Talk:Date A Live:Volume 5 Chapter 3

<And following with the thought of the sound stopping in front of the room, *knock**knock* the door was knocked.> 'thought of the sound stopping?' should it be something like 'following with what she thought was the sound stopping'?

<honestly she was not someone that makes her happy for encountering> encountering? what's this line mean? --Monsterbandage (talk) 22:54, 21 March 2013 (CDT)