Editing User talk:Dark Kaito (section)

== Editing Mushoku Tensei, Volume 6 ==

Hi [[User: Dark Kaito|Dark Kaito]],

Since I'm editing volume 6, I figure I'll put my questionable edits directly here, as opposed to the Mushoku Tensei Chapter Talk page/or with '''(!)''' all over as I have been doing... If you'd like this done in a different way (through email, google doc page, pastebin, or whatever) I'm open to it.

FYI the format is as follows:

Original Japanese Text

Original Translation

My (questionable) edit


====Web Chapter 52====

=====Part 2=====


一気に強国へとのし上がった国だ。

they pushed through to become a strong kingdom all at once.

they became the dominant economic power and rapidly expanded to become a strong kingdom.

=====Part 4=====
というような感じで絡んできて、ワンパンで沈む

Those who got involved with that sort of feeling usually ended up falling with one punch.

Those who pick a fight like that usually end up falling in one punch.

====Web Chapter 53====

=====Part 1=====
シーローン王国は、途中で立ち寄った二国同様、王竜王国の属国みたいなものだ。

The Shirone Kingdom is one of the countries you stop by on the way, same as the other two kingdoms, it's like a vassal kingdom to the Dragon King Kingdom.

If you were to stop by the Shirone Kingdom on the way to the Dragon King Kingdom it's like the other two kingdoms, a vassal state.

=====Part 2=====

位置的に離れているためか、それとも紛争地帯の防波堤として役だっているためか。

In order to keep the location a bit separated otherwise it acted as a breakwater for the strife zone.

This location was kept a bit separate to act as a buffer to the strife zone.

あるいは休耕しているのか、クローバーのような牧草の植えられた区画。

Possibly it was left to fallow, there was an area that had something like clovers and grass.

I haven't tried to edit this- "fallow" would mean plowed but not cultivated, but it's just... really antiquated English.

====Misc Notes====

Vassal Kingdom doesn't actually exist. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vassal_state Vassal state] is the correct term, although [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Protectorate protectorate] is the more modern term.


--[[User:DaiZzed|DaiZzed]] ([[User talk:DaiZzed|talk]])