Talk:Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter5

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I took a few liberties while editing this chapter to fix awkwardness, but hopefully no meaning was lost or changed. Additionally,

"...and her waist was decorated with a ribbon and seemed as frail as a fragile 'article'."

I don't think article would be the right word here. Unkani 00:04, 14 August 2011 (UCT)