Talk:Boku wa Tomodachi ga Sukunai: Volume 4 The Homoge Club

301. more in line with yukimura's speech style. although i think there's a better variant somewhere amidst the english language.

349. changed to Rika's exact quote.

379. 1) honestly, i'd not use "stuff" at all. shitty word, imho.
2) haha, well, i don't know, but i think i used the correct form of "future in the past". but this is nitpicking really. fascinating tense though))

461. mangling the structure like that is bad.

471. comma splice

487. mangling the structure like that is bad. really, stop it))

543. i'm not really sure. but "because" sounds weird.
--Idiffer 15:00, 19 February 2012 (CST)