Talk:Campione!:Volume 1 Chapter1

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Just wanted to let the translator know that I really appreciate the work he is doing on this project. It seems really interesting!

If you think there is anything wrong with my edits please let me know.

Some suggestions I have:

For names, translating [Old Lady] as either Nonna or Oba-san. For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis. Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.