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“......You are really late.”
 
“......You are really late.”
   
''(You old sly fox, running away on your own.)''
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''You old sly fox, running away on your own.''
   
 
Juugo said, without even bothering to keep his unpleasant thoughts to himself.
 
Juugo said, without even bothering to keep his unpleasant thoughts to himself.
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Genma brought the issue across faintly. It was a critical period now, so there was no time to bother with that stubborn girl.
 
Genma brought the issue across faintly. It was a critical period now, so there was no time to bother with that stubborn girl.
   
''(Once we know the true identity of our enemy, feel free to be angry as much as you want!)''
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''Once we know the true identity of our enemy, feel free to be angry as much as you want!''
   
 
Gemna's thoughts were blunt, even though it would be difficult to say such things out loud.
 
Gemna's thoughts were blunt, even though it would be difficult to say such things out loud.
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Kazuma realized that he was no longer afraid of Genma like he was in the past. Through this newfound arrogance, Kazuma felt a certain sense of warmth from the absence of fear.
 
Kazuma realized that he was no longer afraid of Genma like he was in the past. Through this newfound arrogance, Kazuma felt a certain sense of warmth from the absence of fear.
   
''(This stubborn old man didn’t change a bit…)''
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''This stubborn old man didn’t change a bit…''
   
 
Kazuma stopped paying attention to whatever Genma may have been saying at the other end of the phone, indulging himself in his own emotions.
 
Kazuma stopped paying attention to whatever Genma may have been saying at the other end of the phone, indulging himself in his own emotions.
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“I must meet with you. I am going over to you now, is that okay?”
 
“I must meet with you. I am going over to you now, is that okay?”
   
''(Good chance.)''
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''Good chance.''
   
 
Kazuma needed to clarify one thing ever since he heard his father’s voice again after four years.
 
Kazuma needed to clarify one thing ever since he heard his father’s voice again after four years.
   
''(I want to know whether I have surpassed that man... Whether I have become stronger than the man who ordered me around in the past. No matter how, I must verify this.)''
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''I want to know whether I have surpassed that man... Whether I have become stronger than the man who ordered me around in the past. No matter how, I must verify this.''
   
 
“No, now is not a convenient time.”
 
“No, now is not a convenient time.”
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Looking at his trembling left hand, Kazuma gave a bitter smile. His left hand was shaking so much that he could not control its strength, but he was not ashamed of that.
 
Looking at his trembling left hand, Kazuma gave a bitter smile. His left hand was shaking so much that he could not control its strength, but he was not ashamed of that.
   
''(Yeah, of course I'm scared. After all, I am challenging the strongest practitioner of the Kannagi clan.)''
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''Yeah, of course I'm scared. After all, I am challenging the strongest practitioner of the Kannagi clan.''
   
 
He clenched his left fist tightly, as though intending to trap his fear within it.
 
He clenched his left fist tightly, as though intending to trap his fear within it.
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Genma did not take any action, simply standing there as the blades came at him. As the wind blades flew into the flames wrapped around his body... They vanished without a trace.
 
Genma did not take any action, simply standing there as the blades came at him. As the wind blades flew into the flames wrapped around his body... They vanished without a trace.
   
''(This cannot be...)''
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''This cannot be...''
   
 
Realizing the huge gap between their strength, Kazuma was so shocked that he was at a loss for words. Genma leisurely watched Kazuma’s expression.
 
Realizing the huge gap between their strength, Kazuma was so shocked that he was at a loss for words. Genma leisurely watched Kazuma’s expression.
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Forcefully taking down all of the flames was not an option. The power of the branch family could not be compared with that of the main family, so Kazuma had no confidence to survive for even one second with his wind barrier.
 
Forcefully taking down all of the flames was not an option. The power of the branch family could not be compared with that of the main family, so Kazuma had no confidence to survive for even one second with his wind barrier.
   
''(Well, it's not like I can't do it. But now is not the time.)''
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''Well, it's not like I can't do it. But now is not the time.''
   
 
Having escaped from the firestorm, Kazuma waited calmly for an opportunity to strike. According to Genma’s true strength, that was nothing at all. There would have been nothing to be proud of even if he had blocked that attack.
 
Having escaped from the firestorm, Kazuma waited calmly for an opportunity to strike. According to Genma’s true strength, that was nothing at all. There would have been nothing to be proud of even if he had blocked that attack.
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Genma ignored Kazuma's ridiculous words and began to concentrate. He gathered his power attentively, creating an even stronger power.
 
Genma ignored Kazuma's ridiculous words and began to concentrate. He gathered his power attentively, creating an even stronger power.
   
''(I can see it clearly...)''
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''I can see it clearly...''
   
 
In contrast to his earlier, flippant expression, Kazuma mobilized all of his energy to try to see through Genma's attack. There would only be one chance, so there was no room for failure.
 
In contrast to his earlier, flippant expression, Kazuma mobilized all of his energy to try to see through Genma's attack. There would only be one chance, so there was no room for failure.
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Genma had no intention of killing Kazuma, as he did not forget that his main objective was to capture Kazuma. Therefore, Genma released a tremendous amount of power while keeping it at a level that would leave the target barely alive.
 
Genma had no intention of killing Kazuma, as he did not forget that his main objective was to capture Kazuma. Therefore, Genma released a tremendous amount of power while keeping it at a level that would leave the target barely alive.
   
''(......Now!!)''
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''......Now!!''
   
 
Kaboom!
 
Kaboom!
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Genma was still engulfed in flames. Though the results were still unclear, the surroundings looked as though a bomb has just exploded. The plants fluttered away from Genma, and any movable objects were blown from sight.
 
Genma was still engulfed in flames. Though the results were still unclear, the surroundings looked as though a bomb has just exploded. The plants fluttered away from Genma, and any movable objects were blown from sight.
   
''(Even though it wasn't a fatal hit, he should have at least taken some damage!)''
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''Even though it wasn't a fatal hit, he should have at least taken some damage!''
   
 
As the flame subsided, the scene inside became clear. What Kazuma saw inside was...
 
As the flame subsided, the scene inside became clear. What Kazuma saw inside was...
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But he still could not rest yet. The wind brought a strong scent of fire.
 
But he still could not rest yet. The wind brought a strong scent of fire.
   
''(Kannagi again? When will they ever learn......)''
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''Kannagi again? When will they ever learn......''
   
 
Even though it was troublesome, Kazuma had no intention of running away, as the enemy was waiting by the main entrance of the hotel. Kazuma walked straight to the source.
 
Even though it was troublesome, Kazuma had no intention of running away, as the enemy was waiting by the main entrance of the hotel. Kazuma walked straight to the source.
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Due to the darkness of the night, Kazuma was unable to see the person’s face clearly, though he could make out a very small figure. The power he possessed was weaker than Ayano's, but on a different level compared to Shingo and Takeya.
 
Due to the darkness of the night, Kazuma was unable to see the person’s face clearly, though he could make out a very small figure. The power he possessed was weaker than Ayano's, but on a different level compared to Shingo and Takeya.
   
''(......? Was there such a person in the Kannagi family......?)''
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''......? Was there such a person in the Kannagi family......?''
   
 
The shadow approached the doubtful Kazuma without warning. His face was lit up by the streetlights, revealing that he was younger than expected. A child, around ten or eleven years old, walked up to Kazuma.
 
The shadow approached the doubtful Kazuma without warning. His face was lit up by the streetlights, revealing that he was younger than expected. A child, around ten or eleven years old, walked up to Kazuma.
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“Frankly speaking, I don’t really believe it...... But if you are here now, then does that mean that father lost?”
 
“Frankly speaking, I don’t really believe it...... But if you are here now, then does that mean that father lost?”
   
''(Father...?)''
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''Father...?''
   
 
Later on, whenever Kazuma would recall this scene, he would feel really stupid. However, right now he could not understand what this youth meant, so he asked directly,
 
Later on, whenever Kazuma would recall this scene, he would feel really stupid. However, right now he could not understand what this youth meant, so he asked directly,
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Kazuma clapped his hands and called out his younger brother’s name, who was apparently twelve by now.
 
Kazuma clapped his hands and called out his younger brother’s name, who was apparently twelve by now.
   
''(Oh yeah, I have a brother.)''
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''Oh yeah, I have a brother.''
   
 
Though, if he had said that out loud, Ren would probably have looked down on him forever, so Kazuma forcefully kept his words inside his mouth.
 
Though, if he had said that out loud, Ren would probably have looked down on him forever, so Kazuma forcefully kept his words inside his mouth.
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Ren pulled the towel away, letting out a cheerful cry. He jumped over the table and directly leaped into Kazuma's chest, hugging him.
 
Ren pulled the towel away, letting out a cheerful cry. He jumped over the table and directly leaped into Kazuma's chest, hugging him.
   
''(I knew this was going to happen...)''
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''I knew this was going to happen...''
   
 
Kazuma gently caressed Ren's head, looking at the ceiling.
 
Kazuma gently caressed Ren's head, looking at the ceiling.
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Upon realizing this, Kazuma found it even harder to hide his suspicions.
 
Upon realizing this, Kazuma found it even harder to hide his suspicions.
   
''(Is this kid really twelve? Is it okay to be this cute?)''
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''Is this kid really twelve? Is it okay to be this cute?''
   
 
Kazuma could not help but fear for Ren's future, but he immediately stopped his thoughts, realizing that something weird could arise.
 
Kazuma could not help but fear for Ren's future, but he immediately stopped his thoughts, realizing that something weird could arise.
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Kazuma woke up upon feeling an evil presence and quickly jumped off the bed. As he did so, he sensed some black object passing by slowly beneath his feet.
 
Kazuma woke up upon feeling an evil presence and quickly jumped off the bed. As he did so, he sensed some black object passing by slowly beneath his feet.
   
''(This is......!)''
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''This is......!''
   
 
Kazuma stepped onto the trembling floor and headed to Ren's room.
 
Kazuma stepped onto the trembling floor and headed to Ren's room.
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Ren stood on his own feet, lifting his head to look up. What he saw was unbelievable.
 
Ren stood on his own feet, lifting his head to look up. What he saw was unbelievable.
   
''(The hotel is falling from the sky......?)''
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''The hotel is falling from the sky......?''
   
 
The hotel was cleanly sliced through about one third of its height from the top, and was now sliding down from there. A building that was approximately a hundred meters in height was falling from a height of two hundred meters. This was easily comparable to a giant meteor dropping onto Earth, a catastrophe beyond human comprehension.
 
The hotel was cleanly sliced through about one third of its height from the top, and was now sliding down from there. A building that was approximately a hundred meters in height was falling from a height of two hundred meters. This was easily comparable to a giant meteor dropping onto Earth, a catastrophe beyond human comprehension.
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Kazuma's words just now flitted into Ren’s head.
 
Kazuma's words just now flitted into Ren’s head.
   
''(This...... was done by a human......?)''
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''This...... was done by a human......?''
   
 
The unlucky people who were in the path of the cut dropped down one by one like abandoned puppets. The only fortunate thing for them was that they probably had no time to even be afraid when their bodies were sliced. The upper halves of the corpses were left, indicating pieces of flesh that no longer had any life.
 
The unlucky people who were in the path of the cut dropped down one by one like abandoned puppets. The only fortunate thing for them was that they probably had no time to even be afraid when their bodies were sliced. The upper halves of the corpses were left, indicating pieces of flesh that no longer had any life.
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The high rise building, famed to be the tallest in Japan... Yokohama's Landmark Tower was completely destroyed.
 
The high rise building, famed to be the tallest in Japan... Yokohama's Landmark Tower was completely destroyed.
   
''(This...... This can't be...... Such a thing......)''
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''This...... This can't be...... Such a thing......''
   
 
Unable to look at the scene directly, Ren shifted his line of vision and looked down, suddenly noticing the floor around him.
 
Unable to look at the scene directly, Ren shifted his line of vision and looked down, suddenly noticing the floor around him.
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''That thing'' remained silent. Even if it couldn't talk, its attitude could not be more obvious. Even a novice would recognize the killing intent that it gave off, an aura so cold that it gave the illusion of trapping him in an ice cavern.
 
''That thing'' remained silent. Even if it couldn't talk, its attitude could not be more obvious. Even a novice would recognize the killing intent that it gave off, an aura so cold that it gave the illusion of trapping him in an ice cavern.
   
''(Strike before it does!!)''
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''Strike before it does!!''
   
 
Kazuma fired a gust of powerful wind without warning. He did not go easy on the youma. In fact, he could not go easy on him. With an intent of maintaining his relentless attack until the enemy was destroyed, he continuously released gusts of wind.
 
Kazuma fired a gust of powerful wind without warning. He did not go easy on the youma. In fact, he could not go easy on him. With an intent of maintaining his relentless attack until the enemy was destroyed, he continuously released gusts of wind.
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The enemy was clearly stronger than Kazuma. But even so, Kazuma could not just give in. As a practitioner, there was no room for such unorthodoxy to exist.
 
The enemy was clearly stronger than Kazuma. But even so, Kazuma could not just give in. As a practitioner, there was no room for such unorthodoxy to exist.
   
''(Should I reveal my true strength...? After all, Ren already knows...)''
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''Should I reveal my true strength...? After all, Ren already knows...''
   
 
The moment he made his decision, Ren's screams reached Kazuma's ears.
 
The moment he made his decision, Ren's screams reached Kazuma's ears.
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Pressing on the wound on his throat, Kazuma was shocked.
 
Pressing on the wound on his throat, Kazuma was shocked.
   
''(How can there be a second person here......? This should not be possible- Ah!)''
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''How can there be a second person here......? This should not be possible- Ah!''
   
 
Kazuma had completely forgotten. The black wind not only does not obey Kazuma’s will, it could even hide others in its presence.
 
Kazuma had completely forgotten. The black wind not only does not obey Kazuma’s will, it could even hide others in its presence.
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The wind began to shine with an azure glow. The black wind retreated as though it was fearful of that glow.
 
The wind began to shine with an azure glow. The black wind retreated as though it was fearful of that glow.
   
''(I'm going to kill you!)''
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''I'm going to kill you!''
   
 
As Kazuma gathered the azure wind into a usable power......
 
As Kazuma gathered the azure wind into a usable power......
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Kazuma mumbled faintly, and then descended away from the battlefield-like ruins of the hotel.
 
Kazuma mumbled faintly, and then descended away from the battlefield-like ruins of the hotel.
   
''(Wait for me, Ren! I will definitely save you!)''
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''Wait for me, Ren! I will definitely save you!''
   
 
Kazuma put on a completely clueless expression as he walked past the police and fire-fighters who were gathered, mixing himself into the crowds.
 
Kazuma put on a completely clueless expression as he walked past the police and fire-fighters who were gathered, mixing himself into the crowds.

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