Talk:Campione!:Volume 1 Chapter1
Just wanted to let the translator know that I really appreciate the work he is doing on this project. It seems really interesting!
If you think there is anything wrong with my edits please let me know.
Some suggestions I have:
For names, translating [Old Lady] as either Nonna or Oba-san. For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis. Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.