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9 November 2006
- 14:2814:28, 9 November 2006 diff hist +440 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter 02 - Part 2.2: many edits, annotated with too many comments. + changed "Translator's Notes" to proper section level.
- 14:1814:18, 9 November 2006 diff hist +677 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter 02 - Part 2.1: many edits, annotated with too many comments.
- 14:1514:15, 9 November 2006 diff hist +1,257 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter 02 - Part 2.0: many edits, annotated with too many comments.
- 14:0714:07, 9 November 2006 diff hist +608 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter 02 - Part 1.1: many edits, annotated with too many comments.
- 14:0114:01, 9 November 2006 diff hist +5,193 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter 02 - Part 1.0: many edits, annotated with too many comments.
30 October 2006
- 05:4305:43, 30 October 2006 diff hist 0 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 53: capitalize "fire dragon mountains" to match p.52
29 October 2006
- 19:5719:57, 29 October 2006 diff hist −193 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 48: I generally try not to have any details added beyond what's in the original text. Please see me in the channel for any concerns.
- 19:4219:42, 29 October 2006 diff hist −1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 49: with "your .. familiar" it sounds like Kirche is implying Saito might be Louise's "something else" like "boyfriend" or whatever. I don't think this is the case.
- 19:2519:25, 29 October 2006 diff hist +43 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter Two: Louise the Zero: restoring former phrase structure -- it probably CAN be made to flow in English. I'll need another look at it, though.
- 17:4917:49, 29 October 2006 diff hist +4 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 50: change was checked by Cala. First she makes the remark, and then calls Flame out to demonstrate what she means by "like this one."
22 October 2006
- 23:0923:09, 22 October 2006 diff hist −6 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 62: Spell of Summoning -> Summon Servant
- 23:0623:06, 22 October 2006 diff hist −6 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 50: Spell of Summoning -> Summon Servant
- 20:4320:43, 22 October 2006 diff hist +49 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 56: Arvys -> Alvíss + question mark goes outside quotes, unless it's a quoted question, as opposed to a questioned quote. + de-capitalized inside the sentence.
- 20:3820:38, 22 October 2006 diff hist +231 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Translator's Notes: added Alvíss reference
- 20:2720:27, 22 October 2006 diff hist −10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 60: the usage for "basically" didn't make sense here, and the alt usage with a sentence adjustment, seemed redundant, considering the "like a queen" part
- 20:1120:11, 22 October 2006 diff hist −8 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Chapter Two: Louise the Zero: the "snoring" sentence
- 19:5819:58, 22 October 2006 diff hist −1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 63: attempt to fix clause-clashing, initial phrase change suggestion by Cala
- 19:5419:54, 22 October 2006 diff hist −24 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter2 →Page 65: change element listing format to make the Earth Earth repetition a little less confusing.
20 October 2006
- 12:1912:19, 20 October 2006 diff hist −21 Zero no Tsukaima Registration →Volume 1 - The Zero's Familiar/ゼロの使い魔: updated TL assignments
27 September 2006
- 13:1313:13, 27 September 2006 diff hist +840 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 update my old opinion on "cloak" vs "mantle"; Warning, this talk page has gotten out of date since communication switched to IRC.
- 12:3212:32, 27 September 2006 diff hist 0 m Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 zeroNT Talk:Komgvol01edit moved to Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter1: making ch1 public along with history and talk page, as per B-T tradition.
- 12:3212:32, 27 September 2006 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 zeroNT:Komgvol01edit moved to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter1: making ch1 public along with history and talk page, as per B-T tradition.
- 12:2312:23, 27 September 2006 diff hist +19 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Insert and Back Cover recreated andiyar's edits, but without joining lines -- this allows for much nicer wiki diffs.
- 12:1812:18, 27 September 2006 diff hist −22 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Insert and Back Cover this was the initial edit for this page prior to andiyar's edits, and the deletion/recreation stuff. -- for previous changes, see ch1's history
- 09:0209:02, 27 September 2006 diff hist +23 Zero no Tsukaima →Translators: clarified the mysterious identity of SaiyaJedi
- 08:0408:04, 27 September 2006 diff hist +45 Zero no Tsukaima →Volume 1 - The Zero's Familiar/ゼロの使い魔: added "Insert & Back Cover" link
26 September 2006
- 13:5113:51, 26 September 2006 diff hist −4,338 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 formatted for reading pleasure (initial draft)
- 13:4813:48, 26 September 2006 diff hist −12 Zero no Tsukaima →Series Overview: fix Japanese text (copy-paste from last good version)
- 11:4711:47, 26 September 2006 diff hist −4 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Insert: "Currently drawing an illustration while..." -> "Currently doing illustrations while..."
- 11:0911:09, 26 September 2006 diff hist +2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 14: favoring readability over precision. The "or" didn't really have a valid alternative, considering there can be theme parks in Japan too...
- 09:2809:28, 26 September 2006 diff hist +115 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 integrated some of lambchopsil's changes + some rewording
23 September 2006
- 15:5215:52, 23 September 2006 diff hist −7 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →I'm a familiar spirit: "familiar spirit" -> "familiar" (note that this changes the section name)
- 15:5115:51, 23 September 2006 diff hist −14 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Back Cover: "familiar spirit" -> "familiar"
- 14:3314:33, 23 September 2006 diff hist +5 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →I'm a familiar spirit: author attribution changes previously discussed with Cala-kun
- 14:0914:09, 23 September 2006 diff hist +50 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: changed a lot of attribution to the author, using SaiyaJedi's text + minor edits
- 13:1113:11, 23 September 2006 diff hist −3 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 33: the "stopped airing" quote -- Cala found the sentence ambiguous enough that I just tried to have something that made sense in context.
- 13:0013:00, 23 September 2006 diff hist −15 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 45: "I guess that means there really is no need for electricity" + remove "enveloping it in shadow."
- 12:2312:23, 23 September 2006 diff hist +5 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 38: "There obviously is one, if I'm here!" (match change on p37)
- 12:2212:22, 23 September 2006 diff hist −17 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 37: "Nobody's even heard of another world."
- 10:4610:46, 23 September 2006 diff hist +9 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 23: "That commoner, he's perfect as your familiar!"
- 10:2110:21, 23 September 2006 diff hist +26 Zero no Tsukaima →Dedicated Editors: added Andiyar
- 10:2010:20, 23 September 2006 diff hist +31 Zero no Tsukaima →Translators: added SaiyaJedi
- 10:1710:17, 23 September 2006 diff hist +9 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 45: splice in saiyajedi paragraph (3 sentences)
- 10:1510:15, 23 September 2006 diff hist −54 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 43: splice in saiyajedi sentence with appropriate changes
- 09:5709:57, 23 September 2006 diff hist −146 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 1.2: change terms relating to spell names and familiars
- 09:3509:35, 23 September 2006 diff hist +2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →I'm a familiar spirit: "Louise, what are you trying to do, calling a commoner with your 'Summon Servant'?"
18 September 2006
- 06:3606:36, 18 September 2006 diff hist −2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 36: something like this. -> anything like this. [x2]
- 06:2206:22, 18 September 2006 diff hist −1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 35: cannot -> can't [tone consideration again]
- 06:1606:16, 18 September 2006 diff hist −2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →I'm a familiar spirit: Perhaps she’s ... -> Maybe she’s ... [sounds more Saito, as in more informal.]
- 06:1306:13, 18 September 2006 diff hist 0 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 29: helpless personality. -> hopeless personality.