Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 6: Difference between revisions

Revision as of 14:23, 21 March 2013 edit Multipartite (talk \| contribs) 320 edits 'Immediately' question.		Latest revision as of 18:13, 30 March 2013 edit undo Multipartite (talk \| contribs) 320 edits (Moved own suggestion from Volume Discussion to Chapter Discussion; I unfortunately do not know how to delete the page or flag for deletion.)
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	'Immediately becoming aware of that situation': with the length of time that had passed, the word 'Immediately' prompts cognitive dissonance. What word in the text does it correspond to? curiosity An alternative interpretation would be that Tatsuya immediately noticed that Miyuki was holding her breath, but in that case he should have noticed it getting closer and closer to him (and reacted) up until that moment. A different choice of word/s may be worthwhile, depending on the text in question. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 09:23, 21 March 2013 (CDT)

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