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--[[User:Thelastguardian|Thelastguardian]] 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT) | --[[User:Thelastguardian|Thelastguardian]] 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT) | ||
I rearranged some phrases, | I rearranged some phrases (see above), and I'll go over some of the other sentences later. | ||
[[User:Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] 08:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT) | [[User:Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] 08:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT) | ||
Revision as of 15:18, 2 May 2006
Vague/Awkward sounding phrases
..., or even those who-kows-if-they-are-incidents-or-accidents kind of storms, literally.
awaiting sudden inspiration to translate this line properly and correctly.
--Thelastguardian 22:17, 1 May 2006 (PDT)
I broke up the run-on sentence and tried to convey the sense of 巻き込む。
Eleutheria 08:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)
Translator Notes
requesting heavy edit in terms of clarity of ideas. I was constantly getting distracted when I was translating this chapter.
--Thelastguardian 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT)
I rearranged some phrases (see above), and I'll go over some of the other sentences later.
Eleutheria 08:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT)