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"Turning towards Mayumi revealing a little grunt of disgust, Katsuto giggles." This sentence really bothered me since I can't imagine a guy like Katsuto giggling. Would it be possible to substitute giggling with chuckling?--[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 12:10, 23 July 2013 (CDT) | '''Bold text'''"Turning towards Mayumi revealing a little grunt of disgust, Katsuto giggles." This sentence really bothered me since I can't imagine a guy like Katsuto giggling. Would it be possible to substitute giggling with chuckling?--[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 12:10, 23 July 2013 (CDT) | ||
I think the names are in the wrong places as it seems Mayumi is speaking so it might be "Turning towards Katsuto revealing a little grunt of disgust, Mayumi giggles." | |||
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Bold text"Turning towards Mayumi revealing a little grunt of disgust, Katsuto giggles." This sentence really bothered me since I can't imagine a guy like Katsuto giggling. Would it be possible to substitute giggling with chuckling?--Vu.P (talk) 12:10, 23 July 2013 (CDT)
I think the names are in the wrong places as it seems Mayumi is speaking so it might be "Turning towards Katsuto revealing a little grunt of disgust, Mayumi giggles."