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“You’ll tell me, right? Tell me about your sister’s troubles, Yoshino Ikumi. That’s why you approached me, right? If it’s me.”
 
“You’ll tell me, right? Tell me about your sister’s troubles, Yoshino Ikumi. That’s why you approached me, right? If it’s me.”
   
Keima said confidently.
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Keima said confidentally.
   
 
“I’ll definitely save your sister. I can do it.”
 
“I’ll definitely save your sister. I can do it.”
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Yoshino Ikumi continued to stare at Keima silently for a while, and then sighed in the same manner, looked forward and said,
 
Yoshino Ikumi continued to stare at Keima silently for a while, and then sighed in the same manner, looked forward and said,
   
“Un, that’s how the case is. I don’t know how you knew this, Katsuragi-kun, but it’s just as you said. Onee-chan was always envious of me, but it seemed to have become even more intense. ‘Let alone you, Ikumi…I guess I want to be a girl who can interact with others too’—that was what she said. We, well, I guess that’s it. She felt even more bothered after liking you, Katsuragi-kun, I guess. Maybe she thought this way because she wanted to be on good relations with you?”
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“Un, that’s how the case is. I don’t know how you knew this, Katsuragi-kun, but it’s just as you said. Onee-chan was always envious of me, but it seemed to have become even more intense. ‘Let alone you, Ikumi…I guess I want to be a girl who can interact with others too’—that was what she said. We, well, I guess that’s it. She felt even more bothered after liking you, Katsuragi-kun, I guess. Maybe she thought this way because she wanted to on good relations with you?”
   
 
“…
 
“…
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She didn’t mean for this to happen, but that her body was saying its own thing and responding in such a manner. Keima blushed slightly as well, but never ever rejected Yoshino Asami.
 
She didn’t mean for this to happen, but that her body was saying its own thing and responding in such a manner. Keima blushed slightly as well, but never ever rejected Yoshino Asami.
   
She would cry at one moment and make a ruckus at the next moment. The four people finally finished this one-of-a-kind facility, and Elsie and Yoshino Ikumi seemed like they really enjoyed it.
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She would cry at one moment and make a ruckus at the next moment. The four people finally finished this one-of-its-kind facility, and Elsie and Yoshino Ikumi seemed like they really enjoyed it.
   
 
After completing everything, they changed back into their own clothes inside the changing room. Even after walking for quite a while from the haunted house, Yoshino Asami’s heart was still beating wildly.
 
After completing everything, they changed back into their own clothes inside the changing room. Even after walking for quite a while from the haunted house, Yoshino Asami’s heart was still beating wildly.
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On hearing this, Yoshino Ikumi said,
 
On hearing this, Yoshino Ikumi said,
   
“I got it! So we’re going to get onee-chan to get used to it in steps, right? First, Katsuragi-kun, then, us, and finally, the rest. In that case, even onee-chan who’s not used to group gatherings can ease her burden a little~I see. As expected of Katsuragi-kun!”
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“I got it! So we’re going to get onee-chan to get used in steps, right? First, Katsuragi-kun, then, us, and finally, the rest. In that case, even onee-chan who’s not used to group gatherings can ease her burden a little~I see. As expected of Katsuragi-kun!”
   
 
She said that in amazement. Elsie also said,
 
She said that in amazement. Elsie also said,
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They were split into two teams in a competition.
 
They were split into two teams in a competition.
   
Right now, the competition was intense. Teammates were high-fiving with each other, and it was really bustling. Then, everyone was having tea inside Dean Land and chatting away.
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Right now, the competition was intense. Teammates were high touching with each other, and it was really bustling. Then, everyone was having tea inside Dean Land and chatting away.
   
 
Excluding Yoshino Ikumi, who recruited everyone, they all met for the first time. However, everyone got together rather well, and the boys and girls with quite the good personalities didn’t seem to show any estrangement. Elsie and Yoshino Ikumi were laughing from start to end, and the important Yoshino Asami looked rather ‘normal’ as she blended in.
 
Excluding Yoshino Ikumi, who recruited everyone, they all met for the first time. However, everyone got together rather well, and the boys and girls with quite the good personalities didn’t seem to show any estrangement. Elsie and Yoshino Ikumi were laughing from start to end, and the important Yoshino Asami looked rather ‘normal’ as she blended in.
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Like for example, being smacked lightly on the hand.
 
Like for example, being smacked lightly on the hand.
   
“When my mom did this to me back when I was young, I really hated her for it, but now, I’m really grateful to her for training me to be such a refined lady.”
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“When my mom did this to me back when I was young, I really hated for it, but now, I’m really grateful to her for training me to be such a refined lady.”
   
 
Her mother would emphasize this in a teary manner.
 
Her mother would emphasize this in a teary manner.
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“Because I’m an angel!”
 
“Because I’m an angel!”
   
That’s what she really thought back then,
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That’s what she really thought back that,
   
 
“So I have to save him!”
 
“So I have to save him!”
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The boy was kissing another girl…
 
The boy was kissing another girl…
   
Nothing else really mattered then.
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Nothing else really matter then.
   
   

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