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|「お父さん、いいじゃありませんか。<br>こうしてお友達が雪菜のために一生懸命…」
|「お父さん、いいじゃありませんか。<br>こうしてお友達が雪菜のために一生懸命…」
|"Isn't that fine, dear? Setsuna's friends are doing their best for her..."
|"Isn't that fine, dear? Setsuna's friends are doing their best for her..."
|Literally "Father" but kinda awkward in English – It's just a JP thing. This is fine.
|}}
|}}


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|46|雪菜|Setsuna
|46|雪菜|Setsuna
|「し…信頼してるんだね」
|「し…信頼してるんだね」
|"Y, you sure have confidence in him."
|"Y-you sure have confidence in him."
|}}
|}}


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|53|春希|Haruki
|53|春希|Haruki
|「そ、そうだなぁ…でっけ～」
|「そ、そうだなぁ…でっけ～」
|"Y, you're right... It's huuge..."
|"Y-you're right... It's huuge..."
|}}
|}}


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|73|武也|Takeya
|73|武也|Takeya
|「あ、ああ…にしてもなぁ…」
|「あ、ああ…にしてもなぁ…」
|"Y, yeah... Still, man..."
|"Y-yeah... Still, man..."
|}}
|}}


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|100|武也|Takeya
|100|武也|Takeya
|「お、おい、春希？<br>今、あのコ、俺に感謝したぞ…？」
|「お、おい、春希？<br>今、あのコ、俺に感謝したぞ…？」
|"H, hey, Haruki? Did, did she just... thank me...?"
|"H-hey, Haruki? Did, did she just... thank me...?"
|}}
|}}


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|107|雪菜|Setsuna
|107|雪菜|Setsuna
|「曲を増やしすぎて、<br>１つ１つがおろそかになっても本末転倒だしね」
|「曲を増やしすぎて、<br>１つ１つがおろそかになっても本末転倒だしね」
|"And if we add too many songs and start neglecting some of them then there'd be no point to adding them in the first place."
|"And if we add too many songs and start neglecting some of them then there'd be no point in adding them in the first place."
|Should it be "point in adding them"?}}
|Should it be "point in adding them"?}}


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|130|武也|Takeya
|130|武也|Takeya
|「お、小木曽ちゃんの声だと…」
|「お、小木曽ちゃんの声だと…」
|"With, O, Ogiso-chan's voice..."
|"With, O-Ogiso-chan's voice..."
|}}
|}}


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|177|かずさ|Kazusa
|177|かずさ|Kazusa
|「っ、く、くく…っ、<br>ほ、本当に…本当にいいんだな、北原？」
|「っ、く、くく…っ、<br>ほ、本当に…本当にいいんだな、北原？」
|"Heh, ha, hahaha...! Y, you're... Really okay with this, right, Kitahara?"
|"Heh, ha, hahaha...! Y-you're... Really okay with this, right, Kitahara?"
|}}
|}}


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|184|春希|Haruki
|184|春希|Haruki
|「あ、ああ…」
|「あ、ああ…」
|"O, okay...?"  
|"O-okay...?"  
|}}
|}}


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|今年からギターを始めた、<br>素人に毛の生えた程度の人間がこれに挑むなんて、<br>どこのイカロスさんだよ…
|今年からギターを始めた、<br>素人に毛の生えた程度の人間がこれに挑むなんて、<br>どこのイカロスさんだよ…
|An amateur like me who only started playing the guitar this year to tackle this so ambitiously... Who do they think I am, Icarus?
|An amateur like me who only started playing the guitar this year to tackle this so ambitiously... Who do they think I am, Icarus?
|See: <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Icarus">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Icarus</a>
|See: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Icarus
|}}
|}}


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|こんな難曲、挑戦する前から<br>脂汗で蝋の羽が溶けてしまいそうだ。
|こんな難曲、挑戦する前から<br>脂汗で蝋の羽が溶けてしまいそうだ。
|The wax wings on my back would melt away from my own cold sweat before I could even challenge such a difficult song.
|The wax wings on my back would melt away from my own cold sweat before I could even challenge such a difficult song.
|See: <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Icarus">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Icarus</a>
|See: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Icarus
|}}
|}}


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|216|春希|Haruki
|216|春希|Haruki
|「い、いや、待てよ…」
|「い、いや、待てよ…」
|"W, well, wait a second..."
|"W-well, wait a second..."
|}}
|}}


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|224|春希|Haruki
|224|春希|Haruki
|「お、小木曽…」
|「お、小木曽…」
|"O, Ogiso..."
|"O-Ogiso..."
|}}
|}}


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|228|春希|Haruki
|228|春希|Haruki
|「と、冬馬…<br>何とか言ってくれ」
|「と、冬馬…<br>何とか言ってくれ」
|"T, Touma... say something, would you?"
|"T-Touma... say something, would you?"
|}}
|}}


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|240|春希|Haruki
|240|春希|Haruki
|「ま、待て冬馬！　お前、プライドはどこへ行った？<br>いつもの、音楽に対して妥協を許さないスタンスは…」
|「ま、待て冬馬！　お前、プライドはどこへ行った？<br>いつもの、音楽に対して妥協を許さないスタンスは…」
|"W, wait Touma! What happened to your pride? I thought you had a stance never to give into anything when it comes to music..."
|"W-wait Touma! What happened to your pride? I thought you had a stance never to give into anything when it comes to music..."
|}}
|}}


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|251|春希|Haruki
|251|春希|Haruki
|「い、いや、だって…あれぇ？」
|「い、いや、だって…あれぇ？」
|"W, well, wait... huuh?"
|"W-well, wait... huuh?"
|}}
|}}


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|281|春希|Haruki
|281|春希|Haruki
|「あ、ああ…<br>また月曜日」
|「あ、ああ…<br>また月曜日」
|"Y, yeah... See you on Monday."
|"Y-yeah... See you on Monday."
|}}
|}}


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|302||
|302||
|あれからかなりの上達を見せた俺は、<br>…今は５秒の壁に果敢に挑んでいる。
|あれからかなりの上達を見せた俺は、<br>…今は５秒の壁に果敢に挑んでいる。
|The valiant progress I'd been making thus far... Came down to me hitting a wall at the solo's five-second mark.
|The valiant progress I'd been making thus far... came down to me hitting a wall at the solo's five-second mark.
|}}
|}}


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|323|春希|Haruki
|323|春希|Haruki
|「…ちょっと返してくれ」
|「…ちょっと返してくれ」
|"...give me that for a sec"
|"...give me the guitar for a sec"
|It's the guitar he wants back, not the thought, but it's easily misunderstood the way it's written and considering the readers will only have his/her eyes on the text for a couple of seconds. Can it, and maybe line 1071 as well, be rewritten a little, to remove the possibility for misunderstanding?}}
|It's the guitar he wants back, not the thought, but it's easily misunderstood the way it's written and considering the readers will only have his/her eyes on the text for a couple of seconds. Can it, and maybe line 1071 as well, be rewritten a little, to remove the possibility for misunderstanding?}}


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|324|かずさ|Kazusa
|324|かずさ|Kazusa
|「あ、ああ…」
|「あ、ああ…」
|"Y, yeah..."
|"Y-yeah..."
|}}
|}}


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|333|春希|Haruki
|333|春希|Haruki
|「と…冬馬？」
|「と…冬馬？」
|"To... Touma?"
|"To, Touma?"
|}}
|}}


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|338|春希|Haruki
|338|春希|Haruki
|「あ、ああ」
|「あ、ああ」
|"O, okay."
|"O-okay."
|}}
|}}


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|407||
|407||
|そんな『本当の冬馬かずさ』を、<br>俺と小木曽だけが知っているなんてのは納得できない。
|そんな『本当の冬馬かずさ』を、<br>俺と小木曽だけが知っているなんてのは納得できない。
|I can't accept that Ogiso and I are the only ones who know "the true Touma Kazusa".
|I can't accept that Ogiso and I are the only ones who know the "true Touma Kazusa".
|}}
|}}


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|465|かずさ|Kazusa
|465|かずさ|Kazusa
|「それは…どうでもいいことだから」
|「それは…どうでもいいことだから」
|"It's... Really no big deal."
|"It's... really no big deal."
|}}
|}}


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|475|かずさ|Kazusa
|475|かずさ|Kazusa
|「そ、そう？」
|「そ、そう？」
|"R, really?"
|"R-really?"
|}}
|}}


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|477|かずさ|Kazusa
|477|かずさ|Kazusa
|「それは…そうなんだけど」
|「それは…そうなんだけど」
|"That's... True, yeah."
|"That's... true, yeah."
|}}
|}}


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|487|かずさ|Kazusa
|487|かずさ|Kazusa
|「あ、ああ…」
|「あ、ああ…」
|"Y, yeah..."
|"Y-yeah..."
|}}
|}}


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|531|春希|Haruki
|531|春希|Haruki
|「な、なに…？」
|「な、なに…？」
|"W, what?"
|"W-what?"
|}}
|}}


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|537|春希|Haruki
|537|春希|Haruki
|「い、い、い、いや…<br>そんなのは俺が一番よくわかってるけどさぁ…」
|「い、い、い、いや…<br>そんなのは俺が一番よくわかってるけどさぁ…」
|"E,er... Erm, I'm well aware of that myself..."
|"Eh, er... Erm, I'm well aware of that myself..."
|}}
|}}


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|543|春希|Haruki
|543|春希|Haruki
|「ご、ごめん…」
|「ご、ごめん…」
|"S, sorry..."
|"S-sorry..."
|}}
|}}


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|556|春希|Haruki
|556|春希|Haruki
|「お、おい、小木曽…」
|「お、おい、小木曽…」
|"H, hey, Ogiso...!"
|"H-hey, Ogiso...!"
|}}
|}}


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|603|春希|Haruki
|603|春希|Haruki
|「うわっ！？<br>や、夜分遅くすいません！」
|「うわっ！？<br>や、夜分遅くすいません！」
|"Uwaa!? S, sorry for calling this late at night!"
|"Uwaa!? S-sorry for calling this late at night!"
|}}
|}}


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|647|雪菜|Setsuna
|647|雪菜|Setsuna
|「か、か…かっこ悪いって…どこがよ！」
|「か、か…かっこ悪いって…どこがよ！」
|"W, w, what do you mean, 'uncool'?!"  
|"W-w-what do you mean, 'uncool'?!"  
|}}
|}}


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|674|春希|Haruki
|674|春希|Haruki
|「お、おい、小木曽…」
|「お、おい、小木曽…」
|"H, hey, Ogiso..."
|"H-hey, Ogiso..."
|}}
|}}


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|753|春希|Haruki
|753|春希|Haruki
|「お、小木曽…？」
|「お、小木曽…？」
|"O, Ogiso...?"
|"O-Ogiso...?"
|}}
|}}


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|754|雪菜|Setsuna
|754|雪菜|Setsuna
|「あ、ご、ごめんね。<br>お母さんがうるさくって」
|「あ、ご、ごめんね。<br>お母さんがうるさくって」
|"Ah, s, sorry. My mother's a real pain."
|"Ah, s-sorry. My mother's a real pain."
|}}
|}}


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|774|雪菜|Setsuna
|774|雪菜|Setsuna
|「うん………っ！？<br>ちょ、ちょっと待って！<br>あと一つだけ！」
|「うん………っ！？<br>ちょ、ちょっと待って！<br>あと一つだけ！」
|"Okay...?!<br>W, wait a minute! Just one more thing!"
|"Okay...?!<br>W-wait a minute! Just one more thing!"
|}}
|}}


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|776|雪菜|Setsuna
|776|雪菜|Setsuna
|「そ、それで、その…」
|「そ、それで、その…」
|"W, well, umm..."
|"W-well, umm..."
|}}
|}}


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|782|雪菜|Setsuna
|782|雪菜|Setsuna
|「だ、だから、えっと…」
|「だ、だから、えっと…」
|"W, well, umm..."
|"W-well, umm..."
|}}
|}}


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|788|雪菜|Setsuna
|788|雪菜|Setsuna
|「あ、あったの？」
|「あ、あったの？」
|"S, so there was something?"
|"S-so there was something?"
|}}
|}}


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|789|春希|Haruki
|789|春希|Haruki
|「ちょっ、ちょっと待て！<br>小木曽、それは妄想たくましすぎるって！<br>恥ずかしいなぁおい！」
|「ちょっ、ちょっと待て！<br>小木曽、それは妄想たくましすぎるって！<br>恥ずかしいなぁおい！」
|"W, wait a second there! You're letting your imagination run too wild, Ogiso! Don't embarrass me like that, come on!"
|"W-wait a second there! You're letting your imagination run too wild, Ogiso! Don't embarrass me like that, come on!"
|}}
|}}


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|790|雪菜|Setsuna
|790|雪菜|Setsuna
|「そ、そんなにあり得ないことかなぁ？<br>だって、二晩も一緒に…」
|「そ、そんなにあり得ないことかなぁ？<br>だって、二晩も一緒に…」
|"W, was it really that unlikely for it to happen? I mean, you stayed over for two nights..."
|"W-was it really that unlikely for it to happen? I mean, you stayed over for two nights..."
|}}
|}}


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|807|春希|Haruki
|807|春希|Haruki
|「な…なに？」
|「な…なに？」
|"W, what?"
|"W-what?"
|}}
|}}


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|809|雪菜|Setsuna
|809|雪菜|Setsuna
|「そ、それで、その…」
|「そ、それで、その…」
|"W, well, umm..."
|"W-well, umm..."
|}}
|}}


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|812|雪菜|Setsuna
|812|雪菜|Setsuna
|「わたしのことは、雪菜がいいからね」
|「わたしのことは、雪菜がいいからね」
|"From now on, you must call me Setsuna"
|"From now on, you must call me Setsuna."
|}}
|}}


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|817|春希|Haruki
|817|春希|Haruki
|「そ、そうか、それは良かっ…たのか悪かったのか」
|「そ、そうか、それは良かっ…たのか悪かったのか」
|"I, I see, that's gre... at, well, not really, actually?"
|"I-I see, that's gre... at, well, not really, actually?"
|}}
|}}


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|819|春希|Haruki
|819|春希|Haruki
|「そ、そう…」
|「そ、そう…」
|"I, I see..."
|"I-I see..."
|}}
|}}


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