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===Chapter Nine: The Final Battle===
 
===Chapter Nine: The Final Battle===
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Wardes, after telling Louise that it was “Time to do the wedding now”, put on a bridal veil borrowed from Albion's royal family on Louise’s head. The veil was nicely made, and the flowers, that were eternally fresh due to magic, made it look indescribably beautiful.
 
Wardes, after telling Louise that it was “Time to do the wedding now”, put on a bridal veil borrowed from Albion's royal family on Louise’s head. The veil was nicely made, and the flowers, that were eternally fresh due to magic, made it look indescribably beautiful.
   
Then, Wardes removed Louise’s black mantle and replaced it with a white one, that was also borrowed from Albion's royal family. Only brides were allowed to wear it, as it was the mantle of a virgin.
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Then, Wardes removed Louise’s black mantle and replaced it with a white one, that was also borrowed from Albion's royal family. Only brides were allowed to wear it, as it was a mantle of a virgin.
   
 
However, even while being dressed up by Wardes' hands, Louise was still unresponsive. But Wardes understood Louise's mood as a sign of her affirmative will.
 
However, even while being dressed up by Wardes' hands, Louise was still unresponsive. But Wardes understood Louise's mood as a sign of her affirmative will.
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Wales smiled, while talking.
 
Wales smiled, while talking.
   
“Oh dear, we still have to hold to the etiquette. Doing this would have meaning only if we are to follow etiquette. Then, let me repeat. Do you take this man as your husband, and swear to respect and love him in the name of the Founder Brimir…”
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“Oh dear, we still have to hold the etiquette. Doing this would have meaning only if we are to follow etiquette. Then, let me repeat. Do you take this man as your husband, and swear to respect and love him in the name of the Founder Brimir…”
   
 
Louise realized. She shouldn’t hesitate with the answer, waiting for someone to tell her what to do.
 
Louise realized. She shouldn’t hesitate with the answer, waiting for someone to tell her what to do.
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Two people suspiciously looked into Louise’s face. She looked at Wardes with a sad expression on her face and once again shook her head.
 
Two people suspiciously looked into Louise’s face. She looked at Wardes with a sad expression on her face and once again shook her head.
   
“By all means, Louise. Are you feeling poorly?”
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“By all means, Louise. Are you feeling bad?”
   
 
“No, that’s not it. I am sorry…”
 
“No, that’s not it. I am sorry…”
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Wales looked doubtful at the sudden change of events.
 
Wales looked doubtful at the sudden change of events.
   
“Bride, is this marriage not what you want?”
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“Bride, this is not the marriage you want?”
   
 
"Yes, that’s how it is. I want to apologize to both of you, for my rudeness. It was a painful decision to make, but I do not want to marry.”
 
"Yes, that’s how it is. I want to apologize to both of you, for my rudeness. It was a painful decision to make, but I do not want to marry.”
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An angry red blush quickly spread on Wardes face. Wales turned to him and said in an embarrassed, doubtful and regretful voice.
 
An angry red blush quickly spread on Wardes face. Wales turned to him and said in an embarrassed, doubtful and regretful voice.
   
"Viscount, I am terribly sorry, but the bride doesn’t wish for this ceremony to continue.”
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"Viscount, I am terribly sorry, but the bride doesn’t want for this ceremony to continue.”
   
 
However, Wardes didn’t pay any attention to Wales, and took Louise's hand.
 
However, Wardes didn’t pay any attention to Wales, and took Louise's hand.
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“Maybe, this is Louise’s view.” Saito said.
 
“Maybe, this is Louise’s view.” Saito said.
   
Now he recalled what Louise said some time ago. “A familiar is the eyes and ears of its master, that’s their ability.”
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Now he recalled what Louise said some time age. “A familiar is the eyes and ears of its master, that’s their ability.”
   
 
''However, Louise said she couldn't see anything through my eyes... It must be, there must be cases when the rules are reversed.''
 
''However, Louise said she couldn't see anything through my eyes... It must be, there must be cases when the rules are reversed.''
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Louise raged. Wales put a hand on Wardes' shoulder, trying to pull him away, but Wardes pushed Wales instead, who fell on the ground.
 
Louise raged. Wales put a hand on Wardes' shoulder, trying to pull him away, but Wardes pushed Wales instead, who fell on the ground.
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Wales face turned red, and, after standing up again, he pulled out his cane.
 
Wales face turned red, and, after standing up again, he pulled out his cane.
   
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Louise tried to duck when Wardes moved the cane, however his spell still hit her with ease, throwing her to the floor.
 
Louise tried to duck when Wardes moved the cane, however his spell still hit her with ease, throwing her to the floor.
   
“Help...
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“Help...
   
 
Louise’s face turned pale. She tried to stand up, but her legs stopped obeying her.
 
Louise’s face turned pale. She tried to stand up, but her legs stopped obeying her.
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“No…Help…”
 
“No…Help…”
   
“Even the smallest bird can’t hear you, it seems like you will have to bow your head in defeat, huh, Louise?
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“Even the smallest bird can’t hear you, it seems like you will have to bow your head in defeat, huh, Louise?
   
 
She was thrown against the wall and left lying on the floor, groaning in pain. Tears started rolling down her face.
 
She was thrown against the wall and left lying on the floor, groaning in pain. Tears started rolling down her face.
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If even Saito’s arm was scorched by this blitz spell, there was no chance of survival if she was hit by it directly.
 
If even Saito’s arm was scorched by this blitz spell, there was no chance of survival if she was hit by it directly.
   
From shock her breath was rough and her whole body was in pain. Louise, scared like a child, cried
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From shock her breath was rough and her whole body was in pain. Louise, scared like a child, cried
   
 
“Saito! Help!”
 
“Saito! Help!”
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Wardes muttered.
 
Wardes muttered.
   
After breaking the wall, Saito jumped in with Derflinger in his hand and stopped Wardes' cane.
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After breaking the wall, Saito jumped in with Derflinger in his hand stopped Wardes' cane.
   
 
"You…" Saito swung the sword sidewise. Wardes dodged it by jumping back.
 
"You…" Saito swung the sword sidewise. Wardes dodged it by jumping back.
   
Accidentally, Saito saw Louise out of the corner of his eye.
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Accidentally, Saito saw Louise with the corner of his eye.
   
After screaming her last words, Louise had fainted and hadn't moved since.
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After screaming her last words, Louise fainted and hadn't moved since.
   
 
With raging anger in his eyes, Saito glared at Wardes. Lust for killing was boiling in his body. Saito groaned while biting his lip hard.
 
With raging anger in his eyes, Saito glared at Wardes. Lust for killing was boiling in his body. Saito groaned while biting his lip hard.
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“What!”
 
“What!”
   
“No, from my older times, the hand that held me. Gandálfr. But I forgot. It was 6000 years ago, old times.”
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“No, from my older times, the hand that held me. Gandálfr. But I forgot. It was 600 years ago, old times.”
   
 
“Don’t talk nonsense!”
 
“Don’t talk nonsense!”
   
Wardes released "Breaking Wind" again. Saito tried to dodge it but was captured by the spell and blown away again.
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Wardes released "Breaking Wind" again. Saito tried to dodge it but was captured in and blown away again.
   
 
”It’s so nostalgic. I could cry. Right, no, that’s what I was missing. My partner – that ‘Gandálfr’!”
 
”It’s so nostalgic. I could cry. Right, no, that’s what I was missing. My partner – that ‘Gandálfr’!”
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Saito's body trembled. He was shivering with anger and fear. The masked man was Wardes! The man who was standing next to Fouquet… The one who hit Saito with a blitz was none other than Wardes!
 
Saito's body trembled. He was shivering with anger and fear. The masked man was Wardes! The man who was standing next to Fouquet… The one who hit Saito with a blitz was none other than Wardes!
   
“The masked man… You… Then it must be you who helped Fouquet to escape too. What a treacherous and useful spell. You can appear anywhere.”
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“Masked man… You… Then it must be you who helped Fouquet to escape too. What a treacherous and handful spell. You can appear anywhere.”
   
 
“Indeed. More so, each one has the power of the original. I told you, right? ‘Wind’ is unevenly distributed!”
 
“Indeed. More so, each one has the power of the original. I told you, right? ‘Wind’ is unevenly distributed!”
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“How dare you to do that to Louise…!”
 
“How dare you to do that to Louise…!”
   
Once Louise's body was blown off again, the remaining Wardes clones concentrated on Saito trying to press him further. However, Saito's movement gradually increased in speed.
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Once Louise's body was blown off again, the remaining Wardes clones concentrated on Saito trying to press him further. However, Saito's movement gradually increased speed.
   
 
All of the Wardeses' breathing became irregular and rough. Still, even then, their expression didn't change.
 
All of the Wardeses' breathing became irregular and rough. Still, even then, their expression didn't change.
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While blocking the sword, Wardes asked.
 
While blocking the sword, Wardes asked.
   
“Why did you come back to die? To risk your life for Louise who despises you? I can’t understand how a commoner’s mind works!”
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“Why did you come back to die? To risk your life for Louise who despises you? Can’t understand how a commoner’s mind works!”
   
 
Saito shouted while swinging the sword. “Then why did you bastard try to kill Louise!? You were her fiancée!”
 
Saito shouted while swinging the sword. “Then why did you bastard try to kill Louise!? You were her fiancée!”
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The runes started shining. 
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Runes started shining. 
   
 
Matching the light, Derflinger also shone brighter.
 
Matching the light, Derflinger also shone brighter.
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“Good! That’s good partner! Right! That’s the key! I remembered! I know the source of Gandálfr’s power! Good partner!”
 
“Good! That’s good partner! Right! That’s the key! I remembered! I know the source of Gandálfr’s power! Good partner!”
   
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With ‘'Uneven Distribution’ defeated, the remaining real Wardes' body fell down on the floor. <-The spell name changed...which to use? This one makes more sense. ~Dan->
 
With ‘'Uneven Distribution’ defeated, the remaining real Wardes' body fell down on the floor. <-The spell name changed...which to use? This one makes more sense. ~Dan->
   
His left arm, which had been cut off, landed there after a few seconds.
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His cut off left arm, landed there after a few seconds.
   
 
Saito also landed on the ground, but he stumbled and had to support himself with his knee. His tiredness had reached a critical limit. 
 
Saito also landed on the ground, but he stumbled and had to support himself with his knee. His tiredness had reached a critical limit. 
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“You and your foolish master will be turned to ashes! Gandálfr!”
 
“You and your foolish master will be turned to ashes! Gandálfr!”
   
Throwing those last parting words, Wardes disappeared through the hole in the wall.
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Throwing these last parting words, Wardes disappeared through the hole in the wall.
   
 
Saito, who used Derflinger as a crutch for support, stumblingly walked up to Louise.
 
Saito, who used Derflinger as a crutch for support, stumblingly walked up to Louise.
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“Aaaaaaaan?”
 
“Aaaaaaaan?”
   
And then that brown animal started groping Louise’s body that was lying nearside.
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And then that brown animal started groping Louise’s body that was lying near sides.
   
 
“You… you are the huge mole Verdandi! Guiche’s familiar!”
 
“You… you are the huge mole Verdandi! Guiche’s familiar!”
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Saito shouted, and soon enough from the same hole that Verdandi came out, Guiche's face appeared.
 
Saito shouted, and soon enough from the same hole that Verdandi came out, Guiche's face appeared.
   
“Hey! Verdandi! You can dig a hole anywhere! Good boy! Gu….”
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Hey! Verdandi! You can dig a hole anywhere! Good boy! Gu….”
   
 
Guiche turned his soil smeared face from Saito and noticed Louise lying nearby, then said pretending not to know.
 
Guiche turned his soil smeared face from Saito and noticed Louise lying nearby, then said pretending not to know.
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“What? Well I do not understand it, but it seems everything ended already.” Kirche said in nonchalant voice.
 
“What? Well I do not understand it, but it seems everything ended already.” Kirche said in nonchalant voice.
   
With Louise in his arms, Saito slowly made his way through the hole. But then he remembered something. He left Louise in Guiche’s care and hurried back to Wales in the chapel.
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With Louise in his arms, Saito slowly made his way through the hole. But then he remembered something, left Louise in Guiche’s care and hurried back to Wales in the chapel.
   
 
However, Wales had already died.
 
However, Wales had already died.
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A pond in a forgotten courtyard…
 
A pond in a forgotten courtyard…
   
There a small boat was floating… There, Louise was lying down. Whenever she faced difficulties, Louise always hid herself and slept there. This was her world that no one else intruded in, her secret place…
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There a small boat was floating… Here Louise was lying down when facing difficulties. Louise always hid herself and slept there. Her world that no one else intruded in. Her secret place…
   
 
Louise’s heart was in pain.
 
Louise’s heart was in pain.
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Louise asked in her dream. But she shook her head at once. No, the viscount didn’t come here anymore. Then, who?
 
Louise asked in her dream. But she shook her head at once. No, the viscount didn’t come here anymore. Then, who?
   
It was Saito. The sword was hanging on his back, when he, without hesitation about getting wet, stepped into the pond and approached Louise’s shallop.
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It was Saito. The sword was hanging on his back, when he without hesitation about getting wet stepped into the pond and approached Louise’s shallop.
   
 
Louise's heart throbbed.
 
Louise's heart throbbed.
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Traitor Wardes.
 
Traitor Wardes.
   
The crown prince’s death…
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Crown prince’s death…
   
The noble union’s ‘Reconquista’ victory…
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Noble union’s ‘Reconquista’ victory…
   
Reporting to the Princess…
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Report to the Princess…
   
 
For various reasons, and while Louise felt sorry for them all, right now all Louise’s thoughts were blown away by the wind.
 
For various reasons, and while Louise felt sorry for them all, right now all Louise’s thoughts were blown away by the wind.
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