Editing Tsurugi no Joou to Rakuin no Ko:Volume 1 Chapter 7

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“I cannot use swords, spears or bows. But, I have sharp eyes, a mouth that can speak, a crowd of comrades risking their lives with me, these are my weapons to victory. That is why every person, thing and object is in the position they are supposed to be at. Paola is one case…… and you are another.”
 
“I cannot use swords, spears or bows. But, I have sharp eyes, a mouth that can speak, a crowd of comrades risking their lives with me, these are my weapons to victory. That is why every person, thing and object is in the position they are supposed to be at. Paola is one case…… and you are another.”
   
Chris raised his head in surprise and saw Francesca smiling happily. She stretched her hand out to give him a push, “You came to tell me that you want to quit my personal guard, didn’t you? Wanting me to switch you to the assault unit?”
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Chris raised his head in surprise and saw Francesca smile happily. She stretched her hand out to give him a push, “You came to tell me that you want to quit my personal guard, didn’t you? Wanting me to switch you to the assault unit?”
   
 
“Why…… do you…… know?”
 
“Why…… do you…… know?”
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It was indeed so. Chris felt as if his thoughts were completely seen through by Francesca.
 
It was indeed so. Chris felt as if his thoughts were completely seen through by Francesca.
   
“It’s because you’re always wearing an anxious expression, looking like you’re in so much despair that you are almost going to suffocate as long as the people around you are living people.”
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“It’s because you’re always wearing an anxious expression, looking like you’re in so much despair that you are almost going to suffocate as long as the people are you are living people.”
   
 
Francesca laughed meaningfully, her laughter sounding like the tinkle of bells. Chris felt ashamed when he saw her smile, and thus looked away.
 
Francesca laughed meaningfully, her laughter sounding like the tinkle of bells. Chris felt ashamed when he saw her smile, and thus looked away.
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''— We’re not even enemies right now.''
 
''— We’re not even enemies right now.''
   
Chris was puzzled. Right now, whenever he talked to<!--seems more appropriate then "touched" --chancs --> Minerva, she wouldn’t even look at him, so they didn’t have any proper conversations at all.
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Chris was puzzled. Right now, whenever he touched Minerva, she wouldn’t even look at him, so they didn’t have any proper conversations at all.
   
 
“You are still unwilling to tell me? What in the world happened between you and Minerva?”
 
“You are still unwilling to tell me? What in the world happened between you and Minerva?”

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