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Also can you tell me if the narration is in past or present tense, it seems to be in past tense but I am not sure. | Also can you tell me if the narration is in past or present tense, it seems to be in past tense but I am not sure. | ||
--[[User:J112|J112]] 19:43, 16 December 2011 (CST) | --[[User:J112|J112]] 19:43, 16 December 2011 (CST) | ||
It's in past tense. I'll change it to hime-sama then. [[User:Zephyrus|Zephyrus]] | |||
ok thank you, I'll try to finish editing this chapter tomorrow--[[User:J112|J112]] 20:32, 16 December 2011 (CST) | |||
Latest revision as of 02:32, 17 December 2011
For the line “Why is your Highness so sharp about these things?” I got flustered and accidentally blurted out honorifics. I think it may be more appropriate to say something like hime-sama than your Highness, I haven't checked the raw yet to see if it was originally like that though; I will leave it for now.
Also can you tell me if the narration is in past or present tense, it seems to be in past tense but I am not sure. --J112 19:43, 16 December 2011 (CST)
It's in past tense. I'll change it to hime-sama then. Zephyrus
ok thank you, I'll try to finish editing this chapter tomorrow--J112 20:32, 16 December 2011 (CST)