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"The black-dressed girl raised her kin in a prickly attitude and..." |
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I don't think kin here is the right word. Maybe chin, or face? I also noticed that "black-dressed" is used really often, both in this chapter and chapter 1. [[User:Unkani|Unkani]] 23:35, 11 August 2011 (UCT) |
I don't think kin here is the right word. Maybe chin, or face? I also noticed that "black-dressed" is used really often, both in this chapter and chapter 1. [[User:Unkani|Unkani]] 23:35, 11 August 2011 (UCT) |
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| β | :Yes, it was "chin". And yes, "black-dressed girl" is a common way the author refers to Dalian. I didn't change those when translating, but I don't mind if you replace some of them. [[User:EusthEnoptEron|EusthEnoptEron]] 04:48, 12 August 2011 (UCT) |
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