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"Yoshii! Kinoshita's troop started the fight with Class D in the corridor!"
 
"Yoshii! Kinoshita's troop started the fight with Class D in the corridor!"
   
With her ponytail swinging behind her, Shimada, who was placed in the same troop <!-- Mangaexpert: Maybe its just me, but does anyone else think that using troop here is kind of weird? I feel this inexplicable urge to just change it to squad, or unit, or something. Or perhaps its better just to change all the troop to troops? --> I was, ran towards me. Under careful observation, you could see that she was tall, with long legs, so why doesn't she look like a girl? Which part of her was wrong?
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With her ponytail swinging behind her, the person running towards me was Shimada, who was placed in the same troop as me. Under careful observation, you could see that she was tall, with long legs, so why doesn't she look like a girl? Which part of her was wrong?
   
 
"Ah, maybe it's the flat chest?"
 
"Ah, maybe it's the flat chest?"
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"L-Let's just stop there. We need to focus on the War!"
 
"L-Let's just stop there. We need to focus on the War!"
   
The troop that was fighting on the frontlines was the vanguard led by Kinoshita. The backup troop we're in was located between the frontlines and Class F. I don't remember accepting an offer to be troop leader, but now I have to take the responsibility to lead everyone, so I need to focus.
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The troop that's fighting on the frontlines was the vanguard led by Kinoshita. The backup troop we're in was located between the frontlines and Class F. I don't remember accepting an offer to be troop leader, but now I have to take the responsibility to lead everyone, so I need to focus.
   
 
First, we need to get a feel for the atmosphere of battle. If I listen closely, I think I can hear sounds of battle coming from the vanguard troop.
 
First, we need to get a feel for the atmosphere of battle. If I listen closely, I think I can hear sounds of battle coming from the vanguard troop.
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"You coward!"
 
"You coward!"
   
She used the hidden art that attacks both eyes!
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She used the hidden art that attacked both eyes!
   
 
"Ow, my eyes!"
 
"Ow, my eyes!"
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Was the pain in my eyes necessary to clear my mind? If she wanted to say something like this, she should have just punched or slapped me instead of stabbing my eyes!
 
Was the pain in my eyes necessary to clear my mind? If she wanted to say something like this, she should have just punched or slapped me instead of stabbing my eyes!
   
"Listen up, Yoshii. Our mission is to back up Kinoshita's vanguard troop, right? During the time they're replenishing their test scores, we need to hold the front line. If our troop runs away from our important mission, the vanguard troop won't be able to replenish their scores smoothly."
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"Listen up, Yoshii. Our mission is to back up Kinoshita's vanguard troop, right? During the time when they're replenishing their test scores, we need to hold the front line. If our troop runs away from our important mission, then they won't be able to replenish their scores smoothly."
   
 
It was rare to see Shimada give a serious opinion.
 
It was rare to see Shimada give a serious opinion.
   
What she just said is true; the mission we carried was very important. Our performance could greatly affect the result of this War. Instead, I was thinking about running away just because I was afraid of suffering from a remedial...
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What she just said is true; the mission we carried is very important. Our performance could greatly affect the result of this War. Instead, I was thinking about running away just because I was afraid of suffering from a remedial...
   
 
Shimada, you are so brave! I don't know why, but I'm even shedding tears (maybe from the pain of being stabbed?).
 
Shimada, you are so brave! I don't know why, but I'm even shedding tears (maybe from the pain of being stabbed?).
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"I'm sorry, I was wrong. I'll throw away the fear of the remedial room, and focus on winning the fight."
 
"I'm sorry, I was wrong. I'll throw away the fear of the remedial room, and focus on winning the fight."
   
"Good. I don't think we have anything to worry about, though. Although we may be weak in fighting one-on-one, fighting together against one enemy at a time should be fine."
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"Good. About this, I don't think we have anything to worry about. Although we may be weak in fighting one-on-one, fighting together against one enemy at a time should be fine."
   
 
That's right. Even though we have lower scores, it's not the deciding factor in the War. Depending on our tactics, we may still have a good chance of winning this War.
 
That's right. Even though we have lower scores, it's not the deciding factor in the War. Depending on our tactics, we may still have a good chance of winning this War.
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2. A student may have only one Being. The strength of a student's Being is equal to their last test score. The cumulative score is the sum of every subject's latest test score.
 
2. A student may have only one Being. The strength of a student's Being is equal to their last test score. The cumulative score is the sum of every subject's latest test score.
   
3. A student's score will be reduced proportionally to the strength that their Being loses in the fight. Once a student's score is reduced to zero, their Being will die and they will receive remedial classes in the remedial room.
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3. A student's score will be reduced proportional to the strength that their Being loses in the fight. Once a student's score is reduced to zero, their Being will die and they will receive remedial classes in the remedial room.
   
 
4. A student may replenish their score infinitely as long as their Being is not dead.
 
4. A student may replenish their score infinitely as long as their Being is not dead.
   
5. If a student fails to perform the summoning after their opponent summons their Being, that student will be considered as forfeiting the fight, and therefore will receive remedial classes in the remedial room as punishment.
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5. If a student fails to perform the summoning after their opponent summons their Being, that student will be considered forfeiting the fight, and therefore will receive remedial classes in the remedial room as punishment.
   
 
6. The valid range in which a Being can be summoned is a circle with a radius of ten meters from the supervising teacher (may vary between teachers).
 
6. The valid range in which a Being can be summoned is a circle with a radius of ten meters from the supervising teacher (may vary between teachers).
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Shimada and I sneaked through the corridor and headed towards the corner.
 
Shimada and I sneaked through the corridor and headed towards the corner.
   
Everyone, look! These was the heroics of the backup troop leader and his subordinates.
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Everyone, look! This was the heroics of the backup troop leader and his subordinates.
   
 
"Ah, isn't the one sneaking over there my Onee-sama from Class F? Mr. Igarashi, hurry here!"
 
"Ah, isn't the one sneaking over there my Onee-sama from Class F? Mr. Igarashi, hurry here!"
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"Summon!"
 
"Summon!"
   
At Shimada's shout, a magical circle with some geometric shapes was formed below her feet. This was proof of activating the summoning system under a teacher's supervision. After that, her Being appeared.
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Along with Shimada's shout, a magical circle with some geometric shapes was formed below her feet. This was the proof of activating the summoning system under a teacher's supervision. After that, her Being appeared.
   
The Being that appeared, besides wearing a military uniform and wielding a military-styled sabre in its hand, had a ponytail and strong-looking eyes that were exactly like Shimada's, but its height was just around eighty centimeters. If I had to describe it in one sentence, it would be "the chibi version of Shimada Minami". And the opposing Being was also the chibi version of its owner, but it was holding a normal sword.
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The Being that appeared, besides wearing a military uniform and wielding a military-styled sabre in its hand, had a ponytail and strong-looking eyes that were exactly like Shimada's, but its height was just around eighty centimeters. If I put the description in one sentence, it would be "the chibi version of Shimada Minami". And the opposing Being was also the chibi version of its owner, but it was just holding a normal sword.
   
 
"I've been waiting for this moment for a long time ever since I was dumped by Onee-sama..."
 
"I've been waiting for this moment for a long time ever since I was dumped by Onee-sama..."
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"Miharu won't lose!"
 
"Miharu won't lose!"
   
Both Beings were channeling their forces through their swords. Even those who were watching the fight were thrilled.
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Both Beings were channelling their forces through their swords. Even those who were watching the fight were thrilled.
   
 
"Shimada, your opponent's score is higher; fighting head-on isn't good for you."
 
"Shimada, your opponent's score is higher; fighting head-on isn't good for you."
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"Onee-sama, this victory is mine."
 
"Onee-sama, this victory is mine."
   
The opponent's sword was held to Shimada's Being. If it was just the wrist or the leg being attacked, the score would only be reduced a little bit, but if the neck or the heart was stabbed, the Being would be dead- which would also mean that she'd be sent to the remedial room. Shimada couldn't move at all.
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The opponent's sword was held to Shimada's Being. If it was just the wrist or the leg being attacked, the score would only be reduced a little bit, but if the neck or the heart was stabbed, the Being would be dead- which would also mean that she'll be sent to the remedial room. Shimada couldn't move at all.
   
 
"N-No! I don't want to go to the remedial room!"
 
"N-No! I don't want to go to the remedial room!"
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"Onee-sama! Miharu will never give up! Don't think that you can graduate from this school safely!"
 
"Onee-sama! Miharu will never give up! Don't think that you can graduate from this school safely!"
   
After leaving some lines which were filled with dangerous words, Shimizu was forcefully sent to the remedial room.
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After leaving some lines which were filled with some dangerous meanings, Shimizu was forcefully sent to the remedial room.
   
From many different points of view, this really was a dangerous duel.
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In many different points of view, this really was a dangerous duel.
   
 
"Yoshii."
 
"Yoshii."
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"...I don't remember doing such a thing."
 
"...I don't remember doing such a thing."
   
This really was a battlefield. The killing intent made my skin hurt... but there was only Shimada behind me.
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This really was a battlefield. The presence of killing made my skin hurt... but there was only Shimada behind me.
   
 
"..."
 
"..."
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"Let me go, Sugawa! Yoshii! I will not forgive you!"
 
"Let me go, Sugawa! Yoshii! I will not forgive you!"
   
"Quick, quickly bring her back! I'm going to be killed by her scary glare!"
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"Quick, quickly bring her back! I'm going to be killed by her scary eyesight!"
   
 
"Wait, let go...! I'm going to kill you!"
 
"Wait, let go...! I'm going to kill you!"
   
After leaving some lines which were filled with some threatening words, the scary figure was taken away. For now, I am safe.
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After leaving some lines which were filled with some threatening meanings, the scary figure was taken away. For now, I am safe.
   
 
"Good. While Hideyoshi's troop is replenishing their scores, we need to hold the front line! We can't let the enemy take another step forward!"
 
"Good. While Hideyoshi's troop is replenishing their scores, we need to hold the front line! We can't let the enemy take another step forward!"
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Damn, the situation is worse than I thought.
 
Damn, the situation is worse than I thought.
   
I feel like requesting help from the main troop, but that would reduce the number of people needed to execute our plans. We can only rely on ourselves to hang on here!
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I feel like requesting help from the main troop, but that would reduce the number of people needed to execute our plans. We could only rely on ourselves to hang on here!
   
 
"Tell those around Mr. Fuse to stay in guarding status! Swap the guys around Mr. Igarashi with those fighting using their cumulative scores, make good use of time, and defeat the enemy! As for Toudou, I'm sorry, but we have to give up on him!"
 
"Tell those around Mr. Fuse to stay in guarding status! Swap the guys around Mr. Igarashi with those fighting using their cumulative scores, make good use of time, and defeat the enemy! As for Toudou, I'm sorry, but we have to give up on him!"
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"What are they waiting for?"
 
"What are they waiting for?"
   
Looking at our fighting methods, those in Class D should have started to realize what we were trying to do. That's not good; it's getting harder to carry out our mission now...
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Looking at our fighting methods, those in Class D should have started to realize what we were trying to do. That's not good; it was getting harder to carry out our mission now...
   
 
"Damn! The scout brought the report; Class F brought the World History teacher Mr. Tanaka here."
 
"Damn! The scout brought the report; Class F brought the World History teacher Mr. Tanaka here."
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Mathematics teacher Mr. Kiuchi had a strict marking standard, but his marking speed was very fast. It seemed that Class D was using a totally different tactic and wanted to finish us off quickly.
 
Mathematics teacher Mr. Kiuchi had a strict marking standard, but his marking speed was very fast. It seemed that Class D was using a totally different tactic and wanted to finish us off quickly.
   
However, to accomplish our mission, we couldn't be beaten so easily.
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However, to accomplish our mission, we mustn't be beaten so easily.
   
 
Yuuji entrusted only one mission to me: to maintain the front line, hold up the blockage line, and drag out the battle as long as possible, at least until those classes that were not involved in this War finished their classes.
 
Yuuji entrusted only one mission to me: to maintain the front line, hold up the blockage line, and drag out the battle as long as possible, at least until those classes that were not involved in this War finished their classes.
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"Oh, my spirit, I am so touched. I could never imagine that you would sacrifice so much for our class!"
 
"Oh, my spirit, I am so touched. I could never imagine that you would sacrifice so much for our class!"
   
The vanguard troop members were all really touched and crying; they even wanted to shake my hand to show their respects.
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The vanguard troop members were all being really touched and crying; they even wanted to shake my hand to show their respects.
   
 
No, that's not right! I never gave such a command!
 
No, that's not right! I never gave such a command!
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"Oi, did you hear the broadcast just now?"
 
"Oi, did you hear the broadcast just now?"
   
"Yeah. I didn't realize that Class F really wants to win this War."
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"Yeah. I didn't know that Class F really wants to win this War."
   
 
"Can we win against a class with such strong determination?"
 
"Can we win against a class with such strong determination?"
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Our side was able to temporarily fight against the enemy due to the morale boost. However, the lack of troop strength was starting to affect the situation; bad information was flowing back now.
 
Our side was able to temporarily fight against the enemy due to the morale boost. However, the lack of troop strength was starting to affect the situation; bad information was flowing back now.
   
Kudou and Morigawa were dead (sent to the remedial room), and now our number went down from originally eighteen people to only five. This was probably our limit.
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Kudou and Morigawa were dead now (sent to the remedial room), and now our number went down from originally eighteen people to only five. This was probably our limit.
   
 
"Akihisa, just hold on a little bit longer!"
 
"Akihisa, just hold on a little bit longer!"
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The voice of Class D's front line commander, Tsukamoto, was clear as well.
 
The voice of Class D's front line commander, Tsukamoto, was clear as well.
   
Damn! Even if Yuuji's troops were here, they were still far away from where I was. If we are defeated before they arrived, all of us will be sent to the remedial room!
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Damn! Even if Yuuji's troop was here, they were still far away from where I was. If we were defeated before they arrived, all of us will be sent to the remedial room!
   
 
"Nishimura Yuuichirou's dead!"
 
"Nishimura Yuuichirou's dead!"
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"Forward!"
 
"Forward!"
   
The enemy army was rushing at us fiercely; could it be that they also felt that it was an important time now?
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The enemy army was rushing to us fiercely; could it be that they also felt that it was an important time now?
   
   
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After defeating Shibazaki, Sasajima brought his Being and rushed towards me. I was in the range of summoning, and if I didn't summon my Being now, I would be sent to the remedial room.
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After defeating Shibazaki, Sasajima brought his Being and rushed towards me. I was in the range of summoning, and if I don't summon my Being now, I would be sent to the remedial room.
   
 
"Yoshii Akihisa! Your head is mine!"
 
"Yoshii Akihisa! Your head is mine!"
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"But it was so cool... Onee-sama..."
 
"But it was so cool... Onee-sama..."
   
...I think I did something that can't be settled by the breaking of only one or two ribs.
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...I think I had done something that couldn't be settled by the breaking of only one or two ribs.
   
 
I-I am sorry, Shimada. I won't let your sacrifice go in vain!
 
I-I am sorry, Shimada. I won't let your sacrifice go in vain!
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"Did you hear the school broadcast?"
 
"Did you hear the school broadcast?"
   
"Yeah, I heard it very clearly."
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"Yeah, I listened to it very clearly."
   
 
Just as I thought, he was laughing at my misfortune! Unforgivable!
 
Just as I thought, he was laughing at my misfortune! Unforgivable!
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"Didn't he come back a while ago?"
 
"Didn't he come back a while ago?"
   
With respect to my determination to kill, Yuuji said something out of my expectations.
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With respect to my determination to kill, Yuuji said something out of my expectation.
   
 
Ohhh! He came back? I felt my heart beating very fast!
 
Ohhh! He came back? I felt my heart beating very fast!
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"Are you going to kill him?"
 
"Are you going to kill him?"
   
Ah, Sugawa... I want, I want to see you soon.
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Ah, Sugawa... I want, I want to see you sooner.
   
 
"By the way, I have something that I forgot to tell you."
 
"By the way, I have something that I forgot to tell you."
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Since I couldn't kill Yuuji, I'll just do what I needed to do in this War.
 
Since I couldn't kill Yuuji, I'll just do what I needed to do in this War.
   
I quickly ran towards Hiraga. Luckily there was the Modern Japanese teacher Ms. Takeuchi and the Traditional Japanese teacher Mr. Mukai there, so even if I couldn't finish him in one hit, I could still do some decent damage to him!
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I quickly ran towards Hiraga. Luckily there was the Modern Japanese teacher Ms. Takeuchi and the Traditional Japanese teacher Mr. Mukai there, so even if I couldn't finish him in one hit, I can still do some decent damage to him!
   
 
"Mr. Mukai! Yoshii from Class F will-"
 
"Mr. Mukai! Yoshii from Class F will-"

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