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I've begun to notice that they way the author describes dialogue *after* the person has spoken to be quite confusing, as its done in a way that makes you think that he's talking about the following line rather than the previous.--[[User:Michpig|Michpig]] ([[User talk:Michpig|talk]]) 14:16, 21 September 2012 (CDT) | |||
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Seeing the peril of Kiriyama's personality entering [Aoki's body], Aoki's personality entering [Nagase's body]
and Nagase's personality entering [Kiriyama's body], the whole literature club decided to skip the first lesson together.
it should be
Seeing the peril of Kiriyama's personality entering [Aoki's body], Aoki's personality entering [Inaba's body]
and Inaba's personality entering [Kiriyama's body], the whole literature club decided to skip the first lesson together.
desu yo ne?~
I've begun to notice that they way the author describes dialogue *after* the person has spoken to be quite confusing, as its done in a way that makes you think that he's talking about the following line rather than the previous.--Michpig (talk) 14:16, 21 September 2012 (CDT)