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| == Page 11 (Really love this) ==
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| I'm trying to think of some way of somehow carry over the ambiguous meaning behind the (本当に好きなんだな） line over to English, since the current one (Really love this) really sounds out of place and awkward, but if you add anything it's hard to connect with the line immediately after. I'm thinking that there's no need to translate the next part over literally. Maybe something like: <br \>
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| :(She really loves this) However, the thought was not regarding the walk through the park. What this thought was referring to was rather - Shana's love for melon bread.<br \>
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| But then this loses the relationship stuff. So... anyone else have other ideas? --[[User:Jonathanasdf|Jonathanasdf]] 07:27, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
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| How about (She really like it, aren't she?) --[[User:LiTTleDRAgo|LiTTleDRAgo]] 02:52, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
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| Figured it out. (This really is love) works very well. --[[User:Jonathanasdf|Jonathanasdf]] 06:42, 3 March 2011 (UTC
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| == Page 13 (...and as for her companion... well, it did not feel that bad.) ==
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| The current translation doesn't really make all that much sense to me. This is how I interpreted the line:<br \>
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| :Well, it didn't feel bad bringing her on this trip after seeing the joyous mood she was giving off. <br \>
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| What do others think?
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| Edit: this seems better
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| :Feeling the joyous aura emanating from Shana during this trip, Yuuji didn't feel bad accompanying her.
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| --[[User:Jonathanasdf|Jonathanasdf]] 00:53, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
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| == Inconsistency with the season??? ==
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| So the very first line says that it's early Summer. But then there's dried brown leaves on the benches. No matter how strong the sun is it cannot cause leaves to fall during early Summer... And there is no way that last year's fallen leaves can remain on the benches of a public park for over half a year. So what the heck :\ --[[User:Jonathanasdf|Jonathanasdf]] 05:09, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
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| Blame the author XD --[[User:LiTTleDRAgo|LiTTleDRAgo]] 06:13, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
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| lol another one: the line (悠二は、威嚇も顕な宣言に呆れ声で返し、頬杖お付いた。) really is weird... they're sitting on a park bench without armrests (if you look at the picture you'll notice that) so how can you rest your cheeks on your hands? Your elbow has nowhere to be placed on, and it's really weird if you just place your hands on your cheeks with your elbow in the air. --[[User:Jonathanasdf|Jonathanasdf]] 07:51, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
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| == Page 17 (それ以外の面では、眉唾物の知識、あるいは全くの無知を曝け出す） ==
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| I don't understand the Japanese here nor do I understand LiTTleDRAgo's translation so... someone help? :D --[[User:Jonathanasdf|Jonathanasdf]] 08:37, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
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