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"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." '' | "Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." '' | ||
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"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!" | "Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!" | ||
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"No matter what happens, I will always believe in you, Naofumi-sama" | "No matter what happens, I will always believe in you, Naofumi-sama" | ||
Revision as of 02:53, 10 December 2014
Hi Uguu, I would like make a few edits for the chapters of Tate no Yuusha that you translated.
Chapter 22: you used:
"I didn't do it!"
Pompf...
My frenzied self was covered by something. "No matter what, I will always believe in Naofumi-sama." "Shut up! You people are just going to pin more crimes on me!" "...I don't believe those rumors. You are a person who would never do such a thing."
I heard the words that I've been wanting to hear ever since arriving in this world. Gently, the shadows that clouded my vision disappeared. I received the tender warmth of another person.
"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all."
While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:
"I didn't do it!"
Pompf...
My frenzied self was covered by something.
"Please calm yourself Naofumi-sama. Please hear me out and give me a chance to earn your trust."
"...Eh?!"
"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. Should we go to this place where we first met? "
"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"
What was that!? Who?! This voice... these words... were forcing their way into my heart
"No matter what happens, I will always believe in you, Naofumi-sama"
"Shut up! You people are just going to pin more crimes on me!"
"...I don't believe those rumors. You are a person who would never do such a thing."
Ever since I arrived in this world, it was the first time... that I heard the words I had been wishing for.
Gently, the shadows that clouded my vision disappeared.
I received the tender warmth of another person.
"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all."
So if you are fine with it I would like to make the changes, especially since it is one of the most important scenes in Tate no Yushaa, I think it would be good to respect the original web novel as much as possible.