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| Hey Bicube,
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| I just reverted one of your edits to "Lone Island Syndrome" and though I should explain. You had changed "every day" to "everyday" in the sentance "This comes from my many months of experience observing Asahina dressed in her maid costume everyday in the club room, so I can guarantee this." I'm pretty sure that "every day" is correct. "Everyday" is a word, but is only used as an adjictive (ie "Mikuru's everyday clothes were a maid's costume" or something like that). "Every day" is a noun phrase in the original version of the sentance.
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| All your other changes looked good. Now I just need to add some of my own....
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| --[[User:BlckKnght|BlckKnght]] 01:36, 17 May 2006 (PDT)
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