that Fouquet allowed me to touch her all over the place, served me wine happily, and praised that I was handsome man, while I was in the tavern, was just to infiltrate the academy. All those praises were most probably just lies…"
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Louise stopped and looked at Saito.
 
Louise stopped and looked at Saito.
   
"You go first," Saito told Louise.
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"You go first." Saito told Louise.
   
 
Even though Louise was still worried, she nodded and left the room.
 
Even though Louise was still worried, she nodded and left the room.
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"What did you say?"
 
"What did you say?"
   
"Thirty years ago, while I was strolling inside the forest, I was attacked by a two-headed dragon. The one who saved me was the owner of the Staff of Destruction. He used another Staff of Destruction to kill the two headed dragon and then collapsed. He was already injured at that time. I transported him to the academy and treated his wounds. But to no avail…"
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"Thirty years ago, while I was strolling inside the forest, I was attacked by a two headed dragon. The one who saved me was the owner of the Staff of Destruction. He used another Staff of Destruction to kill the two headed dragon and then collapsed. He was already injured at that time. I transported him to the academy and treated his wounds. But to no avail…"
   
 
"And he died?"
 
"And he died?"
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Headmaster Osman nodded.
 
Headmaster Osman nodded.
   
"I buried the Staff of Destruction that he had used to save me along with him in his grave. The other one I named the Staff of Destruction and kept it inside the vault in order to commemorate my savior…"
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"I buried the Staff of Destruction that he had used to save me along with him in his grave, the other one I named the Staff of Destruction and kept it inside the vault in order to commemorate my savior…"
   
 
Osman gazed far away and said, "While he was resting on the bed till the day he died, he kept saying repeatedly 'Where is this place? I want to go back to my world.' I guess that he must have been from the same world as yours."
 
Osman gazed far away and said, "While he was resting on the bed till the day he died, he kept saying repeatedly 'Where is this place? I want to go back to my world.' I guess that he must have been from the same world as yours."
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"I don't know. Right till the end, I still had no idea how he ended up here."
 
"I don't know. Right till the end, I still had no idea how he ended up here."
   
"Damn it! Just when I thought that I had a clue," Saito lamented. The clue had led him into a dead end. Osman's savior was most probably a soldier of ''that'' country. But how did he end up in this world? Even though Saito wanted to know badly, there was no way to know anymore.
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"Damn it! Just when I thought that I had a clue." Saito lamented. The clue had led him into a dead end. Osman's savior was most probably a soldier of ''that'' country. But how did he end up in this world? Even though Saito wanted to know badly, there was no way to know anymore.
   
Osman held Saito's left hand. "The runes on your hand…"
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Osman held Saito's left hand, "The runes on your hand…"
   
 
"Oh yes. I wanted to ask about that, too. Once the runes glow, I can use any weapon proficiently. Not just swords, even the weapons from my world too…"
 
"Oh yes. I wanted to ask about that, too. Once the runes glow, I can use any weapon proficiently. Not just swords, even the weapons from my world too…"
   
Osman pondered for a moment and said, "…That I know. Those are the runes of 'Gandálfr', the legendary familiar."
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Osman pondered for a moment and said, "…That I know. That is the runes of "Gandálfr", the legendary familiar."
   
 
"The runes of the legendary familiar?"
 
"The runes of the legendary familiar?"
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Saito was confused. "…Then, why am I the legendary familiar?"
 
Saito was confused. "…Then, why am I the legendary familiar?"
   
"I don't know," Osman quickly replied. "I'm sorry. But there is a possibility that the runes of Gandálfr are related to you being transported to this world."
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"I don't know." Osman quickly replied.
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"I'm sorry. But there is a possibility that the runes of Gandálfr are related to you being transported to this world."
   
 
"Haa…" Saito sighed.
 
"Haa…" Saito sighed.
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On top of Alvíss Dining Hall, <!-- <Shadow Walker13> On top of (above) ''the'' Alviss hall, or on top of there ''being'' the Alviss hall? -->there was a great hall. That was where the ball was being held. Saito leaned on the railings of the balcony and looked at the grand reception.
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On top of Alvíss Dining Hall, there was a great hall. That was where the ball was being held. Saito leaned on the railings of the balcony and looked at the grand reception.
   
 
The students and teachers who were dressed grandly gathered around tables filled with exquisite food and chatted amongst themselves. Saito arrived there through a flight of stairs leading up to the balcony. Seeing them, Saito felt that he would not fit in at all and therefore, decided not to enter.
 
The students and teachers who were dressed grandly gathered around tables filled with exquisite food and chatted amongst themselves. Saito arrived there through a flight of stairs leading up to the balcony. Seeing them, Saito felt that he would not fit in at all and therefore, decided not to enter.
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Next to Saito were some food and a bottle of wine that Siesta had brought for him earlier. Saito poured for himself a glass of wine and drank it.
 
Next to Saito were some food and a bottle of wine that Siesta had brought for him earlier. Saito poured for himself a glass of wine and drank it.
   
"Eh, haven't you got a drop too much?" said Derflinger, who was leaning on the balcony worryingly. As the sword that Kirche gave to Saito broke during the ordeal, Saito brought Derflinger for protection. As usual it had a rotten tongue but it still had a happy-go-lucky personality, so having him for company still had its merits.
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"Eh, haven't you got a drop too much?" said Derflinger which was leaning on the balcony worryingly. As the sword that Kirche gave to Saito broke during the ordeal, Saito brought Derflinger for protection. As usual it had a rotten tongue but it still had a happy go lucky personality so having him for company still had its merits.
   
 
"You're noisy. To think that I had found the way to go back home, in the end it's just a dream… can't I drink to drown away my sorrow?"
 
"You're noisy. To think that I had found the way to go back home, in the end it's just a dream… can't I drink to drown away my sorrow?"
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The guards at the door notified everyone on Louise's arrival. "The daughter of Duke of La Vallière, Louise Françoise Le Blanc de La Vallière arrives!"
 
The guards at the door notified everyone on Louise's arrival. "The daughter of Duke of La Vallière, Louise Françoise Le Blanc de La Vallière arrives!"
   
Saito held his breath. Louise was dressed in a white evening gown with her long, strawberry-blonde hair tied up into a pony tail. Her hands were covered by pure white gloves which adorned her grandeur. Her petite face along with her low cut evening gown made her sparkle like a gem.
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Saito held his breath. Louise was dressed in a white evening gown with her long, strawberry blonde hair tied up into a pony tail. Her hands were covered by pure white gloves which adorned her grandeur. Her petite face along with her low cut evening gown made her sparkle like a gem.
   
 
After confirming that the guest had arrived, the musicians started playing music that was extremely soothing to the ears. All around Louise were males that were captivated by Louise's beauty asking for a dance with her. Before this, no one ever realized Louise's beauty and only thought of her as "Louise the Zero." Now, that same group of males were trying to win her heart.
 
After confirming that the guest had arrived, the musicians started playing music that was extremely soothing to the ears. All around Louise were males that were captivated by Louise's beauty asking for a dance with her. Before this, no one ever realized Louise's beauty and only thought of her as "Louise the Zero." Now, that same group of males were trying to win her heart.
   
The nobles started dancing gracefully on the dance floor. Louise turned down everyone's invitation for a dance, saw Saito on the balcony and headed over. Louise stood in front of the slightly drunk Saito and placed her arms on her waist, "Looks like you're enjoying yourself," she said.
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The nobles started dancing gracefully on the dance floor. Louise turned down everyone's invitation for a dance, saw Saito on the balcony and headed over. Louise stood in front of the slightly drunk Saito and placed her arms on her waist, "Looks like you're enjoying yourself" She said.
   
 
"Not really…" Saito moved his gaze away from the dazzling Louise, thinking to himself that it was lucky he had drank some wine, so Louise would not realize that he was blushing.
 
"Not really…" Saito moved his gaze away from the dazzling Louise, thinking to himself that it was lucky he had drank some wine, so Louise would not realize that he was blushing.
   
Derflinger looked at Louise and said, "Haha. Clothes really ''do'' make the man!"
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Derflinger looked at Louise and said, "Haha. Clothes really <u>do</u> make the man!"
   
 
"None of your business." Louise stared at the sword and crossed her arms.
 
"None of your business." Louise stared at the sword and crossed her arms.
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"Aren't you going to dance?" Saito asked while avoiding Louise's gaze.
 
"Aren't you going to dance?" Saito asked while avoiding Louise's gaze.
   
"I have no dance partner," Louise replied.
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"I have no dance partner." Louise replied.
   
 
"Didn't a lot of people ask you for a dance just now?" Saito asked.
 
"Didn't a lot of people ask you for a dance just now?" Saito asked.
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"Huh?"
 
"Huh?"
   
"Even though you're just a familiar, I could make an exception," the blushing Louise said while avoiding Saito's gaze.
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"Even though you're just a familiar, I could make an exception." The blushing Louise said while avoiding Saito's gaze.
   
"Don't you mean 'Could I have this dance?'" Saito said while trying to avoid Louise's gaze too.
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"Don't you mean 'Could I have this dance?'?" Saito said while trying to avoid Louise's gaze too.
   
 
After a moment of silence, Louise sighed.
 
After a moment of silence, Louise sighed.
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Saito, trembling held Louise's hands and together, they walked towards the dance floor.
 
Saito, trembling held Louise's hands and together, they walked towards the dance floor.
   
"I have never danced before," Saito said.
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"I have never danced before." Saito said.
   
 
"Just follow my rhythm," Louise said, and then gently held onto Saito's hand. Saito imitated Louise's actions and followed her rhythm. Louise did not seem to mind Saito's stiff actions at all and concentrated on dancing.
 
"Just follow my rhythm," Louise said, and then gently held onto Saito's hand. Saito imitated Louise's actions and followed her rhythm. Louise did not seem to mind Saito's stiff actions at all and concentrated on dancing.
"Saito, I believe you now," she said.
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"Saito, I believe you now," She said.
 
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"You're right…" Louise muttered to herself then continued dancing.
 
"You're right…" Louise muttered to herself then continued dancing.
   
After that, Louise was still blushing and did not dare look at Saito. "Thank you," she abruptly uttered.
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After that, Louise was still blushing and did not dare look at Saito. "Thank you." She abruptly uttered.
   
 
Hearing that, Saito was puzzled. Why is she acting so funny today?
 
Hearing that, Saito was puzzled. Why is she acting so funny today?
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Looking at his partner dancing with his master, "A familiar dancing with his Master? That's the first time I've seen this happening!"
 
Looking at his partner dancing with his master, "A familiar dancing with his Master? That's the first time I've seen this happening!"
   
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