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That day, I chose to take the main street to go home. It was just on a whim, a very rare thing for me to do.
That day, I chose to take the main street home.
It was just on a whim; a very rare thing for me to do.


As I was walking woodenly along the building street that I grew tired of seeing, someone came falling down. A squishing sound that you would normally never hear. It was obvious that the person died from falling off a building. A crimson color was spreading across the pavement. The only features that remained were the dark, black hair, and the thin, white, fragile arms and legs. And then, that featureless, crushed face. The whole scene reminded me of a flattened flower, tucked between the pages of an old book.
Walking woodenly along the building street that I was tired of seeing, someone fell.
It was a squishing sound that you normally never hear.
The person obviously died from falling off a building.
A crimson color spread across the pavement.
The only features that remained were the dark, black hair and the thin, white fragile arms and legs.


... Probably because the corpse, with only the head deformed like a baby's, looked like a broken lily to me....
And that featureless, crushed face.
 
The whole scene reminded me of a flattened flower, tucked between the pages of an old book.
 
Probably because the corpse, with only the head deformed like a baby's, looked like a broken lily to me...


／Overlooking View (Thanatos) -Fujoh Kirie-
／Overlooking View (Thanatos) -Fujoh Kirie-
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Revision as of 15:54, 14 August 2008

That day, I chose to take the main street home. It was just on a whim; a very rare thing for me to do.

Walking woodenly along the building street that I was tired of seeing, someone fell. It was a squishing sound that you normally never hear. The person obviously died from falling off a building. A crimson color spread across the pavement. The only features that remained were the dark, black hair and the thin, white fragile arms and legs.

And that featureless, crushed face.

The whole scene reminded me of a flattened flower, tucked between the pages of an old book.

Probably because the corpse, with only the head deformed like a baby's, looked like a broken lily to me...

／Overlooking View (Thanatos) -Fujoh Kirie-


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