Talk:Campione!:Volume 1 Chapter1

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Just wanted to let the translator know that I really appreciate the work he is doing on this project. It seems really interesting!

If you think there is anything wrong with my edits please let me know.

Some suggestions I have:

For names, translating [Old Lady] as either Nonna or Oba-san. For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis. Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.


Thanks! I thought that no one would care editing a sole teaser project. I really appreciate your help.

[Old Lady] can be trasnlated in [Rokifujin], but not obaa-san or such (at least what I got from Google Translate. I'm translating from Chinese.)

As for [Female Wolf], from my little knowledge of kanas, it is read as [めろう]。I<m not sure though. Kira (Talk) 20:24, 1 August 2011 (UCT)

And for [Capital of lilies] I put it like this because there is '都', which means, literally, 'capital'.