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===Chapter Three: Duke of La Vallière===
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===Chapter Three: Duke de La Vallière===
   
   
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The servants that had gathered in the surrounding area simultaneously took off the wheels of the cage-like carriage. Footmen caught the dragons and, at the given opportunity, the servants opened the carriage door. A red carpet spread out all the way to the cage’s entrance in order to accept a middle aged noble.
 
The servants that had gathered in the surrounding area simultaneously took off the wheels of the cage-like carriage. Footmen caught the dragons and, at the given opportunity, the servants opened the carriage door. A red carpet spread out all the way to the cage’s entrance in order to accept a middle aged noble.
   
It was Duke of La Vallière. He was more than fifty years old. He had blonde hair and a beard that were both turning white, and he was dressed in wonderful clothes suitable for a king. On his left eye he had a monocle, and his eyes had a strong glitter to them.
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It was Duke de La Vallière. He was more than fifty years old. He had blonde hair and a beard that were both turning white, and he was dressed in wonderful clothes suitable for a king. On his left eye he had a monocle, and his eyes had a strong glitter to them.
   
 
The butlers walked briskly to the duke, took off his hat, fixed his hair and made sure that his robe was properly lined.
 
The butlers walked briskly to the duke, took off his hat, fixed his hair and made sure that his robe was properly lined.
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“Certainly!”
 
“Certainly!”
   
The mood in the La Vallière family as they had breakfast on the sunlit balcony was the same as usual. The table was drawn out in order to have breakfast in the sunlight, everyone was seated. Duke of La Vallière was seated in the seat of honor and next to him was his wife. And the unusually concentrated three sisters were sitting at the table, lined up by age. Louise’s body was a bit unstable, because she had cried so much last night. Even though she was supposed to get her father’s permission to participate in the war...
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The mood in the La Vallière family as they had breakfast on the sunlit balcony was the same as usual. The table was drawn out in order to have breakfast in the sunlight, everyone was seated. Duke de La Vallière was seated in the seat of honor and next to him was his wife. And the unusually concentrated three sisters were sitting at the table, lined up by age. Louise’s body was a bit unstable, because she had cried so much last night. Even though she was supposed to get her father’s permission to participate in the war...
   
 
It appeared that the Duke was in a considerably bad mood.
 
It appeared that the Duke was in a considerably bad mood.
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“Fire?”
 
“Fire?”
   
For a little while, Duke of La Vallière gazed at Louise’s face and then he slowly nodded.
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For a little while, Duke de La Vallière gazed at Louise’s face and then he slowly nodded.
   
 
“You have the same Element as your grandfather. I see, Fire, hmm. ... In that case, it’s only natural that you would be attracted to war. It’s a sinful Element. Truly, an Element covered in sin.”
 
“You have the same Element as your grandfather. I see, Fire, hmm. ... In that case, it’s only natural that you would be attracted to war. It’s a sinful Element. Truly, an Element covered in sin.”
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“What are you doing?!” Saito began shouting and was noticed by the audience inside the courtyard.
 
“What are you doing?!” Saito began shouting and was noticed by the audience inside the courtyard.
   
Duke of La Vallière ordered with a voice full of dignity.
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Duke de La Vallière ordered with a voice full of dignity.
   
 
"Hm~, seize Louise and confine her in the tower. And also, because she won’t be leaving that place for at least a year, please exchange the chain with something sturdier."
 
"Hm~, seize Louise and confine her in the tower. And also, because she won’t be leaving that place for at least a year, please exchange the chain with something sturdier."

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