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The brands are symbols of the gods power, only the three Grand Duke families are supposed to have them. Silvia did not understand, how could this boy named Chris have such a brand.
 
The brands are symbols of the gods power, only the three Grand Duke families are supposed to have them. Silvia did not understand, how could this boy named Chris have such a brand.
   
"Tomorrow this humble servant will bring men associated with the Great House of Epimex for an audience with your majesty, requesting your majesty to carefully look at their appearances."
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"Tomorrow this humble servant will bring men associated with the Great House of Epimex for an audience with your majesty, asking your majesty to carefully to look at their appearance."
   
 
"Good."
 
"Good."
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The knight walked past the old Shrine Maiden, came up to the bed and knelt on the ground. When he bowed his head, the hair on his head was touching the ground as well.
 
The knight walked past the old Shrine Maiden, came up to the bed and knelt on the ground. When he bowed his head, the hair on his head was touching the ground as well.
   
"Revered Queen, able to understand destiny through and through, and all of the Gods' will, I request to be allowed into Your Majesty's holy grace."<ref group="2-4">'''Revered Queen''': The whole line is a sort of ceremony used when meeting the Queen </ref>
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"Revered Queen, able to understand through and through destiny, and all of the Gods, I request to be allowed into Your Majesty's holy grace."<ref group="2-4">'''Revered Queen''': The whole line is a sort of ceremony used when meeting the Queen </ref>
   
 
The knight meticulously uttered the Holy Words. His voice sounding like a glass pearl, transparent and clear
 
The knight meticulously uttered the Holy Words. His voice sounding like a glass pearl, transparent and clear
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Silvia made a brief response and tried to motion him to stand up. However the knight's forehead was still pressing on the floor, his ears red at the base didn't move the entire time -- what's going on...
 
Silvia made a brief response and tried to motion him to stand up. However the knight's forehead was still pressing on the floor, his ears red at the base didn't move the entire time -- what's going on...
   
"Go ahead, raise your head."
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"Go ahead raise your head."
   
 
"Yes... No, I fear... That... Your servant," he paused for a moment then continued, "Your Majesty... Your Majesty just woke up, and did not change clothes..."
 
"Yes... No, I fear... That... Your servant," he paused for a moment then continued, "Your Majesty... Your Majesty just woke up, and did not change clothes..."
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This time Silvia suddenly became embarrassed, hurriedly pulled the hem on her collar and the blankets, covering all parts below the neck.
 
This time Silvia suddenly became embarrassed, hurriedly pulled the hem on her collar and the blankets, covering all parts below the neck.
   
"T-This you don't have to mind... starting today you will be working as a guard inside the Palace, don't mind the little details."
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"T-This you don't have to mind... starting today you will be working as a guard inside the Palace, don't mind the little things."
   
 
Silvia despite being aware that her voice was slightly pitched, could not suppress it. The knight then looked up, gazing into Silvia eyes but inexplicably showing sadness.
 
Silvia despite being aware that her voice was slightly pitched, could not suppress it. The knight then looked up, gazing into Silvia eyes but inexplicably showing sadness.
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"Name?"
 
"Name?"
   
"This humble servant is your vassal of lower nobility from Geriou - son of Geminiani, Giulio."
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"This humble servant is your vassal of lower nobility from Geriou - Geminiani's son, named Giulio."
   
"I heard that you were recommended by the Emperor and Lord Galerius... You've seen my father?"
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"I heard that you were recommended by father and Lord Galerius... You've seen father?"
   
 
"Yes. However because of the Emperor's slight illness, this humble servant couldn't stay for long in his presence, but received instructions to come here directly to protect the Queen."
 
"Yes. However because of the Emperor's slight illness, this humble servant couldn't stay for long in his presence, but received instructions to come here directly to protect the Queen."
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The three Shrine Maidens did not know what to do, their faces were filled with doubts, hesitating to leave the two of them alone. But Silvia glared at them once, and they left in a panic after nodding. Silvia had found that, because of the pain in her body, both her attitude and way of speaking appeared very intolerant. It seemed like the medicine was really useful.
 
The three Shrine Maidens did not know what to do, their faces were filled with doubts, hesitating to leave the two of them alone. But Silvia glared at them once, and they left in a panic after nodding. Silvia had found that, because of the pain in her body, both her attitude and way of speaking appeared very intolerant. It seemed like the medicine was really useful.
   
Silvia switched her view back to Giulio, his eyes could not help but form tears -- What is this? Is this man really a spy... she could not help but suspect this until now - however it seemed like he might even be hesitant of plucking out a flower, a spy...
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Silvia switched her view back to Giulio, his eyes could not help but form tears -- what is this? Is this man really a spy... she could not help but suspect this until now - however it seemed like he might even be hesitant of plucking out a flower, a spy...
   
 
"I ask you, before you received this task, what were you doing?"
 
"I ask you, before you received this task, what were you doing?"
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This question makes Giulio's face a little disappointed, as if he wanted to hear that his previous work was not a problem.
 
This question makes Giulio's face a little disappointed, as if he wanted to hear that his previous work was not a problem.
   
"This humble servant originally served as a swordsmanship adviser at Elleweleos township, in His Highness's Crown forces."
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"This humble servant originally served as a swordsmanship adviser at Elleweleos township in His Highness Crown forces."
   
He was previously a swordsmanship adviser, responsible for training the Palace Guards as well as the Holy Kingdom troops. It was a very important position, and didn't think that young people like him could take up the post. She then remembered, the swordsmanship instructor for the Emperor was a very bold and uninhibited man, leaving most of the work to his disciples as he went and traveled the world, Giulio is probably one of that man's disciples.
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He was previously a swordsmanship adviser, responsible for training the Palace Guards as well as the Holy Kingdom troops, it was a very important position, and didn't think that young people like him could take up the post. She then remembered, the swordsmanship instructor for the Emperor was a very bold and uninhibited man, leaving most of the work to his disciples he went and traveled the world, Giulio is probably one of that man's disciples.
   
 
--Why would father and Galerius send such an important figure to be my Guardian knight? Is there some secret in the palace that they want to learn of...
 
--Why would father and Galerius send such an important figure to be my Guardian knight? Is there some secret in the palace that they want to learn of...
   
"... I have Dushanda's blessing and can foresee any life-threatening danger, so I do not need any Guardian knight. You know of this, do you not?"
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"... I have Dushanda's blessing and can foresee any life-threatening danger, so I do not need any Guardian knight. You know this, do you not?"
   
Silvia asked something that was already known. This person was once a Shrine Maiden that served in the royal court, he must know of this matter.
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Silvia asked something already known. This person was once a Shrine Maiden that served in the royal court, he must know of this matter.
   
"Your servant knows." Giulio said while placing his hand to his chest, face filled with grief. "But Your Majesty, when you have to make contact and obtain that knowledge, your body will be filled with pain."
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"Your servant knows." Giulio said while placing the hand to his chest, face filled with grief. "But Your Majesty, when you have to make contact and obtain that knowledge, your body will be filled with pain."
   
 
This sentence made Silvia's whole body heat up just a bit, eyes focused on Giulio.
 
This sentence made Silvia's whole body heat up just a bit, eyes focused on Giulio.
   
"Your servant, working as a Guardian knight, hopes to stay close to Her Majesty and ,even if only a little bit, share the pain."
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"Your servant working as a Guardian knight, hope to stay close to Her Majesty and even if only a little bit share the pain."
   
 
(Sharing - my pain?)
 
(Sharing - my pain?)
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She had never heard anything like this, not to mention the phrase just now was said from a warrior's mouth ...
 
She had never heard anything like this, not to mention the phrase just now was said from a warrior's mouth ...
   
"Your humble servant will from now on live in the palace, and in the future during the Holy Patrol, Your Holy Majesty will on occasion share the company of your humble servant, if Your Majesty would please grant this.' Giulio knelled and touched his forehead to the ground in an expression of deep respect. "This humble servant will be inseparable from Your Majesty and shall never once complain."
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"Your humble servant will from now on live in the palace, and in the future during the Holy Patrol, Your Holy Majesty will on the occasion share the company of your humble servant, if Your Majesty can please grant this.' Giulio knelled and touched his forehead to the ground in expression of deep respect. "This humble servant will be inseparable from Your Majesty and never complain."
   
 
Silvia's brain was filled with confusing thoughts.
 
Silvia's brain was filled with confusing thoughts.
   
The so-called Holy Patrol, was the Queen visiting the places of the Kingdom, to determine whether a natural disaster, rebellion or criminal activity was going to happen. This time around, due to the deterioration of her health, it was suspended. But the three houses still went before the Emperor to call for Silvia to resume this activity.
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The so-called Holy Patrol, was the Queen visiting the places of the Kingdom, to determine whether a natural disaster, rebellion or criminal activity was going to happen. This time around due to the deterioration of her health it was suspended. But the three houses still went before the Emperor to call for Silvia to resume this activity.
   
 
(This is a man my father sent... I must not neglect to take precautions.)
 
(This is a man my father sent... I must not neglect to take precautions.)
   
Silvia secretly told herself, and clamped down on her clothes and bedding. She nodded and managed to squeeze out in a small voice, to respond: "I understand, you can stand down. "
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Silvia secretly told herself, and clamped down on the clothes and bedding. She nodded and managed to squeeze out in a small voice, to respond: "I understand, you can stand down. "
   
However, Giulio heard the words but did not do so, still kneeling, he stared up at Silvia. His gaze deeply puncturing Silvia's heart, making her unable to look him in the eyes -- Why, why does this man seem to want to see me cry...
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However, Giulio heard the words but did not do so, still kneeling, he stared up at Silvia. His gaze deeply punctured Silvia's heart, making her unable to look him in the eyes -- why, why does this man seem to want to see me crying...
   
 
"What's wrong? Did I not ask you to stand down?"
 
"What's wrong? Did I not ask you to stand down?"
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"This humble servant would like to ask, Your Highness who is now in pain, is there nothing this humble servant can do to help?"
 
"This humble servant would like to ask, Your Highness who is now in pain, is there nothing this humble servant can do to help?"
   
Silvia could not help but swallow a deep breath, she had been discovered by him, that there was suffering throughout her body. He found out... Why? How does he know? Does he know that the Queen because of her Oracle powers, must live in pain all day -- impossible, even if he went to the Theological Academy, they would not have told the Shrine Maidens such a thing...
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Silvia could not help but swallow a deep breath, she had been discovered by him, that there was suffering throughout her body, he found out... why? How does he know? Does he know that the Queen because of her Oracle powers, must live in pain all day -- impossible, even if he went to the Theological Academy, they would not have told the Shrine Maidens such a thing...
   
 
-- Did he notice my pain, just by looking at my reactions...
 
-- Did he notice my pain, just by looking at my reactions...
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Silvia quickly shook her head, disposing of the idea that came to her mind.
 
Silvia quickly shook her head, disposing of the idea that came to her mind.
   
"Nothing ... if something happens I will call for you."
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"Nothing ... if something happens I'll call you."
   
"This humble servant will attend at any moment!"
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"This humble servant will attend at any time!"
   
Giulio's voice was filled with joy, so hyper that it made Silvia puzzled.
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Giulio's voice was filled with joy, so hyper it made Silvia puzzled.
   
 
She watched Giulio's back as he left and closed the decorated stone door. Silvia then buried her face in the bed. Before long, she found her body in pain, this Knight inexplicably left doubts in her mind.
 
She watched Giulio's back as he left and closed the decorated stone door. Silvia then buried her face in the bed. Before long, she found her body in pain, this Knight inexplicably left doubts in her mind.
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Galerius slightly lifted his sight, hills overlooking the river and on the other side the beautiful streets-cape of the Holy Capital. Here is the Holy Capital perimeter defensive positions - Hadrianous military fortress. There are now tens of thousands of Holy Kingdom armed forces, laid out for the Kingdom wartime alert.
 
Galerius slightly lifted his sight, hills overlooking the river and on the other side the beautiful streets-cape of the Holy Capital. Here is the Holy Capital perimeter defensive positions - Hadrianous military fortress. There are now tens of thousands of Holy Kingdom armed forces, laid out for the Kingdom wartime alert.
   
"Lord Galerius, I apologize, you must be busy."
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"Lord Galerius, I'm sorry, you must be busy."
   
 
Galerius looked back in the direction of the sound. A tall figure was coming from the observation deck towards him. This man has a boxy face, a pair of sharp eyes, body armor outside covered with a purple cape. He is a Royal Consort-Lucius.
 
Galerius looked back in the direction of the sound. A tall figure was coming from the observation deck towards him. This man has a boxy face, a pair of sharp eyes, body armor outside covered with a purple cape. He is a Royal Consort-Lucius.
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"It is the first time I see you wearing armor like this, it really doesn't suit you." Galerius grunted with ridicule.
 
"It is the first time I see you wearing armor like this, it really doesn't suit you." Galerius grunted with ridicule.
   
"Isn't it also valid for Lord Galerius as well? Your body is no longer suitable to wearing this kind of armor."
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"Isn't it also valid for Lord Galerius also? Your body is no longer suitable to wearing this kind of armor."
   
 
Lucius choked on his laughter, Galerius inspected himself revealing a wry-smile under his purple shawl. He had once more put on his armor, after many decades. The three Grand Duke Houses, in order to increase their prestige, had always had their Grand Dukes serve as generals in the army, it was almost an obligation. But in fact during the last few years, because Cornelius was specialized in military strategy, almost all the work in this area was left to him.
 
Lucius choked on his laughter, Galerius inspected himself revealing a wry-smile under his purple shawl. He had once more put on his armor, after many decades. The three Grand Duke Houses, in order to increase their prestige, had always had their Grand Dukes serve as generals in the army, it was almost an obligation. But in fact during the last few years, because Cornelius was specialized in military strategy, almost all the work in this area was left to him.
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"At present I'm not able to wear it?" Galerius unconsciously sighed.
 
"At present I'm not able to wear it?" Galerius unconsciously sighed.
   
"It's merely a ceremony to assume command, why wear one so heavy?" Lucius asked.
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"It's merely a ceremony to assume command, why have one so heavy?" Lucius asked.
   
"It's not just the ceremony, I just thought the general should look like this, that it would raise the morale."
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"It's not just the ceremony, I just thought the general should look like this, it would raise the morale."
   
 
Galerius said this in spite of Lucius attendants being present, he made no secret of his discontent. In fact the negative comments regarding the general succession had already got out, so there was no need to fear anything.
 
Galerius said this in spite of Lucius attendants being present, he made no secret of his discontent. In fact the negative comments regarding the general succession had already got out, so there was no need to fear anything.
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So Dirogne had won and became the patriarch in an important position, he became the Grand Duke of the House and began to display his arrogance.
 
So Dirogne had won and became the patriarch in an important position, he became the Grand Duke of the House and began to display his arrogance.
   
"I heard this of that man's outrageous practices, he even gives the Senate a headache -- he seems to have went to them and asked for titles and the like."
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"I heard this of man's outrageous practices, he even gives the Senate a headache -- he seems to have went to them and asked for titles and the like."
   
 
"Oh? I also heard that he asked for the Imperial Capital to be moved." Lucius tone sounded like he was enjoying himself.
 
"Oh? I also heard that he asked for the Imperial Capital to be moved." Lucius tone sounded like he was enjoying himself.

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