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Tada Banri ran half crying.
 
Tada Banri ran half crying.
   
The Tokyo streets at one o'clock in the morning, despite being "the Tokyo", were pitch dark with no signs of life, not even a lit light by a window. During the day today (or rather, yesterday already), in spite of it only being April, it had been so warm he had been wearing only a T-shirt and drinking iced coffee, muttering to himself "It must be global warming." He was now shivering from the cold and anxiety. The sleeves of his flannel hoodie pulled down to his fingertips, his too-unsteady footsteps making a flapping sound from the sandals on his bare feet, anyhow, if he could just get to the main street everything might be all right... Should be all right. He wanted it to happen. With all his heart he ran.
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The Tokyo streets at one o'clock in the morning, despite being "the Tokyo", were pitch dark with no signs of life, not even a lit light by a window. During the day today (or rather, yesterday already), in spite of it only being April, it had been so warm he had been wearing only a T-shirt and drinking iced coffee, muttering to himself, "It must be global warming." He was now shivering from the cold and anxiety. The sleeves of his flannel hoodie pulled down to his fingertips, his too-unsteady footsteps making a flapping sound from the sandals on his bare feet, anyhow, if he could just get to the main street everything might be all right... Should be all right. He wanted it to happen. With all his heart he ran.
   
 
"A young man turning nineteen this year shouldn't be running through the streets at night teary eyed...", I thought, but I understood Banri's feelings.
 
"A young man turning nineteen this year shouldn't be running through the streets at night teary eyed...", I thought, but I understood Banri's feelings.
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If I were in the same situation, I might cry too.
 
If I were in the same situation, I might cry too.
   
He had come to the capital together with his mother who, for the sake of her son who was starting a life alone, had arranged for furniture, appliances, gas, water, electricity and so on. She'd gotten through various minor formalities here and there, and then this afternoon (already, so fast!) she'd returned home in a <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hikari_(train) Hikari]</span> bullet train.
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He had come to the capital together with his mother, who for the sake of her son who was starting a life alone, had arranged for furniture, appliances, gas, water, electricity and so on. She'd gotten through various minor formalities here and there, and then this afternoon (already, so fast!) she'd returned home in a Hikari<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hikari_(train) Hikari]</ref> bullet train.
   
And then, finally, he had truly started the first night of his life alone. Only, this night kept him from tomorrow morning's college entrance ceremony. Late at night, as the new day was just starting, unable to sleep with his worries, he did as he supposed any resident of Tokyo would do in order to distract himself: he went from one convenience store to another... but he lost his way in the streets. Worse, it appeared that somewhere, somehow, he had lost the key to his new home. In any case, it wasn't there in his pocket anymore.
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And then, finally, he had truly started the first night of his life alone. Only this night kept him from tomorrow morning's college entrance ceremony. Late at night, as the new day was also starting, unable to sleep from the worries, in order to distract himself, he did as he supposed any resident of Tokyo would do: he went from one convenience store to another, but he lost his way in the streets. Worse, it appeared that somewhere, somehow, he had lost the key to his new home. In any case it wasn't there in his pocket anymore.
   
Banri's feet suddenly stopped and walked all of three steps back the way he'd come. He saw a map of the residential area standing by the edge of the sidewalk. "Saved", he said to himself as he approached and searched for the apartment building where he now lived, "Motomachi", tracing a route with his finger from "You are here". Anyway, once he had returned to the front of the apartment building, he intended to walk all the way back to the convenience store, searching for his keys.
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Banri's feet suddenly stopped, and walked all of three steps back the way he'd come. He saw a map of the residence area standing by the edge of the sidewalk. "Saved", he said to himself as he approached, and searched for the apartment building where he now lived, "Motomachi", tracing a route with his finger from "you are here". Anyway, once he had returned to the front of the apartment building, he intended to walk all the way back to the convenience store, searching for his keys.
   
 
But... ahh, enough.
 
But... ahh, enough.
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For the time being, all I can do is pray for him so that if Banri could just get back to the apartment somehow and get to sleep quickly, then perhaps he would survive tomorrow's entrance ceremony without problems. Just how important can one day in your life be, this new college student entrance ceremony? Even I--- though having become a wandering soul, can understand.
 
For the time being, all I can do is pray for him so that if Banri could just get back to the apartment somehow and get to sleep quickly, then perhaps he would survive tomorrow's entrance ceremony without problems. Just how important can one day in your life be, this new college student entrance ceremony? Even I--- though having become a wandering soul, can understand.
   
I couldn't believe the possibility that the spirits of men, even when they have left their bodies, remain and stay in this world to watch over someone. This side of the world was hidden, so I had only recently found out.
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I couldn't believe the possibility that the spirits of men, even when they have left their bodies, remain themselves and stay in this world to watch over someone. This side of the world was hidden, so I have only recently found this out.
   
 
I am, so to speak, a ghost.
 
I am, so to speak, a ghost.
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He dashed from the station, somehow or another arriving at the college entrance ceremony on time. Taking his seat, he composed himself like a perfect freshman while the visitors were welcomed, though he found himself disassociated from the grand occasion. That wasn't from lack of sleep, nor from bedhead.
 
He dashed from the station, somehow or another arriving at the college entrance ceremony on time. Taking his seat, he composed himself like a perfect freshman while the visitors were welcomed, though he found himself disassociated from the grand occasion. That wasn't from lack of sleep, nor from bedhead.
   
It was because, he realized, he was the only one entirely alone.
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It was because he realized, that he was the only one entirely alone.
   
 
He wasn't even trying to be observant: the place was noisy the whole time from people talking. It was because everybody else had somebody to talk to. If they'd come up from an affiliated high school, they'd already formed groups of friends, guys and girls together, and if not, they were usually seated with their parents. Usually.
 
He wasn't even trying to be observant: the place was noisy the whole time from people talking. It was because everybody else had somebody to talk to. If they'd come up from an affiliated high school, they'd already formed groups of friends, guys and girls together, and if not, they were usually seated with their parents. Usually.
   
"Parents these days don't go to college entrance ceremonies!" "That may be so at <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Tokyo Toudai]</span>, but at this place that's overdoing it. Everybody's going to think I'm some sort of mama's boy!" "Absolutely ridiculous!" "Parents don't normally come to college entrance ceremonies!" After Banri's complaints, his mother had returned home the day before. "Well, I've brought this just in case...", she said, then put a companion ticket for the admission ceremony back into her wallet, like it was something precious. He hadn't been all that seriously wishing for her not to come. But then he whined absurdly like a little kid, "I don't want you to come", in what he thought was a normal parent-child relationship.
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"Parents these days don't go to college entrance ceremonies!" "That may be so at Toudai<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Tokyo Toudai]</ref>, but at this place that's overdoing it. Everybody's going to think I'm some sort of mama's boy!" "Absolutely ridiculous!" "Parents don't normally come to college entrance ceremonies!" After Banri's complaints, his mother had returned home the day before. "Well, I've brought this just in case...", she said, then put a companion ticket for the admission ceremony back into her wallet, like it was something precious. He hadn't been all that seriously wishing for her not to come. But then he whined absurdly like a little kid, "I don't want you to come", in what he thought was a normal parent-child relationship.
   
And now, having gotten here, already discouraged, but above all, feeling guilty of being disloyal to his parents. '''(<!-- This sentence needs to be rephrased entirely ~ MatrixM -->)''' It weighed heavily on him. He hadn't even waved. His mother's back had gone through the <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yaesu Yaesu]</span> north entrance ticket gate, disappearing as he saw her off.
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And now, having gotten here, already discouraged, but above all feeling guilty of being disloyal to his parents. It weighed heavily on him. He hadn't even waved. His mother's back had gone through the Yaesu<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yaesu Yaesu]</ref> north entrance ticket gate, disappearing as he saw her off.
   
Without realizing it, he sighed pathetically as he stood still in the entrance, seeing the hair of people descending the steps, laughing together.
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Without realizing it, he let his breath out pathetically, as he stood still in the entrance, seeing the hair color of people descending the steps, laughing together.
   
From where he stood, he could not see anybody else who was alone. He rubbed his eyes with his middle fingers. Maybe it was pollen, or perhaps lack of sleep, but his eyes were itching strangely. A guy who forgot his handkerchief certainly wouldn't have brought eyedrops with him either.
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From where he stood, he could not see anybody else who was alone. He rubbed his eyes with his middle fingers. Maybe it was pollen, or perhaps lack of sleep, but his eyes were itching strangely. A guy who forgot his handkerchief certainly wouldn't have brought eyedrops with him either.
   
Things aren't looking good--- yeah, even as early as today, it looked like things are going to keep on going badly.
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Things aren't looking good--- yeah, even from now on, it looks like things are going to keep on going badly.
   
 
"You gonna ride the train? Or walk?"
 
"You gonna ride the train? Or walk?"
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Do you really want to eat some ice cream right now? The opening ceremony has just ended, and you want ice cream from a convenience store in the middle of the way to the orientation, when the time is limited? He gazed the back of the left guy's head. "Forget it." You on the left, say it! Just what he was going to do while those guys ate ice cream, he had no idea.
 
Do you really want to eat some ice cream right now? The opening ceremony has just ended, and you want ice cream from a convenience store in the middle of the way to the orientation, when the time is limited? He gazed the back of the left guy's head. "Forget it." You on the left, say it! Just what he was going to do while those guys ate ice cream, he had no idea.
   
"In that case I'll have some too. There ought to be a<span class="plainlinks"> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/7-Eleven 7-Eleven]</span> around here somewhere."
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"In that case I'll have some too. There ought to be a 7-11 around here somewhere."
   
"Yeah, there was a 7-Eleven. But where was it, I wonder?"
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"Yeah, there was a 7-11. But where was it, I wonder?"
   
They didn't hear Banri's silent message. Leaving the slow stream of passersby, the two turned down a narrow side street. This was the time when he should have bidden farewell to them, sticking to the other freshmen. Banri should have done that, but he suffered a lapse in judgment. Going along straight ahead, it wasn't easy to distinguish freshmen from businessmen right away, so without thinking he had gone along with the two down the side street. "Ah ah ah." Ignoring Banri, whose conscience tried quietly to hurry him, those two were saying things like, "Hmm, 7-Eleven, 7-Eleven. Over there? Over here?" Those two stayed cool and collected as they went along unfamiliar streets. Perhaps they wanted to get rid of him... among such doubts, he turned left and right, straying from the right way,
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They didn't hear Banri's silent message. Leaving the slow stream of passersby, the two turned down a narrow side street. This was the time when he should have bidden farewell to them, sticking to the other freshmen. Banri should have done that, but he suffered a lapse in judgment. Going along straight ahead, it wasn't easy to distinguish freshmen from businessmen right away, so without thinking he had gone along with the two down the side street. "Ah ah ah." Ignoring Banri, whose conscience tried quietly to hurry him, those two were saying things like, "Hmm, 7-11, 7-11. Over there? Over here?" Those two stayed cool and collected as they went along unfamiliar streets. Perhaps they wanted to get rid of him... among such doubts, he turned left and right, straying from the right way,
   
"Ah, it wasn't a 7-Eleven after all."
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"Ah, it wasn't a 7-11 after all."
   
They were in front of a <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/FamilyMart Family Mart]</span>.
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They were in front of a Family Mart<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/FamilyMart Family Mart]</ref>.
   
 
The two of them entered the store without hesitation, not noticing Banri's presence yet, who stood there blinking his eyes rapidly from anxiety. Not knowing what else to do, he followed suit, leaving a little distance between them. He turned his back to them, pretending to stare at the magazines, while the two were fishing in the ice-cream case. After some ten seconds, he made up his mind, "I'll have to eat too." In order to look normal, he figured he ought to just do the same things those guys were doing. After looking sidelong to make sure the two guys had gone to the cash register ice-cream in their hands, putting on his most innocent expression, he peered into the ice-cream case too. Not to waste any time in choosing, he grabbed the first one at hand, "Ah... I'd like some ice cream after all..." making such a face while the two paid their bill, he queued behind them at the register. However,
 
The two of them entered the store without hesitation, not noticing Banri's presence yet, who stood there blinking his eyes rapidly from anxiety. Not knowing what else to do, he followed suit, leaving a little distance between them. He turned his back to them, pretending to stare at the magazines, while the two were fishing in the ice-cream case. After some ten seconds, he made up his mind, "I'll have to eat too." In order to look normal, he figured he ought to just do the same things those guys were doing. After looking sidelong to make sure the two guys had gone to the cash register ice-cream in their hands, putting on his most innocent expression, he peered into the ice-cream case too. Not to waste any time in choosing, he grabbed the first one at hand, "Ah... I'd like some ice cream after all..." making such a face while the two paid their bill, he queued behind them at the register. However,
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Shocked stiff, saying "no thanks" for a bag, he took the ice-cream as it was, and while putting away his wallet, Banri left the store in a daze. "Which way did those two turn?", he couldn't spot the forms of the two guys. "Calm down for now, I'm not lost yet", he kept reminding himself. "We came from this way, and then perhaps, along that way. I know that much, no problem."
 
Shocked stiff, saying "no thanks" for a bag, he took the ice-cream as it was, and while putting away his wallet, Banri left the store in a daze. "Which way did those two turn?", he couldn't spot the forms of the two guys. "Calm down for now, I'm not lost yet", he kept reminding himself. "We came from this way, and then perhaps, along that way. I know that much, no problem."
   
When he looked at it, he realized what he bought was a <span class="plainlinks">[http://chibadailyphoto.blogspot.com/2008/07/garigari-kun.html Gari-Gari-Kun]</span>. Whatever, let's eat. I should only worry after that. Banri shook his head to clear his panicky mind, then unwrapped his ice-cream. The soda-colored bar was tough from being too frozen, so after biting into it, "I have to put off eating this", he realized.
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When he looked at it, he realized what he bought was a Gari-Gari-Kun"<ref>[http://chibadailyphoto.blogspot.com/2008/07/garigari-kun.html Gari-Gari-Kun]</ref>". Whatever, let's eat. I should only worry after that. Banri shook his head to clear his panicky mind, then unwrapped his ice-cream. The soda-colored bar was tough from being too frozen, so after biting into it, "I have to put off eating this", he realized.
   
 
He took a looong breath.
 
He took a looong breath.
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"Of course. I mean, you don't even have to ask."
 
"Of course. I mean, you don't even have to ask."
   
"I'm from <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shizuoka_Prefecture Shizuoka]</span>. Since last night I live by myself. Where ya from?"
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"I'm from Shizuoka<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shizuoka_Prefecture Shizuoka]</ref>. Since last night I live by myself. Where ya from?"
   
 
"I live close to here, but alone too."
 
"I live close to here, but alone too."
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Nodding, Yanagisawa rapidly muttered the name of his place. Even though Banri was not from Tokyo, he still recognized the name of the prestigious private school. Over the next four years, the two of them would be attending this private university, but that other school was higher in rank in every possible way.
 
Nodding, Yanagisawa rapidly muttered the name of his place. Even though Banri was not from Tokyo, he still recognized the name of the prestigious private school. Over the next four years, the two of them would be attending this private university, but that other school was higher in rank in every possible way.
   
"Wha? Really? How come you didn't just advance to the university!? If you just stay on the <span id="back_escalator">[[Golden Time:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Escalator|escalator]]</span> it always works out... What am I saying? Did I just..."
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"Wha? Really? How come you didn't just advance to the university!? If you just stay on the escalator<ref>refers to the "escalator"/"elevator" system, in which graduates from a high school attached to an university can enter it without admission exam</ref> it always works out... What am I saying? Did I just..."
   
 
Banri reflexively shut up, stopping himself from running off at the mouth. This is wrong. What a fool he was. He was being insensitive. Maybe it wasn't he ''didn't'', but that ''couldn't'' advance. Suddenly being raised from the depths of solitude, his excitement was slipping out of his control.
 
Banri reflexively shut up, stopping himself from running off at the mouth. This is wrong. What a fool he was. He was being insensitive. Maybe it wasn't he ''didn't'', but that ''couldn't'' advance. Suddenly being raised from the depths of solitude, his excitement was slipping out of his control.
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"By no means, I don't mind at all. Well, if I tell it, it's going to be a long story."
 
"By no means, I don't mind at all. Well, if I tell it, it's going to be a long story."
   
Yanagisawa waved one of his hands in front of his fine shaped chin. His gesture of "Let's talk this over slowly some other time", reached Banri as well. "Slowly, some other time." I'll tell you when we have more time. By all means, come over for a visit, OK? You can even have <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chazuke Bubuzuke]</span>. ---Ah!
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Yanagisawa waved one of his hands in front of his fine shaped chin. His gesture of "Let's talk this over slowly some other time", reached Banri as well. "Slowly, some other time." I'll tell you when we have more time. By all means, come over for a visit, OK? You can even have Bubuzuke<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chazuke Bubuzuke]</ref>. ---Ah!
   
 
Slooowly he took one step away from Yanagisawa. "Eh, what?", Yanagisawa looked at Banri's strangely fixed smile, who looked like a fool.
 
Slooowly he took one step away from Yanagisawa. "Eh, what?", Yanagisawa looked at Banri's strangely fixed smile, who looked like a fool.
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"...No, but, its no case talking about it. And by the way... she's not my girlfriend."
 
"...No, but, its no case talking about it. And by the way... she's not my girlfriend."
   
"Not your.. girlfriend!? What did you just say!?"
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"Not your.. girlfriend!? What did you just said!?"
   
 
Isn't? And, while allowing Banri to get closer, the strangely serious Yanagisawa nodded. Then,
 
Isn't? And, while allowing Banri to get closer, the strangely serious Yanagisawa nodded. Then,
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"''Yana''-ssan, get ahold of yourself! Who was that!? I mean, what just happened!?"
 
"''Yana''-ssan, get ahold of yourself! Who was that!? I mean, what just happened!?"
   
Many people were looking towards them, Banri realized. For the most part, everybody was looking at Yanagisawa. He was still sitting on the ground, holding an enormous bouquet of roses, looking a bit out of place in the ordinary streetscape for sure. He was just like a time traveler out of some trendy soap opera from the <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_asset_price_bubble bubble era]</span>. Passing along the street, groups of seemingly new students and businessmen were looking this way. Stares expressing surprise mixed with faint smiles. Some of them were pointing fingers, laughing.
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Many people were looking towards them, Banri realized. For the most part, everybody was looking at Yanagisawa. He was still sitting on the ground, holding an enormous bouquet of roses, looking a bit out of place in the ordinary streetscape for sure. He was just like a time traveler out of some trendy soap opera from the bubble era<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_asset_price_bubble bubble era]</ref>. Passing along the street, groups of seemingly new students and businessmen were looking this way. Stares expressing surprise mixed with faint smiles. Some of them were pointing fingers, laughing.
   
 
Hey, look. Wow, incredible. What's up with that rose man? With that envelope and all, he's one of the freshmen from our school for sure. So mysterious! What is he doing? Isn't that rather awkward? There was muttering and whispering all around.
 
Hey, look. Wow, incredible. What's up with that rose man? With that envelope and all, he's one of the freshmen from our school for sure. So mysterious! What is he doing? Isn't that rather awkward? There was muttering and whispering all around.
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"''Faufaufaufaufaaaaaa!'' ...am I like this I wonder?"
 
"''Faufaufaufaufaaaaaa!'' ...am I like this I wonder?"
   
Yanagisawa's face went white, as if the blood were draining from his head. Reaching over the desk from the seat right behind and a bit above them, both hands holding his head, there floated the perfect smile of Kaga Kouko. Alone amongst the sober shades of blue and grey, shining white in a lace two-piece dress, there she was.
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Yanagisawa's face went white, as if the blood were draining from his head. Reaching over the desk from the seat right behind and a bit above them, both hands holding his head, there floated the perfect smile of Kaga Kouko. Amongst the sober shades of blue and grey, shining alone white in a lace two-piece dress, there she was.
   
 
The whole time - - - she had been just behind them. Probably.
 
The whole time - - - she had been just behind them. Probably.
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"What was that for?"
 
"What was that for?"
   
Kouko, still smiling but with a cold voice as sharp as a knife, folded her arms. Striking a pose with her chin lifted a bit, she looked down at Yanagisawa. Her large eyes shone like black jewels, mirroring the shadow of her long eyelashes. In all this, she seemed not to have noticed Banri at all.
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Kouko, still smiling but with a cold voice sharp as a knife, folded her arms. Striking a pose with her chin lifted a bit, she looked down at Yanagisawa. Her large eyes shone like black jewels, mirroring the shadow of her long eyelashes. In all this, she seemed not to have noticed Banri at all.
   
"Don't you ask that! What in the world are you doing!? Why are you here at this orientation!?"
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"Don't you ask that! What in the world are you doing!? Why are you here in this orientation!?"
   
 
"I yielded to your desire and matched mine to it! I enrolled here too."
 
"I yielded to your desire and matched mine to it! I enrolled here too."
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Letting out a small sigh, Kouko slid her fingers down her glossy hair which reached below to where her chest swelled out.
 
Letting out a small sigh, Kouko slid her fingers down her glossy hair which reached below to where her chest swelled out.
   
"A small change was definitely required, but it wasn't difficult. Student life without you by my side would be meaningless. I had been thinking that you and I would go to college together, taking classes in business so we could take over my father's business. But I don't mind. It's the same for me whether my husband owns his own business or works as a corporate lawyer. Mitsuo, you betrayed me, planning to secretly take an outside examination. When I found out I was surprised, of course... but, rather than making a fuss to forcefully stop you, I thought it better to follow you. So I took almost all the entrance exams you took as well."
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"A small change was definitely required, but it wasn't difficult. Student life without you by my side would be meaningless. I had been thinking that you and I would go to college together, taking classes in business so we could take over my father's business. But I don't mind. It's the same for me whether my husband owns his own business or works as a corporation lawyer. Mitsuo, you betrayed me, planning to secretly take an outside examination. When I found out I was surprised, of course... but, rather than making a fuss to forcefully stop you, I thought it better to follow you. So I took almost all the entrance exams you took as well."
   
 
"...How, could the school of my choice, have gotten out... I asked my homeroom teacher to keep it secret, and yet... I didn't tell my friends, not anybody that I was taking the test..."
 
"...How, could the school of my choice, have gotten out... I asked my homeroom teacher to keep it secret, and yet... I didn't tell my friends, not anybody that I was taking the test..."
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Then he realized, after all, that he was alone again.
 
Then he realized, after all, that he was alone again.
   
Left behind in the lecture hall, Banri looked around. Yanagisawa and Kouko's argument had drawn looks, and some glances were still turned towards Banri too. Ill at ease, he hurriedly threw the writing instruments left scattered on the chairs, into their envelopes.
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Left behind in the lecture hall, Banri looked around. Yanagisawa and Kouko's argument had drawn looks, and some glances were still turned towards Banri too. Ill at easy, he hurriedly threw the writing instruments left scattered on the chairs, into their envelopes.
   
 
"''Yana''-ssan has left everything behind..."
 
"''Yana''-ssan has left everything behind..."
   
Gathering under his arm printed handouts of important stuff, syllabi, and various things belonging to Yanagisawa who had forgotten about them, Banri left the lecture hall in long strides up the stairs. They had exchanged their cell-phone numbers and e-mail addresses anyway, so returning them tomorrow won't be a problem.
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Gathering under his arm printed handouts of important stuff, syllabi, and various things belonging to Yanagisawa who had forgotten about them, Banri left the lecture hall in long strides up the stairs. They have exchanged their cell-phone numbers and e-mail addresses anyway, so returning them tomorrow won't be a problem.
   
 
Leaving through one of the many doors out to the corridor, he joined the swarm of the other freshmen. Plans for going out, first time introductions, the voices and laughter here and there echoed like a small explosion. The school building was old. The light coming from the flourescent fixtures was going yellow, there were braces here and there to stiffen the walls against earthquakes, and for some reason the windows had iron grillwork fitted to them. It was said that at one time this college had been the site of a violent student demonstration, and those things must have been the remains of that time.
 
Leaving through one of the many doors out to the corridor, he joined the swarm of the other freshmen. Plans for going out, first time introductions, the voices and laughter here and there echoed like a small explosion. The school building was old. The light coming from the flourescent fixtures was going yellow, there were braces here and there to stiffen the walls against earthquakes, and for some reason the windows had iron grillwork fitted to them. It was said that at one time this college had been the site of a violent student demonstration, and those things must have been the remains of that time.
   
Carrying at his side two people's worth of envelopes, Banri slowly descended the steps. In the designated smoking corner of the lobby, some freshmen (it was doubtful whether they had turned twenty or not), suits still on, were already hanging out. Glancing sideways, viewing the destination of the smoke they blew, following the guy in front of him, Banri also left the building.
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Carrying at his side two people's worth of envelopes, Banri slowly descended the steps. In the designated smoking corner of the lobby, some freshmen (it was doubtful whether they turned twenty or not), suits still on, were already hanging out. Glancing sideways, viewing the destination of the smoke they blew, following the guy in front of him, Banri also left the building.
   
 
That very moment.
 
That very moment.
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There was a group in varsity jackets with the college name on them, who for some reason were wearing swimsuits and shouldering oxygen tanks. There were masked pro wrestlers in tights building a small temporary ring, miniskirted lacrosse girls with polo shirts, each of them so pretty like a model, and some otherwise unidentifiable guys, who were selling cold drinks from an enormous cooler for 50 yen apiece. "Information on leisurely taking lectures! Everything is printed here!", yelled a gang of reporter-like guys, waving something resembling newspapers, with Mass Communications Research Society written on their sashes.
 
There was a group in varsity jackets with the college name on them, who for some reason were wearing swimsuits and shouldering oxygen tanks. There were masked pro wrestlers in tights building a small temporary ring, miniskirted lacrosse girls with polo shirts, each of them so pretty like a model, and some otherwise unidentifiable guys, who were selling cold drinks from an enormous cooler for 50 yen apiece. "Information on leisurely taking lectures! Everything is printed here!", yelled a gang of reporter-like guys, waving something resembling newspapers, with Mass Communications Research Society written on their sashes.
   
Even the other uniformed bodies gathered around, tennis, and then judo, which together with the American Football club were suddenly livened up by cheerleaders. Swordfighting and archery were there too. The people in tuxedos and dresses must have been the ballroom dancing club. A cheering party dressed in black school uniforms, they were difficult to approach.
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Other uniformed bodies were crowded about, tennis, then judo, cheerleaders lifting up others in a guerrilla like fashion, together with the American football club. Swordfighting and archery were there too. The people in tuxedos and dresses must have been the ballroom dancing club. A cheering party dressed in black school uniforms, they were difficult to approach.
   
There slightly hunched and short built, somewhat baby-faced, without any aspiration stood an idle Banri. For this, only the clubs with cultural aspects called out to him. "The trains will always be on time!" ...Railroad Research Club? "Why not go to the beach twice a year?!" ...Manga Culture Research Club? "Sunday morning is chaos!" ...Anime Research Club. And stranger, "Detective Novel Mystery Only Research Club", and "Maze Research Club", and even, this one catching his imagination a little, "Gigantic Structure Exploration Club". What could "On <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mount_Takao Mount Takao]</span>, even you can shake the mountain priest's hand" be?
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There slightly hunched and short built, somewhat baby-faced, without any aspiration stood an idle Banri. For this, only the clubs with cultural aspects called out to him. "The trains will always be on time!" ...Railroad Research Club? "Why not go to the beach twice a year?!" ...Manga Culture Research Club? "Sunday morning is chaos!" ...Anime Research Club. And stranger, "Detective Novel Mystery Only Research Club", and "Maze Research Club", and even, this one catching his imagination a little, "Gigantic Structure Exploration Club". What could "On Mount Takao<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mount_Takao Mount Takao]</ref>, even you can shake the mountain priest's hand" be?
   
 
He came back to himself to find that a mountain of leaflets had been pushed into his hands. Washed away by the raging wave of students from all grades jumbled together, Banri couldn't just stand still, and ended up at the center of the square. He intended to select which club they'd belong to with Yanagisawa, but in this madness, this uproar, he had no idea whether he could manage a clean escape.
 
He came back to himself to find that a mountain of leaflets had been pushed into his hands. Washed away by the raging wave of students from all grades jumbled together, Banri couldn't just stand still, and ended up at the center of the square. He intended to select which club they'd belong to with Yanagisawa, but in this madness, this uproar, he had no idea whether he could manage a clean escape.
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Offered, rather insistently, a bowl of green tea, he tasted it while trying not to let the crowd rock his elbow. ''Gah'', he drank the bitter stuff and returned the bowl. ''The way to drink! Yes, good guy!'' Clapping, the tea club moved on to their next target, ''drink driink!'' To the attack.
 
Offered, rather insistently, a bowl of green tea, he tasted it while trying not to let the crowd rock his elbow. ''Gah'', he drank the bitter stuff and returned the bowl. ''The way to drink! Yes, good guy!'' Clapping, the tea club moved on to their next target, ''drink driink!'' To the attack.
   
The back of his hand might have turned green as he wiped his mouth. At that moment - - - A loud whistle burst his ears. He looked up in surprise. From the other side of the campus, a group, playing Latin music of intense, danceable rhythm, was separating the herd of people, cutting through the crowd. The <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Whistle#Music samba whistle]</span> was maddening. They had messed up hair, their own or wigs, gaudy beads woven into cornrows and really long dreadlocks, men and women alike dressed in bright green tight fitting leotards. They all had musical instruments in their hands. Singing in loud voices, they were a parade.
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The back of his hand might have turned green as he wiped his mouth. At that moment - - - A loud whistle burst his ears. He looked up in surprise. From the other side of the campus, a group, playing Latin music of intense, danceable rhythm, was separating the herd of people, cutting through the crowd. The samba whistle<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Whistle#Music samba whistle]</ref> was maddening. They had messed up hair, their own or wigs, gaudy beads woven into cornrows and really long dreadlocks, men and women alike dressed in bright green tight fitting leotards. They all had musical instruments in their hands. Singing in loud voices, they were a parade.
   
 
Incredible--- his mouth was hanging open already.
 
Incredible--- his mouth was hanging open already.
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Stretching out both hands, index fingers pointing to the sky, he gave a mighty pose, shouting with all his heart.
 
Stretching out both hands, index fingers pointing to the sky, he gave a mighty pose, shouting with all his heart.
   
At almost the same time, somebody spun behind him, his headdress scoring a direct hit on the back of Banri's head. Crack! An easy knockout, he was about to fall clumsily flat on his face --- or so he thought for a moment.
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At almost the same time, somebody spin behind him, his headdress scoring a direct hit on the back of Banri's head. Crack! An easy knockout, he was about to fall clumsily flat on his face --- or so he thought for a moment.
   
 
His arm was grabbed hard, he was pulled up.
 
His arm was grabbed hard, he was pulled up.
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The spectacle was outright surreal.
 
The spectacle was outright surreal.
   
The person who helped Banri --- was wearing a <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kimono kimono]</span>, white with flower patterns. A bright scarlet <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Obi_(sash) obi belt]</span>. And a <span class="plainlinks">[http://bartman905.wordpress.com/2010/12/04/amigasa hat shaped like a crescent moon]</span>. With the hat was secured under her chin with a red cord, her face was almost half hidden. What he could see his eyes were drawn to: full lips, tinged a vivid deep red. Like a scene from a period drama, in the stance of a traveler collapsed and nearly dead on the street, Banri had been caught by a rescuing goddess looking as if she were from the <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edo_period Edo period]</span>.
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The person who helped Banri --- was wearing a kimono<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kimono kimono]</ref>, white with flower patterns. A bright scarlet obi belt<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Obi_(sash) obi belt]</ref>. And a hat shaped like a crescent moon<ref>[http://bartman905.wordpress.com/2010/12/04/amigasa hat shaped like a crescent moon]</ref>. With the hat was secured under her chin with a red cord, her face was almost half hidden. What he could see his eyes were drawn to: full lips, tinged a vivid deep red. Like a scene from a period drama, in the stance of a traveler collapsed and nearly dead on the street, Banri had been caught by a rescuing goddess looking as if she were from the Edo period<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edo_period Edo period]</ref>.
   
 
"Which department are you from?"
 
"Which department are you from?"
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Having forgotten his lonely future for the moment, the spring just starting looked to be exciting.
 
Having forgotten his lonely future for the moment, the spring just starting looked to be exciting.
   
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