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[1] < ... between these two-----to put it correctly, '''the byproducts in the sideline’s''' that were dragged into it would suffer terrible damage. > | [1] < ... between these two-----to put it correctly, '''the byproducts in the sideline’s''' that were dragged into it would suffer terrible damage. > | ||
This should be just Side Lines since 副産物 is either byproduct or sidelines and not both right?. | This should be just Side Lines since 副産物 is either byproduct or sidelines and not both right?. | ||
[2] Not sure if i rephrasing this preserved the meaning a lot but i think it made more sense than the first one. | [2] Not sure if i rephrasing this preserved the meaning a lot but i think it made more sense than the first one. | ||
[3] < ... they could only hear each other’s offences and defenses inside their dreams...> | [3] < ... they could only hear each other’s offences and defenses inside their dreams...> | ||
Can be reworded a bit to make more sense. I know 夢 litterally means dream but i was thinking that Kaguya and yuzuru were somewhat deluded due to their anger while in battle. I was thinking of using delusion but the Kanji is different. | |||
Can be reworded a bit to make more sense. I know 夢 litterally means dream but i was thinking that Kaguya and yuzuru were somewhat deluded due to their anger while in battle. I was thinking of using delusion but the Kanji is different. | |||
--- [[User:Daylighter|Daylighter]] ([[User talk:Daylighter|talk]]) 12:07, 24 April 2013 (GMT +8:00) | |||
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[1] < ... between these two-----to put it correctly, the byproducts in the sideline’s that were dragged into it would suffer terrible damage. >
This should be just Side Lines since 副産物 is either byproduct or sidelines and not both right?.
[2] Not sure if i rephrasing this preserved the meaning a lot but i think it made more sense than the first one.
[3] < ... they could only hear each other’s offences and defenses inside their dreams...>
Can be reworded a bit to make more sense. I know 夢 litterally means dream but i was thinking that Kaguya and yuzuru were somewhat deluded due to their anger while in battle. I was thinking of using delusion but the Kanji is different.
--- Daylighter (talk) 12:07, 24 April 2013 (GMT +8:00)