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Which part? -[[User:Zephyrus|Zephyrus]] | Which part? -[[User:Zephyrus|Zephyrus]] | ||
Just for minor tweaks:“Hiro can just sit on Narumi’s thigh.” Can it be changed from thigh to lap? | |||
“It would be even better if brother could come.” For brother, can it be changed from that to onii-san/-chan or leave it be? Thanks for the translations and keep up the good work. - [[User:sleepy920|sleepy920]] | |||
Revision as of 11:21, 7 March 2012
I think this should be in the past tense. I don't know what tense it is in since I don't have the original book/can't read Japanese. I want to refine the sentences, but I don't want to lose the meanings of them. --Fwiss
Which part? -Zephyrus
Just for minor tweaks:“Hiro can just sit on Narumi’s thigh.” Can it be changed from thigh to lap? “It would be even better if brother could come.” For brother, can it be changed from that to onii-san/-chan or leave it be? Thanks for the translations and keep up the good work. - sleepy920