Talk:Papa no Iu Koto o Kikinasai!:Volume 4 Chapter 2

Question: This is my first translation and as I just reached 20% or 1/5th of the chapter, I was wondering; What are you (the readers) opinions on its readability as compared to other translations? and Where do I need to improve? Sincerely translator- 黒曜石ペガサス

Well, some parts of the translation are...less understandable than other translations. Perhaps you should add more TNs or references if something is like that? For example, in a sentence you just wrote, " I mean, a plump young man wearing glasses carrying a mountain hiking backpack, does he come with a poster?". What does a poster have to do with him? And things like this. Even so, you're doing a good job, and I would like to thank you for your hard work!

-- 神 (talk) 20:42, 12 July 2013 (CDT)

note: First sale of the year, they called it a 'first' sale and the store is called Western Style Hips...weird name but oh well, and its a different store than "heels".