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New page: Is the format at the start 'A ha B,C,D desu. ...Sono hazu datta' or the like, or rather 'A ha B,C,D ...no hazu datta' or the like? If the first, I might suggest a slight rewording on the ...
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Is the format at the start 'A ha B,C,D desu. ...Sono hazu datta' or the like, or rather 'A ha B,C,D ...no hazu datta' or the like? If the first, I might suggest a slight rewording on the lines of 'That's what she should have been' or 'That's what she should be' or 'That's what I thought'/'That's what I thought she was', whereas in the second case I might suggest something on the lines of 'Shirayuki Hotogi: a Yamato Nadeshiko./A modest [...].' for the first two lines. In any case, very happy at translation being done for this fiction! Thank you!