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I think I understand what you were trying to get at here. "Persistence" and "insistence" are just odd words, so I changed it to "substance" | I think I understand what you were trying to get at here. "Persistence" and "insistence" are just odd words, so I changed it to "substance" | ||
[[User:Unkani|Unkani]] 02:12, 7 August 2012 (CDT) | [[User:Unkani|Unkani]] 02:12, 7 August 2012 (CDT) | ||
If you're changing <Bunken News> to <Bunken Bews>, don't forget the other chapters. This change seems particularly odd though. [[User:Unkani|Unkani]] ([[User talk:Unkani|talk]]) 16:28, 30 August 2012 (CDT) | |||
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Regarding the description of Iori's hair:
her thin smooth hair that was as fine as silk didn't seem to have any substance to it
I think I understand what you were trying to get at here. "Persistence" and "insistence" are just odd words, so I changed it to "substance" Unkani 02:12, 7 August 2012 (CDT)
If you're changing <Bunken News> to <Bunken Bews>, don't forget the other chapters. This change seems particularly odd though. Unkani (talk) 16:28, 30 August 2012 (CDT)