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"I'll take this chance to tell you clearly I'm just clearly stating the circumstances but,"
This line is not very clear. I could put "that" between "clearly" and "I'm" to make it grammatically correct, but the sentence would still sound weird.
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"Dangerous—with the typical instinct fear, Ryuuji’s stomach twisted in knots."
Also unclear. I'd wager a guess, but I don't want to get it wrong.
Akirasav
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Sorry, I made the last two edits. Didn't realize I wasn't logged in. ~Dan