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== Tsukkomi ==

Tsukkomi is best interpreted as a jab at something. It's not as complicated as I've seen some comments about it. I'm sure you guys already know what it is, but I'll just explain just in case. It's basically where one butts in and makes corrections to someone's stupid mistake or statement.

Example: Kotomi tells Tomoya that it's okay for students of this school to come to the library freely. He thinks:
今は閉室時間だろとか、そもそも今日は学校休みだろとか、ツッコミたいことは山ほどあったが、問題はそこじゃない。
*Wouldn't you think that: Mountains of corrections such as 'isn't it supposed to be closed' and 'school is not even active today' came to mind, but that wasn't the problem.
*Sounds a lot better than: There are mountains of tsukkomi I could do such as 'isn't it supposed to be closed' and 'school is not even active today' but that wasn't the problem.

Discuss!
:That's fine for me. We could use some proper replacement with the tsukkomi lines to make the translation clear, like the one I did with SEEN4506 :3<br><br>
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:<0187> \{Kyou} "Saying such easygoing words would someday make this place a gathering spot for some other club." *
:// Not sure with this line though @_@ -DGreater1
:// \{杏}「そんな悠長なこと言ってるから、ここはいつまで経っても変な部外者のたまり場なのよ」
:<0188> \{\m{B}} "Can I butt in with '\bDon't say that.'?"\u
:// \{\m{B}}「『おまえが言うな』ってツッコんでもいいか？」
:<0189> \{Kyou} "I'll retaliate with '\bYou too.'"\u
:// \{杏}「『あんたもね』ってツッコミかえすわよ？」
:<0190> \{\m{B}} "........."
:// \{\m{B}}「………」
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:The next question is, are we going to replace every tsukkomi lines so it would work with the line or only those that need a clear interpretation? Like for example, Line 0307 of SEEN4418, Line 0079, 0101, 0318 of SEEN4419. We might end up completely eliminating the essence of tsukkomi in exchange for clear interpretation if we change every tsukkomi lines though. And there's discussion problem too @_@, only a few of us might discuss this problem... -DGreater1

:: I'm fine with it given that not only is it very implicit, but there are notations that make it obvious.  If we all remember, there's some line when Tomoya is talking to Kotomi and he asks himself, will I always be the tsukkomi?  So even if all the lines use it without actually saying it, since you don't usually say tsukkomi within a tsukkomi, there are portions that specificially state it. There's also the effects of sudden responses, which Kyou does, or the quotations with the bolding emphasis. If anything, if the tsukkomi replacement is losing essence, then provide it on the first tsukkomi line or so. Does a problem occur, we'll just adjust accordingly. I mean, things like the urate chop won't be changed, I believe. -Amoirsp