User contributions for The naming game

12 September 2006

• 12:3612:36, 12 September 2006 diff hist +13,402 N Special:Badtitle/NS102:Komgvol01editchpter02control added ch2 part 2.0 to control page, with a TOC similar to the edit page, to allow easier comparison/navigation
• 12:2712:27, 12 September 2006 diff hist −8 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter 02 - Part 2.2 signing: fixed section levels so signing doesn't interfere with editing
• 12:2412:24, 12 September 2006 diff hist −8 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter 02 - Part 2.1 signing: fixed section levels so signing doesn't interfere with editing
• 12:2012:20, 12 September 2006 diff hist −8 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter 02 - Part 2.0 signing: fixed section levels so signing doesn't interfere with editing

2 September 2006

• 07:2707:27, 2 September 2006 diff hist −24 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →I'm a familiar spirit: a few sentence/word simplifications + one paragraph split + one tense change

31 August 2006

• 23:1723:17, 31 August 2006 diff hist +14 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Translator's Notes: changed the full-note-title links to up-arrow links. won't try to mess with the formatting too much anymore.
• 22:2122:21, 31 August 2006 diff hist +11 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Translator's Notes: put the references in the order they appear. Tried some better formatting.
• 21:5621:56, 31 August 2006 diff hist +51 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 26: linked to hamburger reference
• 21:5321:53, 31 August 2006 diff hist +425 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Translator's Notes: added hamburger note, and attempted to format the footnotes. Should this be a numbered list?

28 August 2006

• 15:0415:04, 28 August 2006 diff hist +71 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 2.0 signing: signed
• 15:0015:00, 28 August 2006 diff hist +2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 2.2 signing: change to correct section level
• 14:5914:59, 28 August 2006 diff hist +2 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 2.1 signing: change to correct section level
• 14:5814:58, 28 August 2006 diff hist +38 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 2.2 signing: break signing into its own section
• 14:5714:57, 28 August 2006 diff hist +38 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 2.1 signing: break signing into its own section
• 14:5614:56, 28 August 2006 diff hist +2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: part 2 of section level change revert
• 14:5514:55, 28 August 2006 diff hist +2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 27: second attempt to reverse section level change
• 14:5414:54, 28 August 2006 diff hist −2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: more section level change gymnastics -- can't seem to save large amounts of text for some reason.
• 14:4914:49, 28 August 2006 diff hist +40 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 2.0 signing: break signing into its own section
• 14:4914:49, 28 August 2006 diff hist −2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 27: temporary section level change -- having trouble making a separate signing section
• 14:4514:45, 28 August 2006 diff hist +1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 28: more paragraph breaking
• 14:4014:40, 28 August 2006 diff hist +1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 30: more paragraph breaking
• 14:3914:39, 28 August 2006 diff hist +4 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 29: more paragraph breaking
• 14:2514:25, 28 August 2006 diff hist +2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 32: breaking each thought-stream into separate paragraphs.
• 14:1414:14, 28 August 2006 diff hist +10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 27: attempt to fix "A proud descendant of a true noble lineage" ambiguity -- see talk page
• 14:1014:10, 28 August 2006 diff hist +1,709 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: trying to fix "... A proud descendant of a true noble lineage, ..." ambiguities
• 06:0506:05, 28 August 2006 diff hist +1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 33: Broke Saito's thoughts out into separate paragraph.
• 05:5905:59, 28 August 2006 diff hist +3 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: broke Saito's thoughts into hopefully coherent paragraphs. -- one large mass of text is a little too amorphous.
• 05:4305:43, 28 August 2006 diff hist −14 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 33: "There didn't seem to be any electricity in the room." -> "It seemed they didn't use electricity." (courtesy of Cala-kun)
• 04:3004:30, 28 August 2006 diff hist −60 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 34: removed additional invented details not in the original Japanese text, nor the translation + minor tone changes for Saito-ness
• 02:3702:37, 28 August 2006 diff hist +694 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 33: Passage starting with "On the tabletop was a lamp ..."

27 August 2006

• 13:3313:33, 27 August 2006 diff hist +200 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 28: no big deal -> Overall, no positives or negatives. + Saito-kun -> Hiraga-kun + some rewording + my "before acting" addition may need to be checked
• 12:2312:23, 27 August 2006 diff hist +314 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: "From the window, he could see the grass plains where he'd rolled around."
• 10:1610:16, 27 August 2006 diff hist +4 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 29: Brit -> Am spelling + any kind phenomenon such as this. -> any kind of phenomenon like this.

26 August 2006

• 15:1715:17, 26 August 2006 diff hist +52 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 45: finally managed to meet -> happened to meet :: see talk page. + rewordings
• 15:1315:13, 26 August 2006 diff hist +1,808 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 43: "disgruntled" -> "hurt" :: some Cala-kun Irc wisdom + a little bit of contextual reasoning
• 15:1115:11, 26 August 2006 diff hist +10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 36: that's what I don't understand -> that's the only I don't understand :: revert, see talk page
• 14:4214:42, 26 August 2006 diff hist −8 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 39: not too tall -> not very tall :: see talk page + break separate thoughts into two paragraphs
• 14:2714:27, 26 August 2006 diff hist +1,210 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 39: "not too tall" -> "not very tall"
• 13:5213:52, 26 August 2006 diff hist +1,070 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 41: a few more thoughts about the "precarious" -> "problematic" etc revert.
• 06:0606:06, 26 August 2006 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 44: "relatives on this world." -> "relatives in this world"
• 06:0406:04, 26 August 2006 diff hist +3 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 43: "all and any" -> "any and all" (more commonly used) + disgruntled -> hurt :: see talk page. + commented out Cala-kun's translation comment.
• 05:5405:54, 26 August 2006 diff hist +8 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 41: sorry for the revert, but the original is more reminiscent of American-style "lofty" speech. + "all and any" -> "any and all" (much more common ordering)
• 05:4005:40, 26 August 2006 diff hist +10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 39: "For the meanwhile" -> "In the meantime" + paragraph not continued
• 05:1605:16, 26 August 2006 diff hist +61 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 24: Louise's tone -> more informal + quotation continued from prev page.
• 05:0705:07, 26 August 2006 diff hist −16 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 22: Saito's thoughts -> present tense + "wriggling snake" sentence reword, see talk page.
• 05:0305:03, 26 August 2006 diff hist −4 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 20: A few students laughed while making those comments. :: see talk page
• 04:2904:29, 26 August 2006 diff hist +735 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 20: (A) Few students laughed as they made those comments.
• 04:0404:04, 26 August 2006 diff hist +2,047 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 22: Is this a word? It looks like a wriggling snake in some strange pattern.
• 02:4902:49, 26 August 2006 diff hist −6 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 17: "Aren't you just a bunch of twisted cosplaying new-religion freaks?" -- see talk page
• 02:4602:46, 26 August 2006 diff hist +586 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 17: reasons for additional change to close-by sentences