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"... as the boy's mother says that she must not let herselft get kissed so simply and if her son [[tryes]] something, just punch him in the face." -> "tries" | "... as the boy's mother says that she must not let herselft get kissed so simply and if her son [[tryes]] something, just punch him in the face." -> "tries" | ||
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I hope that some minor errors I spotted was everything that flaw this great summary version of the book :) | I hope that some minor errors I spotted was everything that flaw this great summary version of the book :) | ||
-Some random reader- |
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If any editor awares of this, please fix these errors:
"... as the boy's mother says that she must not let herselft get kissed so simply and if her son tryes something, just punch him in the face." -> "tries"
"Now changing to a defensive posture, Yuji tryes to explains it but accidentaly leaks out the jealousy that he felt after seeing her with another guy." -> "tries"
"Surprised by how he noticed it and felt the same than her after see him with Kazumi ..." -> "... way she did ..." Maybe, I don't think my correction would fit the best here though.
"These two young boys were in the same class than Shana and Yuji ..." -> "with"
"... he still didn't understand them completely, taking this as a joke, Chigusa agreeds." -> "agreed"
"... Shana realizes that the meaning of all the feelings that she got before, in an extreme pain on his chest for the preocupation of losing after this girl." -> "her", "preoccupation"
I hope that some minor errors I spotted was everything that flaw this great summary version of the book :)
-Some random reader-