Talk:Toradora!:Volume10 Chapter3: Difference between revisions

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Awkward wording in the first sentence, don't know what the original meaning was.
 
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Latest revision as of 21:03, 8 September 2012

The first line is very awkward, but I am not sure what the original meant. The current text is "There were still a little bit of snow ..., but they were already stained ..." I can see two possible rewrites:
There were still little bits of snow..., but they were already stained...
The second is:
There was still a little bit of snow..., but it was already stained...