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===Part 1===
===Part 1===


Those who had threatened their boss and stayed here, didn't last one night, before wordlessly checking out.


-> The two siblings, who threatened the owner in order to stay in the inn, wordlessly checked out after staying for only one night.
1. '''But most importantly, Sora had no reason to peek over.'''


However, the siblings that were lodging in Stephanie Dora's house were already ushering into the next morning.
'''However, this was the limit of understanding that Steph has, which couldn't be helped.'''


-> Question: What do you mean by usher? Are you trying to stay that [the siblings were preparing for the next morning] or [the next day is coming?]?
'''What were set in the bathroom were two mobile phones and laptops.'''
If it's the former, my take on this is: They were now staying in the house of Stephanie Dora and were preparing for the next morning.


No, to be exact— It had ushered into the next morning, in the bathroom of her house.
'''And Steph didn't know that the two tiny holes were cameras.'''


-> Question: What is It referring to? To the [day] or to the [siblings]? If it's the former then with conjunction to the above edit: No— to be exact it was already the next morning and the siblings were in the bathroom.
Are there two mobile phones and laptops? Or are there two items, a mobile phone and a laptop? Or are there two mobile phones and two laptops?
Arranging and editing it a bit:
 
 
'''But more importantly, Sora didn't even need to peek.'''
 
'''What were set in the bathroom were two mobile phones and laptops.'''
 
'''Unbeknownst to Steph, the two tiny holes were actually cameras.'''
 
'''It couldn't be helped since this was the limit of Steph's knowledge.'''
 
 
 
===Part 2===
 
 
 
-- [[User:Layrelsky|Layrelsky]] ([[User talk:Layrelsky|talk]]) 10:03, 12 August 2013 GMT+8

Latest revision as of 22:46, 12 August 2013

Some suggestions for edit:

Part 1[edit]

1. But most importantly, Sora had no reason to peek over.

However, this was the limit of understanding that Steph has, which couldn't be helped.

What were set in the bathroom were two mobile phones and laptops.

And Steph didn't know that the two tiny holes were cameras.

Are there two mobile phones and laptops? Or are there two items, a mobile phone and a laptop? Or are there two mobile phones and two laptops? Arranging and editing it a bit:


But more importantly, Sora didn't even need to peek.

What were set in the bathroom were two mobile phones and laptops.

Unbeknownst to Steph, the two tiny holes were actually cameras.

It couldn't be helped since this was the limit of Steph's knowledge.


Part 2[edit]

-- Layrelsky (talk) 10:03, 12 August 2013 GMT+8

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