Talk:Toradora!:Volume10 Chapter3
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The first line is very awkward, but I am not sure what the original meant. The current text is "There were still a little bit of snow ..., but they were already stained ..."
I can see two possible rewrites:
There were still little bits of snow..., but they were already stained...
The second is:
There was still a little bit of snow..., but it was already stained...